ORIGINAL:
Sammy lived in the forest by the little stream that ran through the woods. The stream ran in between two very tall trees under a bridge. Gradually growing in width until it purred over a small cliff and emptied into a pool of water. Waking from a deep sleep Sammy got up to make some coffee. Hiking in the forest, Sammy tripped over a log while simultaneously banging his head on a thick branch that hang over head. Hiking was Sammy's favorite thing to do. Now he did not like it very much so he decided to go back to bed.
The end
POLISHED:
Sammy lived in the forest by the little stream that ran through the woods. The stream ran in between two very tall trees and under a bridge. Gradually growing in width until it poured over a small cliff and emptied into a pool of water. Waking from a deep sleep, Sammy got up to make some coffee. Hiking in the forest, Sammy tripped over a log while simultaneously banging his head on a thick branch that hung overhead. Hiking was Sammy's favorite thing to do. Now he did not like it very much, so he decided to return home and go back to bed.