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Chapter 34 - Chapter 28: Awake finally

The beeping grew louder.

Faster.

Unsteady.

Jennie tightened her grip on Jay's hand, her whole body shaking.

Jennie: Jay—Jay please, do it again!

We all leaned in.

Barely breathing.

And then—

Jay's fingers twitched again.

Stronger this time.

Ci-N: Nurse. Now.

The door opened almost instantly as nurses rushed in, surrounding Jay and quickly examining her, their movements fast but controlled. Then...

Jay's eyelids fluttered.

Once.

Twice.

Keifer: …no way.

Jennie was crying openly now.

Jennie: That's it, sis. Come on. I'm right here.

The door burst open as a nurse and doctor rushed in. They checked the monitors quickly.

Doctor: She's responding. Very good.

We were pushed back a little, but none of us left.

Jay's lips moved.

Barely.

A weak breath escaped—

And then—

Her eyes opened.

Slowly.

Blurry.

But open.

Jennie gasped.

Jennie: Jay…?

Jay stared at her, trying to focus.

Jay (hoarse whisper): …why are you crying?

Jennie let out a broken laugh.

Jennie: You idiot… you scared us to death!

Jay blinked slowly.

Her eyes moved across the room.

Landing on all of us.

Confused.

Tired.

But aware.

Jay: …what… happened?

No one answered immediately.

We didn't even know where to start.

Keifer stepped forward, forcing a small smile.

Keifer: You decided to take the longest nap in history.

A faint smirk touched Jay's lips.

Jay: …sounds like me.

Silence settled again.

But this time—it wasn't empty.

It was full.

Full of relief.

Then suddenly—

Jay's eyes widened just a little, like something clicked in her mind.

Her voice was still weak, but clearer now.

Jay: …wait.

We all leaned in again.

Jay: …the fancy restaurant.

Jennie blinked through her tears.

Jennie: What?

Jay looked straight at her, serious despite how exhausted she looked.

Jay: You said… we'd go… if I woke up.

A pause.

Then—

Keifer let out a soft laugh of disbelief.

Keifer: Of course that's the FIRST thing you remember.

Jay's lips curved slightly.

Jay: I've been thinking about it… for days.

Jennie started laughing and crying at the same time.

Jennie: You've been in a coma!

Jay (softly): …still counts.

Even Ci-N let out a quiet chuckle.

Ci-N: Unbelievable.

Jay shifted slightly, wincing just a bit.

But her eyes stayed locked on Jennie.

Jay: Promise… we go.

Jennie squeezed her hand, nodding immediately.

Jennie: We promise. All of us.

Keifer: Section E invasion. That place won't survive.

Jay let out the faintest laugh.

Jay: …good.

Her eyes slowly began to close again, exhaustion pulling her under.

But this time—

It wasn't scary.

Jennie brushed her hair gently.

Jennie: Rest. We're not going anywhere.

Jay whispered one last thing before drifting off—

Jay: …don't go without me.

Keifer smiled softly.

Keifer: Not a chance.

The machines returned to a steady rhythm.

And this time—

Every beep felt like a countdown.

Not to fear.

But to something waiting for all of us.

That restaurant.

Together.

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