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Chapter 4 - Time.

A presence...

I looked up took one deep breath and waited

Horns. bulky type. Not like the others?

Finally it spoke.

Prince vegeta why are you here?

How does he know my name i thought?

Grin.

Did he just smile?

There are too many factors against you.You cannot win.

I spoke oh really? How so? even if i told you who was against you it wouldnt matter your end is now

The battlefield goes silent.

Then—VROOM.

we vanished at the same instant.

A shockwave detonates where they stood, the ground imploding as fists collide mid-air—KRAKABOOM! Neither can be seen anymore, only flashes of light ripping across the sky. A punch lands—no, blocked. A kick—countered. Elbows, knees, headbutts, all thrown at blinding speed.

VROOM VROOM VROOM—

They reappear for a fraction of a second, foreheads smashing together—

CRACK!

—and they're gone again.

Mountains explode in the distance from missed blows. The air screams as pressure tears it apart. Blood flies, but neither backs down. Every hit is matched. Every technique copied, countered, erased.

They skid across the ground, boots carving trenches miles long.

Both breathing hard. Both smiling.

"… so that's everything you've got?"

One of them suddenly reaches into his pouch.

CRUNCH.

A Senzu Bean.

Power erupts outward like a supernova—WHOOOOOOM! The sky darkens, lightning snapping around his body as his energy skyrockets.

"Too slow."

VROOM—

i cant sense him-

BAM!

Ribs shatter. BAM! Another blow caves in his chest. BAM! im sent rocketing through the ground, through stone, through magma, finally skidding to a stop in a massive crater.

I tries to stand.

My legs gave out.

Vision blurs. Breathing ragged. Blood drips onto the cracked earth.

Footsteps echo.

"This is over."

He raises his hand, energy gathering—

But then—

my fist clenches.

teeth grinds.

"…No…"

 aura flickers.

"…I'm not—"

It erupts.

RAAAAGHHHH!!AGHHHHHHHH!!

The ground lifts. Rocks levitate and disintegrate into dust. His scream tears through the sky as raw rage explodes from his body, power surging uncontrollably. His aura snaps and howls like a living earthquake.

VROOM—

They vanished at the same time again.

The shockwave split the land in half as their fists collided mid-air—BOOM! Punch after punch after punch, neither landing clean, both moving so fast they were nothing but streaks of light.

VROOM! VROOM! VROOM!

They reappeared for milliseconds—kicks blocked, elbows dodged—then vanished again. Now they were equal. Same speed. Same force. Same fury.

Neither could pull ahead.

Neither could fall behind.

Suddenly—

!?

VROOM—

He turned and ran, blasting across the horizon at full speed, tearing the sky apart behind him.

A heartbeat passed.

Then—

VROOM.

STOP RUNNING!!

The chase had begun.

What is he doing he cant run forever?

Vrrr-Lord Frieza? yes what is it? the saiyan is too strong i had to run please come and help me.Did you eat the senzu bean? Yes but something happened out of nowehere vegeta just got stronger too and i have to ru- Dung Hung up.

Pathetic.You dare call me because youre about to die The insolence of that fool!

Dodoria!

Go to planet Rokust and exterminate them both im tired of waiting for King vegeta to finish once his only heir dies by my hands.He will definetly try to bend against my fathers command and we can finally destroy them and their filthy planet.

Yessss Lord Frieza. Consider it done already.

Back at the battle field

Vegeta skidded to a stop, his aura crackling violently around him. He had been chasing the demon across the blasted wasteland for what felt like hours, each strike met with equal force, each attack countered.

"…Enough," he muttered, gritting his teeth. "I can't catch him. Not like this."

The demon, panting but alive, finally slowed as well. Their eyes met across the rubble-strewn plain. Both were battered, bruised, and smeared in blood, yet their gazes burned with the same stubborn fire.

Without a word, they charged again. VROOM! VROOM! The air exploded around them as fists collided, each blow sending shockwaves that shattered mountains in the distance. For a moment, it seemed as if the world itself had stopped just to watch their fury.

Then, the demon raised a hand, stopping mid-strike."Wait. Don't move yet," he said.

Another presence has arrived.

Vegeta narrowed his eyes, suspicion flaring."Frieza reinforcements?" he growled.

