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Chapter 1: Born Into Struggle
I lost my mama when I was just two. My papa… he died on site while carrying blocks, all because we needed food to survive. Life no easy. After that, I went to live with my uncle and his wife… but dem no really dey care for us. We had to hustle like beasts just to eat. Sometimes, when food dey serve, na the burnt parts we dey chop. Life teach me early: nobody go carry your struggle for you.
From that moment, I promised myself—no matter wetin happen, I go survive. I go rise. Even if the world no dey believe, I go show them say talent plus hustle fit change your destiny.