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fragments of immortality

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in a world where power is absolute and a man’s worth is measured in his soul, Shen Luo was just an ordinary human from a forgotten world—Earth. Mysteriously reborn, he holds an ancient secret: a power given to man by Heaven itself, an "Echo" that allows him to break the very rules of the universe. Chains of iron, whispers of the past, and ghosts of a family he once knew—they all try to hold him back. But Shen Luo, a man who has already lost everything, has no fear. He has returned to the world three thousand years earlier, not to reclaim his throne, but to carve a new path with a ruthlessness the world has never seen. His goal is simple: to defy Heaven, transcend all limitations, and claim a freedom that is worse than death for those who live in chains.
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Chapter 1 - Rebirth Beneath the Heavens

He sat as if he had always belonged to that chair — long hair spilled like black ink down the carved wood, hands folded on his lap with the calm of someone whose hours were measured by centuries. The chair itself was an antique thing of twisting vines and faded lacquer, a throne for no god. Around him whiteness pressed close: a white hall, white mist, a whiteness so thorough it erased edges and made the world feel like a page waiting for words.

The air hummed with delicate quiet. Even the light seemed to avoid him, as though fearing to disturb a statue.

A boy — maybe young enough to still have the rough pinkness of unscarred skin — stepped forward and spoke, voice raw with the blunt authority of youth. "Do you understand?" he asked. "If you gain eternal life, if you take immortality, you will break the balance. Heaven will not hold. The world will fracture. Do you understand that?"

The man in the chair did not move his eyes. A smile touched his mouth: not a joy but something like the curve of a blade that has always known its edge. It was the smile of the man who has stood at the end of wars and counted the cost, the smile of one who has already felt his own last moment and found it… insufficient.

His voice came slow and even, like a bell tolling in a hall too large for its sound. "I do not care," he said. The words were small and absolute. "Even if heaven burns, even if earth ends, even if every law turns against me — I do not care." He sounded like a man reciting a fact. "I am true to my nature. I am true to myself."

The boy blinked. He had expected argument, a bargaining plea, fear. Instead there was a calm so severe it felt surgical, as if every feeling had been cut away until only the plan remained. He pressed on. "Why eternity? Why—why give up everything for endless life?"

The man turned his head then, very slightly, and the hall watched him as a single thing breathes. There was no performance in his face; it was blank, as if emotion were a foreign script he had never been taught to read. "When I was born," he said, "it was on earth. I lived as you do. I was nothing special — a clerk, a servant, a man who wrote names for others and forgot his own."

The boy's lips parted. "You—what?"

"I suffered," the man went on, voice unmoved. "I suffered for a long time. I learned the rules men call 'order' and 'mercy.' I sought meaning in them, and the world kept breaking on me. Years passed. People told me to be patient. I was patient. I became a venerable to understand this world." He let the word fall into the whiteness like a stone. "But understanding was not the freedom I wanted. It was only a map of my cages."

"So you sought power?" the boy shot back. "Was that it? You wanted power for yourself?"

He smiled again, the same thin, terrible smile. "Not for dominance, child. For freedom. Freedom is not a single thing. It is like water: it shapes and is shaped. The more I lived, the more I saw that freedom is the only resource that cannot be traded fairly. People die with debts unpaid, names forgotten. The benefits of being remembered are illusions." He tapped his chest with one finger. "I want freedom in the purest sense — endless time to do what must be done. Do you think immortality is vanity? I think of it as refusal: refusal to be bound by their cycles."

The boy's jaw hardened. "You want to destroy balance — to make the heavens and earth collapse for your freedom. You want everyone to suffer your refusal."

"No." The man's voice was quiet and exact. "If all things perish and the laws die, then so be it. I will keep my course. I will keep my nature." Then, almost with boredom, he added, "Try to manipulate me if you will. You will find I am not as pliant as a scroll."

The boy's hands curled into fists. He studied the man as though peering at a dangerous specimen. Around them gathered others — elders in robes, faces pale with fear or suspicion, a dozen voices that muttered the old names for monsters and blasphemy. One of them spat out the word the world loved to hang on those who refused ordinary pity: "Demon."

"You must surrender," an elder said. "Your crimes—they cannot be forgiven. You will submit and be put to death. Or we will hunt you."

