After witnessing the betrayal of his childhood love, Arthur awakens a forbidden power: Dominion, the ability to control corrupted beings. Broken but reborn, he sets out to build a new civilization from the ashes of his past—a city forged not with stone, but with flesh.

At its foundation lies Merlin, the girl who once held his heart and shattered it. Now, she serves as the city's cornerstone: the Goblin Progenitor, bound by guilt and desperation. In a twisted act of penitence, she offers herself to Arthur’s cause—not for lust, but for redemption. Her body becomes the cradle of a new race, her womb the forge of goblinkind.

As Arthur expands his dominion—breeding goblins, taming monsters, and erecting a city unlike any other—Merlin remains by his side, hoping that through sacrifice, she might reclaim a fragment of the love she destroyed.

But in a world ruled by power and corruption, can forgiveness bloom from submission? Or will Arthur’s empire rise on the bones of what once was love?

NSFW Disclaimer
This story contains explicit adult content, including graphic sexual themes, psychological manipulation, domination, and morally complex relationships. Scenes may involve non-traditional dynamics, reproductive control, and emotional trauma.

All characters depicted are fictional and of legal age within the universe of the story. This work is intended for mature audiences (18+) only and should not be interpreted as an endorsement of real-world behavior.

Reader discretion is strongly advised. If you are sensitive to themes of betrayal, obsessive love, or erotic power structures, proceed with caution.

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Chapter 33 - Story Check-In