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Chapter 21 - FLAWED DESIGN: CHAPTER TWENTY-ONE - THE FLAWED DESIGN

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 The psychological confrontation was over, and the physical war had begun. Malice Montgomery, his features contorted in a mask of pure, arrogant rage, launched the opening strike of the final battle. A colossal, blinding bolt of lightning—pure, raw Electrical Elemental power—screamed across the vast room, aimed directly at Cyrus. The force alone made the steel structure of the Tower shudder.

​Cyrus met the blast head-on. He stood his ground in his human form, his body a chamber for the controlled, amplified energy Luciel had just unleashed. He was a vessel of contained chaos, meeting the surge with an equal and opposite force. The clash was deafening, the lightning striking Cyrus's figure and exploding into a searing dome of blue and gold light that blinded the room. The sheer energy forced Julian, still on the floor, to shield his eyes with a gasping, involuntary cry.

​The impact was immediate and localized. The Data Core room groaned, and nearby console casings fractured, unable to contain the overwhelming power of the Elementals' clash. Julian, who had already consciously ended his feigned unconsciousness, used the shockwave and the resulting shower of sparks as his cue. He gathered his strength and shoved himself off the floor, his entire body screaming in agony, but his protective instinct overruling the pain. He saw Alexander still frozen under the broadcast rig, staring wide-eyed at the impossible explosion of light.

​"Come on Alex, We move now!" Julian yelled, his voice raw, struggling against the ringing in his ears. He scrambled across the debris, grabbing Alexander's arm and pulling him away from the armed console. He knew they were seconds from becoming collateral damage; their only job now was to survive and ensure the truth survived with them. 

​Julian channeled his protective terror into swift, decisive action. He grabbed the front of Alexander's jacket, pulling him violently toward a large, shadowy maintenance alcove near the wall—a safe pocket Julian had noticed on Sterling's map. He used his body to physically shield Alexander from the continuing shower of sparks and debris, forcing them both to abandon the exposed console area. They tumbled into the cold, dark recess just as Malice launched his second, furious blast.

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​Julian slammed his body against the cold steel wall of the alcove, pulling Alexander in tightly beside him. He immediately turned his attention to Alexander, checking for fresh injuries. "Are you okay? Did that blast get you? Say something, you idiot!" Julian's voice was hoarse with panic, stripped bare of all snark.

​Alexander, stunned but functional, merely clutched the Mini-DV camera tighter, nodding against Julian's shoulder. "I'm fine, Jules. Camera's fine. It's… it's working." He didn't waste time on words; he simply confirmed the state of the truth and the state of his survival. He pushed Julian back slightly, forcing Julian to breathe, even as the walls around them began to loudly protest the battle's raw power.

​Cyrus and Malice engaged in a relentless, brutal exchange of energy. The air was thick and vibrating, making their teeth ache. Cyrus met Malice's ground-based lightning attacks with bursts of contained power, fighting back against the continuous deluge of energy. The sheer force of the repeated clashes made the Tower structure groan and crack, confirming that the fight was literally shaking the foundation of Malice's empire.

​Julian felt his protective terror morph into a chilling tactical focus. They were trapped, but they had a clear vantage point. He forced himself to use the brief, tense seconds to secure their hiding spot, shoving loose debris against the alcove opening to shield them from sight. His protective instinct was now focused on providing a clean, safe position from which Alexander could record the final, irrefutable evidence. He watched the escalating fight, silently praying that Cyrus's sheer will could hold against the murderer's vast, disciplined power.

​Malice, realizing Cyrus was holding his ground, intensified his assault, utilizing his power to project psychological pain and trauma. He focused his energy not just on the physical body, but on the exposed mind of the Hybrid, trying to break Cyrus's control by showing him the vision of his mother's death.

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​The combined physical and psychological assault from Malice proved overwhelming. Cyrus's control, amplified by Luciel's serum, began to flicker under the relentless energy and the influx of traumatic memory. His muscles convulsed as the internal chaos—the fighting Telekinesis and Electrical power—threatened to tear him apart. He stumbled back, letting out a raw, anguished growl that was part human pain and part animal distress.

​"The script is breaking! The pain is too great!" Cyrus choked out, collapsing onto one knee, the immense, conflicting power threatening to consume him. The memory of his mother's death, of the executed Golden Eagle, was flooding his mind, threatening to trigger the very self-destruction Malice intended.

​Then, in a searing moment of clarity, Cyrus consciously rejected his trauma. He refused to be the weapon designed for self-destruction. He embraced the full, terrifying truth of his existence. He accepted the Animalia core, the electric chaos, and the kinetic force. He let go of the need for sterile, human control.

