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If the Yuan-Swallowing Art refined his soul, this power reshaped his body to its absolute limits.
Every membrane, bone, and cell underwent reinforcement, strengthening him to a terrifying degree.
"Ah!"
Pain shot through him as though his body had been torn apart and reassembled in perfect form.
Too painful…
Yet, he remained fully conscious, experiencing each subtle change with clarity.
The agony subsided quickly. Beads of sweat coated his body, as if he had endured a night of extreme training.
But despite this, Ye Chen felt invigorated....ready to spar with Nalan Yanran for hours without tiring.
Clenching his fists, he felt the raw power coursing through his muscles.
With this body alone, I could surpass my former self.
The Dragon-Elephant Physique was incredible....and this was just the beginning. With proper body refinement, he could fully awaken its potential.
Then, even mountains could crumble under his strikes.
My body… is more terrifying than a magical beast's!
Compared to magical beasts, humans were weak....but with the Dragon-Elephant Physique, Ye Chen could dominate them effortlessly.
He bent down and performed a thousand push-ups in a single breath, without the slightest fatigue.
Heh… this endurance is truly extraordinary.
A mischievous grin flickered across his face.
"Extract Qian-Kun Treasure Box."
Purple light shimmered, materializing a small box in his hands, etched with intricate ancient patterns.
Ding!
Please perform blood-binding to claim ownership.
Ye Chen paused, then pricked his finger, letting a drop of blood fall onto the box.
Whoosh!
The treasure box absorbed his blood and transformed into a purple light, merging seamlessly with his palm.
When he looked closely, the box had vanished....but a miniature tattoo, replicating the box's pattern, appeared on his hand.
Simultaneously, a stream of information flooded his mind, absorbed instantly.
With a thought, his body vanished from the room entirely.
When his vision returned, the surroundings had completely changed.
Before him lay a spacious area the size of a plaza, enveloped in a gray mist.
So this is the inner world of the Qian-Kun Treasure Box…
Ye Chen's eyes gleamed. Unlike his personal storage rings, which couldn't hold living beings, this miniature world could support life.
And as he had pledged his blood, the tiny world was already autonomously absorbing energy from the outside. Soon, it would be filled with enough energy for cultivation.
I could even train here in safety…
Ye Chen gazed at the vast, plaza-sized world inside the Qian-Kun Treasure Box and felt an immense sense of satisfaction.
Perfect… this place is ideal for hiding beauties.
And the best part? It was completely secret.....no one could ever find it.
A sudden thought struck him. This treasure box wasn't just a gift.....it could become his secret base.
If danger ever approached, he could retreat here instantly, safe from prying eyes.
And with such an enormous space, he could store virtually anything. The possibilities were endless.
In the next moment, Ye Chen focused his mind and exited the miniature world, returning to the exact spot in his room where he had vanished.
So that's how it works. Once I enter the Qian-Kun Treasure Box, I'll always reappear at the same fixed location. He smiled in realization.
"System… extract the Puppet Pill."
He turned his thoughts to the final system reward and silently commanded.
A ripple of energy formed in the void, and a small black pill appeared in his palm.
Just one tiny pill… and it can completely control any creature below the Dou Sect level? Fully obedient to me?
Ye Chen couldn't help but marvel. This system reward was truly extraordinary.
If used wisely, this single pill could add a Dou Emperor-level subordinate under his control.
At the Dou Emperor level, he could essentially move freely across the entire Gamma Empire.
And yet, one simple pill could completely subjugate such a powerful being. Not even a seventh-grade elixir could achieve this, he thought.
Having read the original story, he had never encountered anything like it.
Clearly, this Puppet Pill didn't originate from the Dou Qi Continent.
Otherwise, such a miraculous and obscure pill would not remain unknown.
Ye Chen carefully placed the pill into a delicate jade vial, then stored it inside the Qian-Kun Treasure Box.
He wasn't about to waste such power on trivial things. Letting it control small animals might be amusing, but it was a poor use of such a treasure.
"System… extract the Nine-Star Dou Sect Experience Card."
Finally, he focused on the experience card reward. In an instant, a golden card appeared floating in front of him.
This one card… can grant me temporary Nine-Star Dou Sect strength?
Though skeptical, he reminded himself: this was a system reward.
System quality, guaranteed.
The system was omnipotent. If it said the card granted such power, then there was no doubt it was true.
It's a consumable… I must save it for a critical moment.
Ye Chen tossed the golden card into the miniature world. He had made up his mind...not to use it until his life depended on it.
With that, he had fully claimed the entire Super Reward Package.
And he was more than satisfied.
Yuan-Swallowing Art would accelerate his cultivation.
Nine-Star Dou Sect Card and Qian-Kun Treasure Box provided survival and safety.
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