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The Unseen Eleven

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The Unseen Eleven Jackie Storm has always carried the weight of a forgotten legacy. Born into a family blessed with natural soccer talent but too fearful to chase greatness, Jackie refuses to let his name fade into obscurity. With fire in his chest and dreams larger than the stadium lights, he vows to carve his place in history. But Team Dynamo, the fledgling squad Jackie calls family, has been dismissed as nothing more than underdogs — a team reborn just six months ago, now facing Spartans United, last year’s undefeated champions. On the way to their first qualifying match, doubt and fear creep into the team, threatening to break their spirit before the whistle even blows. It falls on Jackie, fiery Kevin Reyes, and the rest of the “Unseen Eleven” to rally together, pushing past scars, setbacks, and sacrifices to prove that heart can triumph over reputation. With every step into the roaring stadium, they carry the weight of those who believed in them — and the chance to rewrite their story. Win or lose, the world will remember their name.
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Chapter 1 - A SHORT STORY

A SHORT STORY. 

{TEAM BUS}. 

LUB-DUB......…LUD-DUB........LUD-BUD........LUD

BUD....Inhale....LUD-BUD...exhale. I can hear it, my heartbeat. As I stare 

into the rain, my head lightly brushing against the cold bus window. Time Speeds 

up, Time Slows down…exhale…. I feel cold, I can see my breath….breathe.... 

And my chest…. Tightening. Maybe we won't be able to qualify for the clash of 

champion's league. All my hopes and dreams would be crushed. I've been really 

optimistic about it, encouraging my comrades and acting like it's just another 

challenge for us to overcome. Of course people called me stupid for it but… I can't 

just accept, that after everything we've been through, this is where it all ends. It 

like felt nothing yesterday, but why now? Why is it only on the way to the stadium 

that all these feelings are flooding in? 

I've been passionate about soccer for as long as I can remember. Its kinda a 

family thing you see, well not really. Let me explain. My family has always been 

blessed with extraordinary soccer skills from my great great grand pa to my dad. 

But you see, for the larger part of the family, soccer was just a recreational 

distraction. A waste of time. Even though they had talent, they never took it 

beyond backyard matches and rented fields. Their names never known. Their skills 

never seen by the world. 

But I'm going to change that, I'm going to take my families name all the 

way up to the heavens. My name is Jackie Storm.... and I'll rise through every 

storm like a Tsunami. 

THE UNSEEN ELEVEN. 

Chapter One: Echoes on the field 

Finally I could hear the bus Whooshing, Signalling its stop. I held my chest 

and closed my eyes exhaling once more. 

"You don't look so hot storm, you good?" a voice asked from the seat in 

front of me. His short red hair sharp as ever, his voice both confident and warm. 

Wearing the blue and white track suits we all have on. I met his gaze with a nod, 

calming my nerves. 

"You don't worry about me Kevin, just make sure you can keep up with me" 

I replied. 

He chuckled, "Now that's more like it" 

He said joyfully until his eyes drifted across the rest of the team, their faces 

as though there was no soul beneath them. 

"Man…. atmosphere is pretty tense in here huh?" he muttered. 

"Yeah…" I responded, "Didn't even notice". 

"Well" he said. 

Kevin stood up suddenly, his voice booming through the heavy silence. 

"IT'S FRUSTRATING!" 

A large gasp of shock echoed in the bus as everyone was shocked by the 

sudden rage. 

"What's matter, Huh?!...you all look like ghosts! Have you really forgotten 

everything it took to get here?" 

He looked into our eyes, striking our hearts. 

Kevin: "Have you forgotten the sweat? The tears? The ones who believed in 

us, lifted us when we thought it impossible…. Even when it hurt their reputation?" 

He paused, the shouted. 

Kevin: "Have you forgotten your families?!" 

When he said that it was like lightning struck me. 

Kevin: "Principal Adrian fought tooth and nail just to get the board to 

reinstate the soccer team!" 

Kevin: "Don't you remember how hard it was to convince him in the first 

place?" 

Kevin: "Davis isn't here because he got injured, ensuring we make it to this 

qualifying match and all you can do now is wobble in your own self-pity?!" 

A loud silence filled the bus and Kevin clenched his jaw. 

Kevin: "Well I haven't forgotten!!!!!! I haven't forgotten any single detail" 

Kevin's eyes locked with ours like a bull staring at the red flag. 

Kevin: "We are up against last year's champions in our first ever qualifying 

match to cement our names in history, worrisome? Huh" 

Kevin: "Doesn't help that we're a team formed just 6 months ago, going up 

against the apex predator of the tournament" 

Once he said that everyone's mood seemed to dim, but not me I understood 

every little thing Kevin said and I rose up with him. 

Kevin: "I say so what!?" 

A short breath swept through the bus. 

"Kelvin's right", coach Ronald said as he rose from his seat all the way at 

the front. His bald head gleaming under the bus lights as he stood confidently in 

his crisp grey suit. 

"You kids have been through a lot to get here, if you should feel anything, it 

should be pride. You set a goal for yourselves and despite everything that stood 

against you, you made it to the qualifying round. Poetic, if you ask me." 