​The decision was absolute, instantaneous, and terrifying.

​A massive, blinding surge of golden energy erupted from Cyrus, forcing Malice to stumble back, shielding his eyes. The room was consumed by the sound of tearing cloth and crackling electricity. In a decisive, perfect moment of self-acceptance, Cyrus underwent the full, decisive transformation into the man-sized, terrifyingly beautiful Golden Eagle form.

​He was no longer a human figure; he was a colossal, perfect Eagle, glowing gold, its feathers crackling with controlled, intense electrical energy. His immense wings spanned the width of the main Data Core corridor, their edges shimmering with controlled kinetic force. The fusion was complete. The ultimate Flawed Design had become a force of nature.

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​The Golden Eagle—the perfect, self-realized fusion of Animalia and controlled Elemental power—did not hesitate. The battle shifted instantly and irrevocably from a ground-based power struggle to a spectacular aerial kinetic assault.

​The Eagle launched himself into the air, moving with smooth, powerful strokes that defied the magnetic dampening fields. He was the ultimate, terrifying anomaly—a flawless fighter in an environment designed to suppress him. He attacked Malice from above, using controlled wind and focused kinetic force (the other elements he controlled), creating destabilizing pressure vortices and rapid energy blasts that slammed Malice against the floor.

​Malice, a disciplined ground-based fighter who relied on leveraging the Tower's infrastructure for energy absorption, was caught completely off guard. He roared in fury, unleashing massive, desperate bolts of lightning that the Eagle deftly absorbed or deflected with shifts of his massive, electrically charged wings.

​Julian, watching the impossible spectacle from the alcove, felt a raw, primal astonishment. "Holy... Alex, you have to get this! You have to be filming this right now!" Julian's voice was a ragged whisper of awe and terror. He had never seen anything so beautiful or so destructive.

​Alexander, equally stunned, already had the camera active. He pointed the Mini-DV lens directly at the impossible confrontation, filming the immense, gold-feathered figure fighting the master of electricity. He was capturing the visual heart of the revolution—the moment chaos became command.

​The spectacle was compounded by the arrival of Malice's desperate backup. The remaining Thermo-Elemental Drones and the Specialized Agent (who had recovered from the earthquake) stormed the hall, but they were useless. They could not engage the aerial target without risking hitting Malice, and the sheer power of the Eagle's presence forced them to stand guard around the perimeter, watching the battle they could not join.

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​Julian, forcing his focus away from the awe-inspiring sight of the Eagle and back to the mission's logistics, used the distraction to execute his final, subtle task. Safe in the alcove, he realized that Alexander's broadcast, while armed, could still be countered if Malice's system recovered quickly.

​He pulled out the useless, static-filled analog scanner he had used to track the perimeter. He knew the broadcast rig, while powerful, had a single physical weak point that Julian's plan had revealed: a redundant data shunt that could be used to prematurely terminate the transmission if the power surged. He had to disable it manually.

​"I have to move, Alex," Julian hissed, pushing himself out of the alcove. "I need to get to the rig. I see a flaw in the system. If they manage to crash the main power line, the whole broadcast goes silent. I can stop that from happening."

​Alexander, still filming the aerial battle, glanced down, his face etched with immediate panic. "Jules, no! Stay put! They'll see you! You're the shield, you're not supposed to move!"

​"I'm not risking everything for a cheap reset button, Alex," Julian countered, already moving. "This is the last job. I'm making sure the truth is irreversible. I'm going to make sure that even if the whole Tower collapses, that footage still gets out." Julian scrambled toward the exposed wires behind the console, his movements low and tight against the floor. He used his non-digital equipment to physically bypass the shunt, ensuring the broadcast signal would stay live and dedicated, regardless of the chaos.

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​Luciel, watching the desperate aerial confrontation, realized Malice was preparing a devastating counter-attack. She saw his eyes flicker toward the vast, sparking conduit that fed the Tower's emergency power grid—a move that would amplify his energy exponentially, sacrificing the Tower to eliminate the threat.

​Without hesitation, Luciel made her final, definitive act of sacrifice. She didn't seek cover or safety. She grabbed the heaviest piece of debris she could find—a fractured console casing—and ran toward the sparking conduit. She used her scientific knowledge, not power, to commit a tactical, necessary act of vandalism.

​She intentionally slammed the debris into a key external power conduit, causing a massive, immediate localized short-circuit. The move was designed to disrupt Malice's energy absorption—to force a momentary power failure that would throw him off balance. Luciel screamed as the backlash of the overload slammed into her, throwing her violently to the floor, but her objective was achieved: Malice's power source was momentarily compromised.

