Hi guys, I just want to say FXXK to my earlier chapter.
After rereading them, I understand why many of you commented that they felt like AI nonsense. I'm honestly not sure what happened at the time but my writing quality back then was really bad.
It's true that I used ChatGPT to help with some character dialogue, especially for characters like Bartolomeo, Usopp, and Vivi. I mainly used AI to understand how those characters might speak or react in certain situations.
If you noticed I try to preserve original character like Luffy, who are still speak stupid things. I don't want to make him suddenly become smart like one of the fics I read in webnovel.
Luffy would always be stupid but charismatic captain.
However, when I went back to reread and re-edit the early chapters, I realized there were too many problems first is awkward dialogue, poor flow and a lot of loopholes that didn't make sense. Because of that, I decided to take this opportunity to revise those chapters properly.
I apologize for the inconvenience and thank you for your patience and honest feedback. I'll do my best to improve the quality moving forward.