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Chapter 256 - Chapter 104

Chapter 104: The Retrograde Refrain

​The Bureau was built to monitor the forward march of destiny, but at 07:00 Cycles, the "March" became a Moonwalk. The Giant Silver Hourglass in the center of the Lobby didn't just stand there; it defied the very laws of gravity. The sand—fine, violet grains of "Chronal Dust"—wasn't falling; it was streaming upward from the bottom bulb to the top.

​"Commissioner!" Assistant Yue's voice sounded like a record being spun backward. "!GNIDNREWIR. ERA. EW .YROTS. EHT. SI. OS. DNA. SRAWKCAB. GNIVOM. SI. EMIT. THE. 'RETROGRADE. REFRAIN'. HAS. BEGUN. WE. ARE. 'UN-WRITING'. THE. PRESENT. TO. FIX. A. 'PAST. TYPO'. IF. WE. DON'T. INTERVENE, WE. WILL. DISAPPEAR. INTO. OUR. OWN. PROLOGUE!"

​The De-Evolution of the Lobby

​The room began to "Undo" itself in 7.5% increments.

​The Muse watched in horror as her neon-blue hair shortened, turned brown, and eventually became a single "Potential Spark" in a jar. "Ne Job! I'm losing my 'Development'! I'm becoming a 'Basic Character Concept' again!"

​Architect Ao Bing saw the marble pillars of the Lobby turn back into crates of raw stone. "My work! It's being 'Un-Built'! I'm losing my 100-chapter seniority!"

​Pip was shrinking into a smaller, even squeakier version of themselves, clutching a wrench that was slowly turning into a drawing of a wrench.

​Ne Job felt his own memories being "Deleted." He looked at his desk; the stacks of completed trajectories were flying back into the "Unassigned" bin. The "Grand Jubilee" was being erased. The "Anti-Bureau" was being "Un-Defeated."

​The 7.5% Anchor of the Semicolon

​The Hourglass was a Correctional Engine. It had detected a "Fatal Error" in Chapter 4—a minor typo in a trajectory that was now causing the "Volume 2" reality to collapse. To fix the typo, it was deleting everything that had happened since.

​"I won't let a hundred chapters of growth be 'Backspaced'!" Ne Job roared, though his voice was becoming higher and more youthful.

​He pulled out the Semicolon. Because the Semicolon is the "Bridge between the Before and After," it was the only thing that could Stand Still while the clock moved backward.

​"Assistant Yue! Initiate the 'Fixed-Point Protocol'! Junior... wait, Junior is currently just a 'Thought' in the Muse's head!"

​The Clause of Persistence

​Ne Job realized he couldn't stop Time, but he could Punctuate it. He didn't try to push the sand down; he used the Semicolon to Staple the Present to the Past.

​He fired a burst of violet light that acted as a Chronal Suture. He linked his current self—the Head Archivist who had survived 103 chapters—to the "Ne Job" of Chapter 4.

​"I am the Semicolon!" Ne Job yelled into the reverse-wind. "I am the connection! The past is not a 'Mistake' to be erased; it is a Foundation to be built upon! I will fix the typo, but I will Keep the Growth!"

​He channeled the power of the "And." He didn't "Un-Write" the last 100 chapters; he turned them into a 7.5% Sub-Clause that the Hourglass was forced to carry back with it.

​The Restoration of the Refrain

​The upward stream of sand hit the Semicolon's shield and stalled. The violet light forced the Hourglass to rotate.

​CLUNK.

​The sand began to fall downward again. Time snapped forward, accelerating through a century of memories in a matter of seconds. The Muse's hair flashed from brown back to neon-violet. Ao Bing's pillars reconstructed themselves. Pip grew back into their wrench-wielding self.

​The typo in Chapter 4 was fixed—not by erasing the story, but by adding a "Correction Note" in the margins.

​The Archivist's Log

​Ne Job sat back in his chair, feeling 100% like his old (older) self. The Hourglass had shrunk into a small, silver egg-timer on his desk.

​LOG: CHAPTER 104 SUMMARY.

STATUS: Time-loop stabilized. Narrative integrity maintained.

NOTE: You can't fix the past by deleting it; you fix it by writing a better future.

OBSERVATION: Going backward is much more exhausting than going forward. My knees are 7.5% more 'Vintage' than they were ten minutes ago.

P.S.: Assistant Yue is still speaking in reverse occasionally. She says it's 7.5% more 'Avant-Garde.'

​The Muse leaned over his shoulder, her hair glowing with a relieved, neon-violet light. "That was close, Ne Job. I almost forgot I was a main character."

​Ne Job looked at the Semicolon. It was glowing with a timeless, persistent violet.

​"History is a draft, Muse, but we are the final ink," Ne Job said. "Now, why is Assistant Yue sounding a 7.5% alarm and why has a Giant Silver Question Mark appeared on the 'Front Cover' of the Bureau, and why is it currently asking 'Who is Ne Job?'"

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