​Malice, realizing his energy supply had been tampered with, let out a frustrated roar. The massive attack he was preparing sputtered, confirming the success of Luciel's intervention. He realized Luciel was not a passive victim; she was an active, tactical threat using her expertise as a weapon.

​Julian, finished with his final wire job, watched Luciel's immense, selfless sacrifice from the floor near the rig. He saw the genuine, protective love in her move—a scientist sacrificing herself for the being she had once betrayed. His pride in her resolve was absolute.

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​The Golden Eagle immediately responded to Luciel's sacrifice. Seeing his protector harmed, the Eagle's controlled energy intensified, but he did not fall into rage. He was focused. He used his new aerial advantage and controlled power to shield Luciel, creating a massive, invisible kinetic barrier that deflected the falling debris and shielded her body from Malice's immediate counter-strike.

​The Eagle locked Malice into a relentless aerial kinetic battle, using focused wind and energy blasts to keep Malice off-balance, preventing him from leveraging the Tower's infrastructure. Malice, enraged and unable to draw steady power, was forced to fight on the defensive, relying purely on his personal reserve.

​The Eagle utilized the disruption Luciel created, exploiting the structural weakness Malice now showed. He targeted the structural stress points Malice was forced to use to maintain his balance, launching a rapid succession of blasts—kinetic, wind, and electrical—that forced the murderer into a desperate, focused retreat.

​Julian, watching from the alcove, saw the full, decisive power of the final design. The Golden Eagle was fighting with control, not chaos. He was using his entire being as a strategic weapon, proving Malice's scientific theory wrong at every turn. The Hybrid was a perfect, self-willed being, not a ticking time bomb.

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​The end came with terrifying, synchronized precision. Cyrus, using his amplified vision, exploited the temporary weakness created by Luciel's disruption of Malice's power supply.

​He ascended rapidly, reaching the absolute apex of the Data Core room. He gathered all his full, sustained power—the immense, controlled chaos that Luciel had unlocked and that his own will had mastered. He channeled it into a single, overwhelming force.

​The Golden Eagle dove, transforming his momentum into a colossal, focused energy overload. He didn't just strike Malice; he targeted Malice's electrical field, channeling all his massive, controlled chaos into Malice's controlled energy source. The ultimate chaos met the ultimate order.

​The sound was a single, sustained, deafening SCREAM of electrical energy. The Tower lights blew out entirely. Malice Montgomery was overwhelmed, his Electrical Elemental power consumed by the pure, unquantifiable surge of Cyrus's amplified energy. He let out a final, raw cry of agony and scientific defeat as his body collapsed, neutralized completely by the force that was meant to be his servant.

​The immense, chaotic energy burst outward, eliminating the remaining Specialized Agent and the Thermo-Elemental Drones in a single, surgical discharge. Malice was defeated, destroyed by the very flaw he had designed into the Hybrid's core.

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​The massive surge of energy faded, leaving behind an absolute, terrifying silence. The fight was over. The murderer was neutralized.

​Alexander's heart was pounding with overwhelming relief and awe, stared at the collapsed figure of Malice. He looked at the victorious Eagle, now hovering in the silent, dark room, and at Julian, safely beside him. He knew this was the final, defining moment of the revolution, and the camera had to capture it all.

​Alexander, witnessing the defeat and Julian's safe presence beside him, hit the secondary trigger, locking the broadcast onto every viable frequency. He adjusted the lens, filming the aftermath—the victorious Eagle, the devastating scene of destruction, —securing the irrefutable visual evidence.

​He filmed the massive, beautiful form of the Eagle descending slowly, deliberately, proving that his power was now entirely under control. He filmed Luciel, rising painfully from the floor, her eyes fixed on Cyrus with overwhelming relief. The truth was secured. The sacrifice had been honored.

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​The final energy discharge faded completely. The Data Core room was silent and dark, broken only by the triumphant, faint hum of the successful broadcast rig. The Golden Eagle landed softly on the shattered floor, and in a final, quiet act of self-mastery, he let the power recede.

​Cyrus reverted to his human form, his body physically exhausted but mentally whole, his golden hair falling over his sweat-streaked face. Luciel rushed to him, pulling him into a fierce, protective embrace, their bond affirmed not by science, but by shared survival and absolute devotion.

​Julian and Alexander emerged from the alcove, confronting the magnitude of the destruction. The oppressive weight of the Tower's control was gone, replaced by a profound, uncertain silence. Julian looked at Alexander, his protective fear finally dissolving into awe and relief. The emotional weight of the victory was immense. The chaos was over, but the final, quiet outcome was yet to be written.

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