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Chapter 16 - Chapter 16: A Father’s Hope

The morning sun stretched its fingers through the small gaps in the forge's wooden walls, bathing the room in a soft orange glow. The heat from the smoldering coals radiated in waves, blending with the crispness of the early air that seeped in through the door. The man stood at the workbench, sleeves rolled high, his hands steady as they moved over the handle of the blade.

The sword was nearly complete, its every detail meticulously crafted. It was a perfect replica of his own blade, though scaled to fit a boy not yet in his prime. The blade itself gleamed in the dim light, polished to a mirror finish. Its edge was straight and true, sharp enough to cleave cleanly through flesh or wood. The steel bore faint ripples, a testament to the countless times it had been folded and hammered to achieve its perfect balance between hardness and flexibility.

The crossguard was simple yet elegant, an unadorned curve of darkened steel designed to protect without excess weight. The handle, made from the finest oak and wrapped in tightly wound leather, felt firm yet comfortable in his hand—a design meant for hours of use without strain. The pommel was a single piece of polished iron, shaped into a small, rounded disk—a counterbalance that made the weapon feel like an extension of the hand.

The man worked carefully on the handle, carving intricate designs into the wood beneath the leather wrapping. He etched patterns of waves and mountains, symbols of their home, and a single rune of his own—a mark that stood for legacy. His knife moved with precision, guided by hands that had known both destruction and creation. Once the carving was complete, he carefully wrapped the leather over the grip, securing it tightly to ensure a firm hold even in battle.

The sword was finished, but it needed a home. He reached for the leather sheath he had crafted the day before. It was simple yet sturdy, designed for the boy to carry on his back. The leather was soft to the touch but reinforced with stitching that would withstand years of wear. It bore no embellishments, only function, because the boy's deeds—not the weapon—would speak for themselves.

He slid the blade into the sheath and held it in his hands for a moment, testing its balance one last time. Even as the boy grew older, the sword would remain useful—perhaps as a secondary weapon if he learned to wield two blades, as he himself had once done.

The blacksmith, standing silently at the edge of the forge, cleared his throat softly. "It's ready, then?"

The man nodded and slung the sword over his back. "It is."

The blacksmith hesitated before speaking again. "Your son… he's lucky. Not just for the blade, but for what you've given him. Some boys don't understand what they have until it's too late."

The man offered a faint smile but didn't respond immediately. As he turned to leave, his thoughts lingered on the blacksmith's words. Lucky? No. Luck spoils, and fortune weakens the spine.

He glanced down at the blade, its weight barely noticeable after years of carrying weapons heavier than this one. History does not speak kindly of the sons of great men. They inherit the name but not the resolve. They bask in their fathers' light until it blinds them, and they stumble into obscurity.

His jaw tightened, his stride steady. But what if one could become great in his own right? Not through the shadow of his father, but through his own sweat, his own blood, his own fire? Could a man forge a legend from both legacy and struggle?

The faint smile returned, sharper now, edged with purpose. I will make the first.

As he walked through the village, the bustle of daily chores began to stir around him. A woman carrying a basket of firewood paused, clutching it tighter as her eyes flicked to the sword on his back. She dipped her head slightly but didn't speak. A man repairing his fishing nets straightened as the man passed, watching him with quiet respect before returning to his work. Children, who had been chasing one another along the path, fell silent when they saw him, their game forgotten as they stared wide-eyed.

Two younger men, leaning against a fence, stepped aside quickly when they saw him approach. One nodded deferentially. "Good morning," he said, his voice almost too soft to hear.

"Morning," the man replied, his tone courteous but brief.

As he passed, one of the younger men leaned toward the other. "Do you think the blade is for his son?"

"Has to be," the other whispered. "Imagine having a father like that. They say he once—"

The man's footsteps didn't falter, though he caught every word. He let it pass, his focus already ahead.

Near the well, a woman drawing water turned toward him, her face lighting up with a brief smile. "Good day," she said, dipping her head.

"And to you," he replied, his voice even, his presence as steady as the rhythm of his strides.

He reached the edge of the field, where his son moved through the motions of practice. The boy's wooden sword flashed in the morning light, his strikes quick but unrefined, his stance still lacking the balance of a seasoned fighter. Yet there was determination in every movement, a hunger to improve.

"You're working hard," the man said as he approached, his voice steady but carrying a faint note of approval. The boy turned, startled but grinning when he saw him.

"I want to be strong," the boy said, his chest heaving from exertion.

The man unslung the sheath from his back and held it out. "You deserve a more appropriate weapon," he said. "But remember: a sword is only as strong as the one who wields it. Treat it well."

The boy's eyes widened as he took the sheath, his hands trembling slightly. He pulled the blade free, and the sunlight caught the steel, sending a flash of brilliance across the field. The weight of the sword was perfect—not too heavy, not too light—and the leather-wrapped grip felt alive in his hands, warm and steady. The scent of polished steel mixed with the faint aroma of oak and leather. The edge whispered with every movement, a subtle reminder of its deadly purpose.

"It's… it's just like yours," the boy said, his voice hushed with awe.

The man nodded. "It is. And one day, when you're ready, you'll take up mine. But until then, this is yours. Practice hard, and know this: when I'm away, your mother and sister's lives will depend on you. That is a responsibility greater than any battle."

The boy's grip tightened on the sword, and his expression shifted from astonishment to determination. "I won't let you down."

The man stepped back, watching as the boy returned to his training, this time with renewed energy. Each strike of the blade was sharper, each movement more deliberate. The boy's focus was unshakable, the promise of the sword spurring him to greater heights. As the sun began to set, he stepped forward to correct his son's stance, offering quiet pointers and demonstrating techniques with a patience that belied his own intensity.

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