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Chapter 1: Grief's First Spark

The Tokyo twilight hung like a heavy curtain, its air thick with the sharp, gritty sting of meteor dust that coated Kirito's throat with every shallow breath.

He moved through the derelict residential block, his phone a faint, risky glow in the deepening shadows, casting jagged patterns across the crumbling plaster walls.

The building was a ghost of forgotten centuries, its windows shattered into gaping voids, each step on the dust-covered floor sending a faint tremor through his worn boots.

The 5♠ Tag game had ripped their group apart, leaving Chota and Karube as raw, bleeding wounds in his memory, their absence a heavy knot in his gut that tightened with every heartbeat.

Guilt was a relentless spur, sharper than the cold wind whistling through the broken walls, driving him to keep searching despite the ache in his legs.

"Alright, System, you dangled a 'Clubs-level pathfinding puzzle' for free. Let's see if your glitchy GPS can match my raw panic," Kirito muttered, his voice a low, sarcastic drawl, barely hiding the tremor in his chest.

[SYSTEM: PUZZLE EXECUTION: CLUBS PATHFINDING (FREE)]

[OBJECTIVE: LOCATE ALLY YUZO ARISU, AVOID 4♠ / 5♥ GAME ZONES.]

[DISPLAYING OPTIMAL ROUTE: 98% SAFETY RATING.]

The phone flared with a ghostly blue line, weaving through the skeletal cityscape, steering him away from the pulsing red glow of nearby game arenas that flickered like warning beacons.

Kirito had learned the System's "free" puzzles were survival tools, not victory tickets, unlike the SP-draining cheats that burned through his reserves just to keep him breathing.

He wiped a bead of sweat from his brow, the metallic sting of it sharp in his throat, a bitter echo of his flinch in the Tag game's final moments when he hadn't been fast enough.

"Smooth, Kirito. One wrong step, and you're a cautionary tale in this dust-choked nightmare."

He pressed deeper into the building, the map guiding him to a third-floor storage closet, its door hanging on rusted hinges like a broken promise.

Shaky, uneven breaths echoed from within, heavy with sorrow, each one a blade twisting in Kirito's resolve.

He paused, heart hammering against his ribs, and nudged the door open with his boot, the creak piercing the silence like a scream.

Arisu sat huddled in the corner, a gaunt silhouette against a cracked window, clutching Chota's lighter.

Its tiny orange flame flickered defiantly, casting trembling shadows across his hunched shoulders, his face half-hidden in the gloom.

The air was thick with the stale, sour scent of unwashed clothes and grief, so heavy it pressed against Kirito's chest like a physical weight.

Arisu's body rocked faintly, a monument to despair, his eyes locked on the flame as if it held the key to undoing their shattered world.

"Hey, Arisu," Kirito said, his voice too loud, too bright, cracking like cheap glass on the last syllable.

"Smooth. You sound like a banshee trying to flirt at a funeral."

He cleared his throat, forcing his usual playful lilt, though it felt like dragging a boulder uphill.

"Found you. Thought you'd pick a more… dramatic spot to brood. This closet's got zero ambiance."

Arisu didn't move, didn't even blink, his silence a crushing weight that smothered Kirito's bravado.

"This isn't just grief. This is surrender. He's letting the Visa Clock win."

Kirito knelt, setting his scavenged bag down with a soft thud, the dust puffing around it like a weary sigh.

He needed something tangible to pierce the fog of Arisu's despair, something to anchor him back to the living.

His fingers brushed a crushed packet of instant ramen—dry, but edible, its plastic wrapper crinkling sharply in the quiet.

He held it out, the sound absurdly loud in the stifling space.

"Starving's not a plan, man," he said, softening his tone, the flirtation a thin shield for his own rising panic.

"The Borderland doesn't care about your tears; it wants your carbs. You look like a vampire who forgot how to hunt. One bite. We'll cry later."

[SYSTEM: ACTIVATING LIE DETECTOR: 50 SP DOCKED. SP REMAINING: 130.]

[SCANNING TARGET EMOTIONAL STATE: ARISU YUZO.]

[EVALUATION: DESPAIR RATING: 90%. CORE DRIVE: LOSS-INDUCED PARALYSIS.]

The System's cold numbers were a strange comfort, confirming the scream in his gut that Arisu was slipping away.

Kirito leaned closer, the Visa Clock on his wrist pulsing red, its light dancing across the dust like spilled blood.

"Come on, Arisu. You're the brains. I'm just the idiot who trips over his own charm. Don't leave me to solo this mess."

The silence stretched, broken only by the distant hum of neon signs flickering outside, their glow seeping through the cracked window.