Coach Ronald: "Now you're up against Spartans united last years 

champions, to me that just another mountain to climb. And I've seen you climb 

plenty. So raise your heads and strike fire in your hearts. you've done it, you're 

finally here. All those sweat and tears weren't in vain" 

Jere slowly stood up and spoke. A sad expression on his face. His Short, 

spikey black hair hiding the shadow in his eyes. 

Jere: "But what if we lose? Then truly it was in vain." 

Storm: "No, it wouldn't" 

Jere: "what do you mean?" 

Coach: "Oh?" 

Storm: "Everybody expects us to lose, so if we do… we actually lose 

nothing. But if we play our hearts out… if we pressure them, fight them, even for a 

moment, they'll have to respect us." 

Storm: "They'll say, Team dynamo… the underdogs who held their own 

against the champions" 

Storm: "And if we win? Hell… even get just one goal? Or maybe even draw, 

I can tell you for sure our popularity would sky rocket and we would have the 

world on pause. They'll remember our name" 

Coach: "On point storm, our primary goal is to show the whole world what 

you're capable of. Win or lose, we're making noise on a grand stage. The only 

ones who stand to lose anything are the Spartans and you will put on show, I speak 

with certainty because I know my team" 

Coach: "Besides…remember our strategy? We've got an ace up our sleeves 

they won't be expecting…chuckles… Trust me, way I see it playing out we've 

already won this match" 

The Spark returned to everyone's eyes. Fists clenched. Backs straightened. 

Coach: "So… let's go out there and introduce Team dynamo to the world!!!" 

Team: " Yeahhhhhh". 

I could feel it, as we walked out of the bus. A powerful sensation brewing 

amongst us. It felt like a rally, I trusted my comrades and in that moment I knew 

together, we were capable of so much. A surge of confidence hit us as the 

journalists snapped photos and crowed our coach. I recognised some familiar faces 

in the press, there presence was encouraging. 

We made our way into the locker room, already hearing the thunderous 

crowd outside. Adrenaline rushed through all our veins. I opened my locker, and 

started to change into our gear. Then i looked myself in the mirror, taking in the 

moment. Our white and blue jersey was split by a bold diagonal thunder bolt. The 

sleeves and shorts were white, clean and sharp. I wore blue boots with 3 white 

stripes along the sides. Boots my dad kept for the day he'd step on the grand stage. 

But today, they'd taste the grass for the first time. 

I started into my silver eyes one more time, my cyan hair still sharp and 

wild. I knew no matter what would happen out there, I would give it everything. 

The name storm was going to be remembered. 

Coach Ronald walked into the locker room with his assistant coach 

following behind. 

"Alright, gather around," He said as Miriam his assistant coach, dressed in 

our blue and white tracksuit, her long blonde hair bouncing about turned on the 

screen. 

Coach: "Let's talk about our opponents" 

We all listened attentively. 

Coach: "You know them. Chief, Lombe, Mungonyinga. Three blades that cut 

through defences like paper" Coach began. Clips played in sync with his words. 

"These three dominated the score sheet last season. But the real problem here, is 

the reason they are called apex predators." 

He paused. 

"That's right Mungonyinga", 

"This guy kicks the ball like its being launched by a gorilla." 

"His 'eagle wind' technique is almost completely unstoppable at our current level." 

Coach: "Scoring a total of 245 goals in 52 matches is no joke. He holds the all-time 

record for most goals in the tournament." 

Silence rang then Logan Frost our goal keeper broke it. His pale skin and sable hair 

really standing out in the room as he leaned against the wall. 

Frost: "I regret not having more time to train, there is something I've been working 

on" 

"But I can't just pull it off yet." 

"If I could, I know for sure I would be able to catch that." 

His eyes closed, a slight guilt reflecting in his face. 

Frost: "Damnit… how are you all supposed to rely on me like this?" 

Monica: "Hey now frost, no need to beat yourself, for today's strategy your current 

skills are more than enough." 

Coach Ronald nodded in agreement and slight shock went across frost's face. 

Ashford our number 7 laid a reassuring hand on his shoulder smiling at him as we 

all did. 

Frost: "Tsk…. You guys" 

Coach: "Anyway… that's just their strikers. Their midfield is just as dangerous." 

"They typically play a diamond formation with three midfielders and 

Mungonyinga up front." 

"Some folks even call it the Bermuda Triangle." 

Cj our number 6, dancer, showboat and proud owner of an 80s afro chimed in with 

a laugh. 

Junior: Ayyoo… that's crazy Fo'sho', we out here dealing with anomalies, Hah! 

What a better way to make an entrance? No way in hell I'm letting they run that 

play!" 

Coach: "I'm counting on it, now let's talk about the good news." 

"Their defence is weak." 

"We are stronger In that department shouldn't be hard at all to bypass them. All 

you gotta do is survive their mid field and it's a home run to their goal keeper" 

Everyone: "Alright!...haha" 

Coach: "And just like on the pitch your fun will end when you meet their goal 

keeper, Mazumba" 

"This guy's technique the lion's gate is impenetrable. Arguably the only reason 

why Spartan's won in the first place but that's were our ace comes in." 

