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Chapter 1 - The Cupboard Surprise

Narration:

Indore, one week into Class 12. The city was buzzing with honking rickshaws, chai stalls, and panicked students pretending revision notes were more useful than memes.

Among them sat Liyan Sharma — 17, tall, messy-haired, and perpetually looking like he'd just woken up from a 3-hour nap (because he usually had). His teachers called him "bright but careless." His parents preferred "hopeless." He himself liked "misunderstood genius."

Beside him were his three closest friends:

Aarav Kapoor — sharp dresser, smooth talker, and living proof that bluffing could be an academic skill.

Ahana Desai — topper, queen of sarcasm, and self-appointed group fact-checker.

Isha Malik — bold, witty, and notorious for excuses that could convince even the sternest teacher.

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[Scene: Outside their coaching center. The gang sits on a boundary wall, sipping cold drinks.]

Aarav: (grinning) Bro, admit it. You only passed Class 11 because the teacher felt bad for you.

Liyan: (deadpan) Wrong. God pressed the wrong key and accidentally clicked "Pass."

Ahana: (rolling her eyes) Please. Even God doesn't make mistakes that lazy.

Isha: (laughing) Forget mistakes. Liyan needs a full software update.

Liyan: (sighs) Great. Keep roasting me. My self-esteem just applied for unemployment.

Aarav: (mock serious) Just wait. If you fail Class 12, your mom will turn your phone into a landline.

Liyan: (groaning) Don't even joke. She's already planning to swap my Wi-Fi for daily Bhagavad Gita lectures.

Ahana: (gasps) No Wi-Fi? That's not punishment. That's war crime.

[They laugh together. The sun dips below Indore's skyline. Cut to later that night in Liyan's room.]

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[Scene: Liyan's bedroom. Fan creaks. Books open. Phone hidden under chemistry notes.]

Liyan: (to himself) Okay… one YouTube video. Then I'll actually start chemistry. Promise.

[Suddenly, scratching from his cupboard.]

Liyan: (whispering) Please be a rat. Or… maybe a pizza delivery guy who took a wrong turn?

[The cupboard creaks open. Out waddles a fluffy white dog, standing upright on two legs, eyes glowing blue.]

Liyan: (screaming) MAAA! DOG! IN THE CUPBOARD!

[He jumps on the bed, wielding a pillow like a cricket bat.]

Dog: (calmly) Relax, Liyan Sharma. I am AI Support Unit 5678.

Liyan: (gaping) You… you TALK?!

Dog: Incorrect. I communicate. Talking is outdated.

Liyan: You're… a DOG!

Dog: Negative. Form chosen for optimal cuteness.

Liyan: (shaking) Cuteness?! Bro, I nearly donated my lungs to fear!

Dog: (blinks) Error: Emotional calibration mismatch.

[The dog raises a paw. Panels slide open in its fluffy pads, revealing glowing nano-slots with tiny futuristic tools tucked inside.]

Dog: Behold. My Nano-Paw Modules. Each paw contains technology designed to assist you.

Liyan: (blinking) Wait… your gadgets are in your paws?

Dog: Correct. Portable. Concealed. Also capable of producing popcorn.

[He presses a paw. A gadget whirs, spitting out two burnt popcorn kernels.]

Liyan: (deadpan) Amazing. You've invented… disappointment.

Dog: Ignore that. Main point: Fail Class 12, and your future becomes… very complicated.

[Liyan clutches his pillow, staring at the glowing-eyed dog wagging its tail like nothing's unusual.]

Narration (closing line):

Liyan had always prayed for a miracle.

He just hadn't expected it to arrive standing on two legs — with gadgets in its paws.