The man's eyes followed the elder with that same indifferent interest as if studying weather. "If you are merciful," he said softly, "you will attempt to die cleanly. That is a kindness. But no mercy will change my mind."

Silence cracked with a sound like breaking porcelain. One of the younger men strode forward, voice raw with grief and a hunger older than himself. "Three hundred years ago you killed my mother and father. My village burned because of you. We remember." He thrust his hand forward, fingers trembling. "You will die today."

A murmur rippled like a draught through the hall. The accusation fell on the man but did not seem to pain him; it only registered. For an instant the whiteness beyond them shifted and something moved — the air itself seemed to collapse inward with a soundless weight.

The boy — the same who had questioned him — stepped closer, eyes narrowed. "Is it true?" he asked. "Three hundred years? Were you the one who—"

Before the answer could settle, the man's pupils narrowed the tiniest fraction. He turned his face toward the center of the hall, toward a place the others had not noticed until that moment: a niche in the far wall opened like a wound, and within it a scene from some other season glimmered into being.

They saw a ruin — blackened beams, a scorched courtyard, a small figure huddled and still. The picture was like a ghost caught on a hanging cloth: flames frozen in mid-lash, a child's tiny footprint on a bed of ash. A voice, long dead, echoed without time. The lips of the boy who had accused him trembled.

"This is from three hundred years ago," the elder whispered, as though naming it made it heavier. "It is the village of Han's Hollow. We burned under your hand, demon."

The man watched the projection as if watching rain pattern a window. Then he looked back at the boy and spoke, not with denial but with a detached curiosity. "If I killed them, I do not deny it," he said. "But what of it?" His calm was a ledge and he stood on it, unmoving. "Would you have had them live forever to rot in memory? Would you have bound them to your stories?"

One of the gathered men — a hunter with the raw stubbornness of those raised on foothills — stepped forward. He spit on the floor. "What you say is abomination. We will have no such freedom. We will have law."

The boy's fist struck the floor. "You will die today."

Then, with the suddenness of a trap triggered, the light in the hall changed. The whiteness folded back like paper. The niche vanished. The projection stuttered and died, leaving the scent of ash like a stain in memory.

They charged. It should have been chaos: pikes and sharpened distrust, a dozen lives flung forward to end what they had labeled an abomination.

But the man remained seated. He folded his hands more tightly, as though there was an inner motion unseen by the crowd. The room seemed to slow. A single breath lasted twice as long. A dozen fingers reached and found only air.

The first man to strike hit an empty wind. A second moved and felt his bones like glass in winter. The hall became a flash of bodies that moved through the man but collided with something else — an absence made of purpose. Men fell as though the world conspired against them; they did not die cleanly. They crumpled and clutched, eyes widening with a bright new terror.

The boy — the one who had asked the questions — watched as the venerable that had mocked memory became a thing of action. He saw, for the first time, not a bland mask but an engine: hands that could take, eyes that measured, a mind that had taught itself cruelty as an arthritic joint learns to move.

From the floor, one of the elders, blood spreading like ink on white stone, raised his head and hissed, "You cannot be…you were dead."

The man's smile had not left his face. "Perhaps," he said, voice near to amen. "Or perhaps you were never born."

Outside, past the whiteness and the carved chair and the corpses newly warm with shock, the world turned in its old orbit, uncaring. But something now had changed here — an idea had been learned.

They would remember him not as a man who had loved and lost, not as a scholar or clerk. They would name him in curses, in prayers, in frantic fires. He would be a thing that survived their stories: Demon. Of. Eternity.

And in that small, quiet moment, in the lull between the first scream and the first prayer, the man who had been reborn felt only one accurate thing: the path ahead was clearer. The cost — whatever it might extract — did not matter. He had the shape of his aim. He had time.

The hall stank of iron and the thin white light was flecked with red. Someone, somewhere, began to shout of gods and balance and the crimes of the old days. The boy — still unsteady — watched the man and found the core of his fear: not hatred, but recognition. He recognized the way the man kept his silence; he recognized the terrible certainty of someone who no longer belonged to mortal mercy.

Three hundred years pressed like a bruise in the memory of the room. The future, thin and bright and terrible, yawned open.

The last sound came not from the crowd but from the man. Quiet as an eclipse. "This is only the beginning," he said. "Remember the name you call me. It will be the sound that makes the world listen."

They called him a demon. He closed his eyes, and the whiteness swallowed him again.