Coach: "Remember, they and the world are underestimating you and me. So go out 

their use it to your advantage and make them eat their words." 

Everyone: " Yeahhhh" 

Coach: "Okay so todays formation will be a 4,2,3,1, giving us 6 players in our half 

of the pitch to help keep possession and defend our goal and 4 in their half for 

attack." 

(Don't mind the colours couldn't find something blue and white) 

Coach: "if you have the ball make sure to get it to Kevin Reyes so that him and 

storm execute their plan. " 

I stared at Kevin as he stared back at me in agreement. 

Coach: "ill trust you two to know the right time to execute your plan" 

Monica: "lastly, since we haven't yet picked out our captain we will have to 

temporarily give one of you the title of captain." 

The room was buzzing with nervous energy, players whispering and 

shifting. A few hopeful looks shot at me. I wanted it, but I kept my hands folded in 

my lap, quiet. 

Coach: "Due to the sense of leader ship displayed earlier in the bus…" 

Coach didn't have to take such dramatic pause he had us all on our feet. 

Monica then pulled out the captain's band and approached me and Kevin. 

Coach: "We are more than happy to present the captains band to Kevin 

Reyes who will lead us into this match" 

The room went quiet for a heartbeat. 

Then cheers and claps filled the space as Monica presented the band like a 

prize to Kevin. He slid it up his bicep, a mixture of pride and determination shining 

in his eyes. 

I thought might feel jealous but no, in the moment it felt like the best 

decision possible. Kevin gave off a fiery grin 

The Teams energy shifted instantly, like a spark to dry grass, the spirit in the 

room flared. I caught Kevin's eye, his Grin contagious and in that moment, I knew 

the fight had already begun. 

Kevin: "Alright!Lets go! And bring the house down" 

Everyone: " Yeahhhh" 

It felt like time started speeding up again, so many people moving up and 

down in the locker room. I just sat their holding a soccer ball and honing my 

breath. I start remember my journey so far and how much this moment means to 

me. 

It was then I overhead coach's voice. 

Coach: " Mapalo… I'm pulling you from the starting eleven for this match" 

The room seemed to freeze. Jere turned, stunned. 

Jere: "Wait…what? Coach, i…I don't understand. This is our first real match" 

Coach: "I know what you're thinking, but I've made up my mind, Kelly will start 

in your place. I'll bring you on later if we need you". 

Jere: "But…" 

Coach: "I need a strong start and I need everyone at 100%. And right now… 

you're not there" 

Jere didn't blink. His knuckles turned white, It was the silence of someone who'd 

taken a hit but refused to fall. 

Jere : " …I understand". 

He didn't protest further. He just nodded, barely I might add and walked back to 

his spot. 

I watched him in silence. We all did. The room felt heavier. Jere in the starting 

line-up wasn't just a strategy, it meant something. But we all trust our coach so 

much, none of us protested further. 

"They are calling for us at the tunnel, lets go" a load voice called out. 

It was creed our number 3, he had a large body and definitely used it to his 

advantage on the pitch. 

"Right" I responded. 

We went and queued up at the player's tunnel. Reyes was in the lead and I 

stood behind him. The rain had come to a stop leaving behind slight mist on the 

pitch. My heart pounded. Adrenaline coursing through my veins. The thunderous 

roar of the crowd vibrated through the ground beneath our feet. I started 

controlling my breath again calming, myself. 

The Spartan's joined us in the player's tunnel in their dark purple gear with 

light purple checkers on their sleeves looking as striking as you would expect from 

a veteran team. They for the most part were bigger than us. Mazumba their captain 

stood beside Kevin and beside me the apex predator Mugonyinga. 

It felt like we could see the dark aura emitting around him. In his presence 

the air become thin. He had these big piercing eyes, a scar across his face and long 

straight dark hair. He looked like he just escaped a gothic prison after stealing the 

football skills of a demon from the underworld. 

His eyes stared ahead, as if we didn't exist. I found it mildly irritating but I 

felt like I needed his respect for me to carry on. And the oddest thing happens, he 

starts to hum a tune I couldn't quite recognize. 

The referees and flags men joined us in front and started to lead us into the 

filed. It felt as like we were charging into the light. In front of me with a smile 

Kevin confidently pushed forward into what appeared like the great beyond. I held 

back for a moment as I recalled a time when I was practicing in the backyard. 

The rain fell gently to the one me as I laid exhausted in the mud. My boots 

covered in mud, feeling the soggy dirt within them. It was then that I looked up to 

see my dad watching me from the porch. 

"Talent isn't enough, Jackie. I had it too. But In the end, I gave it up…It 

never paid the bills, it never gave back… it only took" 

"I'd hate to see the same thing happen to you" 

Remembering that, I smiled, clenched my fists and muttered. 

"It's showtime" 

I followed behind Kevin. 

Advancing into the light, into the war zone. 

The Final Chapter:

 WAR ZONE.