Before the words left his mouth, the ground beneath them vibrated violently. Rocks lifted into the air. A shadow darkened the horizon.

A deep, menacing laugh echoed through the sky."Dodoria."

The massive alien slammed down onto the battlefield, sending dust and debris flying in every direction. His eyes glinted with cruel anticipation.

Vegeta clenched his fists, power surging around him."Finally… let's see what you've got!"

The Demon nodded, gripping his energy tighter. Together, they charged, a blur of movement, and Dodoria roared in fury as punches and energy blasts collided with him.

The battlefield erupted into chaos

Dodoria swung massive fists, flattening rock formations.

Energy blasts tore across the sky.

Vegeta and the demon coordinated their attacks, striking from impossible angles, forcing Dodoria to defend constantly.

Dodoria growled, catching a kick to the chest."You think you both can take me on? Pathetic!"

the demon dodging a crushing strike."Focus on him! If we fight together, we can—"

BOOM!

Dodoria slammed them both into the ground with a devastating energy wave, dust and shockwaves billowing for miles.

"blood ran down my face."

, struggling to stand."This… isn't over."

The demon helped him up.

both looked at each other

"What is your name?" Vegeta demanded, eyes narrowing as he stared at the demon.

"I… don't have one," he said simply, his voice calm, almost eerie.

Dodoria roared again, charging forward, and the two braced themselves for the next round, knowing this fight had only just begun.

The battlefield was littered with craters and shattered rock. Vegeta's armor was cracked, blood streaked across his face, and his breathing was heavy—but he was still standing. Beside him, the other Saiyan struggled to rise, battered and broken.

Dodoria laughed, the sound echoing like thunder. "Hah! Pathetic!" He slammed a massive fist into the ground, sending shockwaves ripping across the terrain. The other Saiyan tried to counter, but Dodoria's power was overwhelming. Blasts, punches, and crushing strikes landed relentlessly.

With one final, devastating energy attack, the other Saiyan screamed as he was blasted away, tumbling through the air before finally hitting the ground. Silence fell—except for Vegeta, still barely on his feet, glaring up at Dodoria.

Dodoria leaned down, breathing heavily, smirking."This was fun… while it lasted."

Before he could strike again, a new, massive presence shook the battlefield. The sky darkened as energy erupted across the horizon.

"BROLY…" Vegeta muttered, sensing the raw, unstoppable power.

Broly landed on the battlefield like a meteor, his aura flaring like green lightning. Energy clashed between him and Dodoria immediately. Despite Broly's raw strength, it seemed the battle reached a stalemate—the two forces shaking the ground with every swing.

Vegeta saw an opening and charged to join the fight. Together, they tried to overwhelm Dodoria, but the alien's cunning was deadly. In an instant, a massive energy beam shot out, slamming into Vegeta's arms. He screamed, his body going limp, and fell unconscious. Broly roared in rage but was immediately struck, collapsing to the ground as well.

For a moment, it seemed like all hope was lost.

Then… Broly noticed something.

The demon—thrown earlier into the wall—had silently hidden his presence, lurking unseen. With a sudden burst, he sneaked up behind Dodoria and slashed, energy radiating from his attack. Dodoria roared in pain as the attack tore through him, leaving him badly injured.

Broly's green aura exploded to maximum. Fueled by rage and opportunity, he ramped into Dodoria, throwing punches and energy blasts at blinding speed. The two vanished into a blur, colliding mid-air in a storm of power.

For a terrifying moment, it seemed as if Broly might actually overpower him. Mountains shattered, the air caught fire, and the very ground screamed under the force of their clash.

But Dodoria, battered and desperate, suddenly reeled back. "… I'm done here!" With a final roar, he retreated into the sky, vanishing before Broly could land the finishing blow.

Broly roared in frustration, green energy swirling around him like a storm, fists clenched. The battlefield lay in ruins, smoke curling, the air still trembling from the shockwaves.

I opened my eyes, but there was no land, no mountains, no battlefield—nothing but an endless, undulating expanse of water. The sky above was a pale, empty gray, reflecting the rippling surface below.

"Where… am I?" he whispered, panic creeping into his voice. His fists clenched, the water lapping gently around his legs. Every instinct screamed danger, yet he saw nothing—no enemy, no friend, no hint of life.

He looked down, and his heart skipped a beat.

My arm... its... 

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