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Chapter 4 - CHAPTER 3: THE ARCHITECT OF SCARS

​Night in London never offered true peace; it only provided a judging silence. Elena sat cross-legged on the floor of her Southwark flat, surrounded by sheets of tracing paper scattered like the ruins of a city recently bombed. The dim glow of her desk lamp was the only source of light, casting long, dancing shadows against the walls—shadows that seemed to mock the hollowness in her chest.

​She stared at the draft Arthur had brutally defaced earlier that morning. The black ink still looked like an unhealed wound. Arthur wanted stone. Arthur wanted isolation.

​Elena closed her eyes, and instantly, the biting London chill evaporated. It was replaced by the scent of petrichor and evaporating petrol—the unmistakable atmosphere of Jakarta.

​Jakarta, Seven Years Ago.

​It was a sweltering Tuesday, the kind of day where the heat felt like a physical weight. Elena sat in the back row of History class, pretending to take notes on a lecture that felt a century long. Under the desk, her fingers were busy dancing across her screen.

​Elena_J: "I hate this school. Why does everyone here act like they own the world just because they have blue eyes?"

​A sharp vibration hummed in her palm.

​A. Montgomery: "Including me?"

​Elena glanced toward the middle row, where Arthur sat perfectly upright, looking every bit the model student. No one knew they were conversing in a digital world.

​Elena_J: "You're the exception. But the others... ugh! I just saw my ex—that posh prick Oliver—parading his new girlfriend in the canteen. He's absolutely brainless."

​A. Montgomery: "He's the past, El. Don't let him rent space in your head."

​Elena_J: "You don't get it, Art. He's the reason I'll never trust guys like you again. Westerners are manipulative. They think because they have a sharp jawline and a posh accent, they can treat local girls like temporary souvenirs. I was stupid once. Never again."

​Elena typed with a burning fury. Oliver had shattered her confidence, leaving scars that felt like burns.

​Elena_J: "I'd much prefer a local lad. At least they know how to value a woman, rather than treating us like a checkbox on their 'Asian adventure' list."

​Arthur didn't reply for a long time. From the back, Elena saw his shoulders tighten.

​A. Montgomery: "So, you think I'd just view you as an 'adventure' too?"

​Elena_J: "It's not that... but you know the reputation. I just want to feel safe, Art. And safety doesn't come with someone who holds a passport from a different world."

​Elena had no idea that at that moment, Arthur was holding his breath. Her words about "local lads" and "Western pricks" hit him like a physical blow. He realized then that no matter how hard he tried to bridge the gap, in Elena's eyes, he was still part of the world she feared. Her mistrust was a fortress, and Arthur felt he would never be "enough" to scale its walls.

​Jakarta, Seven Years Ago.

​The History teacher was droning on about colonial trade routes, oblivious to the secret rebellion happening in the back row. Elena's phone buzzed again.

​Elena_J: "Art, I swear, Oliver just walked past the corridor in nothing but a string vest and basketball shorts. Does he think this is a beach in Bali? Why is their confidence so... unearned?"

​She glanced at Arthur. His back was shaking slightly. He was suppressing a laugh.

​A. Montgomery: "Perhaps he forgot his uniform. Or perhaps he simply wants to show the world his gym progress—which, from what I can see, is negligible."

​Elena_J: "Progress? He looks like a boiled noodle! That's why I'm done with expats. I'm going for the 'exotic' locals now. Someone who knows how to eat street food without getting a stomach ache."

​A. Montgomery: "I can eat level-five seblak without blinking, if that's the requirement."

​Elena_J: "Don't boast! You'd be crying for milk in two minutes. You look like a British prince who got lost in a flea market, Art. You're 'high maintenance'. I need someone who feels like home."

​Arthur didn't respond. He shoved his phone into his pocket with a sharp movement. Elena saw his ears turn a deep crimson. She wondered if she'd offended him, or if he was just tired of her rants.

​London, Present Day.

​Elena smiled bitterly at the memory as she sipped her jasmine tea—the only thing that tasted like home in this grey city.

​"A British prince lost in a flea market," she whispered. "Well, you found your palace, didn't you, Arthur? And you became the most insufferable 'Westerner' I've ever met."

​She turned back to her monitors. The anger from their meeting was fuel. She opened her design folders and began to draw. If Arthur wanted a fortress, she would give him one. But she would bury a secret in its foundations.

​She designed the facade with heavy, unforgiving Portland stone. But in the joints between the blocks, she hid intricate carvings—traditional Mega Mendung patterns, so subtle they were almost invisible to the naked eye. It was her way of saying: Here is the 'local' soul you tried to bury.

​As she worked, she blasted Indonesian Dangdut Koplo through her headphones. In the heart of aristocratic London, Elena was designing a multi-million-pound project while swaying to the beat of a Javanese drum.

​"Let him have his tower," she muttered. "But he'll never have my rhythm."

​07:45 AM.

​Elena stepped out of Canary Wharf station. Her eyes were bloodshot from two hours of sleep, but her stride was lethal. She wasn't wearing her boring grey blazer today. She wore a black turtleneck and a silk batik scarf draped elegantly around her neck.

​It was a visual declaration of war.

​The lift to the 42nd floor felt different today. She didn't feel like fainting; she felt like hunting. When the doors opened, she marched into Arthur's office and dropped her drawing tube on his desk with a deliberate thud.

​"You're on time, Miss Elena. At least some things remain consistent," Arthur said without looking up. He looked pale, three empty espresso cups cluttering his desk.

​"I don't miss deadlines, Mr. Montgomery. I've brought what you asked for: Stone. Security. Invisibility."

​She unfurled the blueprints. Arthur's eyes traced the lines. It was a monolith. A fortress of Portland limestone. Darker, heavier, and colder—just like him. But as he leaned in to inspect the technical joints, he froze.

​"What is this?" he asked, his finger hovering over the microscopic carvings.

​Elena offered a faint, razor-sharp smile. "Technical ventilation disguised as geometric patterns. I call it 'A Touch of the Past'. You wanted this building to be timeless, didn't you? Nothing is more timeless than one's roots."

​Arthur went dead still. He knew those patterns. They were the very ones they had debated in their secret chat years ago. The professional mask he wore began to crack. He stood up, walking around the desk until he was inches away from her. The air turned electric, heavy with the weight of seven years of unsaid words.

​"You did this on purpose," he hissed, his voice no longer cold, but laced with a raw, jagged pain. "You've buried 'us' in the walls of my building."

​Elena met his ice-blue gaze. "There is no 'us', Arthur. Just an architect giving a soul to a dead building. I thought you said 'soul' was subjective? I'm just experimenting."

​Arthur stared at her, his jaw tight. He wanted to scream at her, to fire her, or perhaps to pull her into his arms and apologize for every bit of cowardice that had led them here. But his ego held firm.

​"Fix the technical specs on the east wing," he said abruptly, his voice flat again, though his breathing was shallow. "I accept the concept. But don't think these... little flourishes... change anything."

​Elena adjusted her scarf, looking him in the eye one last time. "I'm not trying to change you, Arthur. I'm just reminding you that no matter how much stone you use to build a wall around yourself, I still know exactly where the cracks are."

​She turned and walked out. Behind her, Arthur slumped into his chair, hiding his face in his hands. He reached for his personal phone, opening a hidden folder of an old photo—a girl laughing in a Jakarta library.

​"You won today, Elena," he whispered to the empty room. "But you have no idea how hard I'm fighting not to be the man you think I am."

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