Then, Arisu's eyes flickered up, red-rimmed and hollow, but something stirred—maybe the ramen, maybe Kirito's relentless noise breaking through.

His trembling hand took the packet, and he crunched a dry noodle, the sound sharp and absurdly human in the gloom.

It was a small act, mundane in its simplicity, but it was a defiance of death, a tiny pivot toward life.

A flicker of curiosity crossed his face, as if wondering why Kirito hadn't given up on him yet.

Kirito seized the moment, his voice hardening with a vow that felt torn from the marrow of his bones.

"We're getting out of this. You hear me? We."

He stopped, Karube's final smile burning behind his eyes, his throat tightening until it hurt to breathe.

"I won't lose another friend. Eat the damn noodles."

Arisu chewed slowly, his charcoal-dusted fingers smudging the packet, the lighter's flame a tiny anchor in the suffocating darkness.

It was fragile, but it was hope, a spark that warmed the cold air between them.

The closet felt smaller now, the air heavier with the weight of their shared loss, the walls seeming to close in like a trap.

Kirito stood, the crunch of meteor dust under his boots a desperate rhythm against the silence.

They couldn't stay here, trapped in this suffocating grief, with the Visa Clock ticking down like a predator.

"Ramen's a start," he said, gesturing toward the rusted fire escape beyond the door.

"Let's ditch this dusty crypt for the roof. Better view, less chance of getting jumped by some game-addict wannabe."

Arisu tucked the lighter into his pocket and followed, his breaths still shaky but moving in time with Kirito's steps.

The fire escape groaned under their weight, each step a protest against the city's decay, the metal cold and slick under their hands.

The rooftop air was sharp and clean, slicing through the stale weight of the closet, carrying the faint, fractured neon glow of Tokyo's shattered skyline.

The Visa Clock pulsed louder here, its red light a frantic countdown—2.5 days left, each pulse a stab of urgency in Kirito's chest.

A mournful wail of game sirens cut through the quiet, sharp enough to make them both flinch, their shadows jerking against the cracked asphalt.

[SYSTEM: ALERT. 3♥ GAME COMMENCING. DANGER RATING: MODERATE.]

Kirito's phone flared with the map, its blue line a lifeline in the chaos.

"No way, Arisu. 3 of Hearts? That's a psychological gut-punch waiting to happen. We're skipping Hearts."

[SYSTEM: PUZZLE EXECUTION: SPADES GAME RATING (FREE)]

[ANALYSIS: 5♠ TOO HIGH RISK (FATAL DANGER). SUGGESTING 2♠: LOW RISK, REWARD: 20 SP.]

[DISPLAYING 2♠ LOCATION: ABANDONED SUPPLY CACHE VICINITY.]

"New plan," Kirito said, pointing toward a cluster of low buildings several blocks away, their silhouettes barely visible in the dawn's gray-orange smear.

"2♠ game, low risk. Probably a sprint or a jump. No backstabbing drama."

His voice was steady, but his hands trembled, the weight of their dwindling time pressing harder with every tick of the clock.

"Keep it together, Kirito. You're the distraction, not the disaster."

Arisu knelt, pulling a chunk of plaster from the debris and sketching with a piece of charcoal, his fingers tracing the meteor crater that haunted his thoughts, its circular scar a symbol of their arrival in this hell.

"It's all rigged," he whispered, his voice raw, like the dust clinging to his smudged hands.

"We're pawns. Why does your phone know where to go?"

Kirito's heart lurched, panic spiking like a jolt of electricity.

"Exposure! Deflect, now!"

[SYSTEM: USER EMOTIONAL STATE: HIGH STRESS. INJECTING SYSTEM GLITCH.]

[OPTIMISM? LOW BATTERY. PLEASE RECHARGE WITH CAFFEINE AND BAD DECISIONS.]

He pinched his nose, faking a grimace as if fighting a headache.

"You caught me. It's my gamer sixth sense. I can sniff out a death trap from a mild inconvenience."

He flashed a desperate, lopsided grin, his pulse hammering in his ears.

"But seriously, you're the genius. I'm just the charm. If we stay here, the clock wins. Deal? I'll race fate, you crunch the odds."

Arisu's lips twitched, a faint, fleeting smile breaking through the haze of his grief.

"Race fate. You're an idiot."

"Live idiot," Kirito shot back, his heart pounding against the cold wind that stung his cheeks, carrying the faint ash of the city below.

They descended the fire escape, their footsteps crunching onto the alley's ash-covered floor, a fragile plan taking root as dawn bled into the sky, its gray-orange light a promise of both hope and danger.

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