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Chapter 1 - The Mistake

This makes no sense. How did I end up here? I have lived my entire life living by the book. I have followed all of the rules. Never missed church, donated to charity, prayed every night. So why am I here?

Let me back up for a minute. My name is Alice. Alice Jones. Red hair, brown eyes. Goody two shoes type, and everything else that comes along with introductions. Oh, and I just died. I am currently sitting in a lobby in a building, located in Hell, waiting for my name to be called. The building was called "The Court of Punishments". The lobby was just a plain, white room with a bunch of benches in it. The benches were filled with rows of people. The type of people you would expect to see in Hell. There was one singular door that leads to the courtroom. This is where I will find out my eternal fate. But I shouldn't be here. Someone made a mistake.

Why is it a mistake you may ask? I lived my life through the Church. I should be in heaven. Honestly, I shouldn't even be dead. I'm only 21. I was on my way to graduation, from the top university. Valedictorian. I spent my entire life studying, making good grades. I never strayed. I'm a virgin, I mind my manners. I help those who need it. I cuss occasionally, more than I should, but really that's the worst that I do. I was almost to the field where the stage for graduation was. Just had to cross one more street. Then suddenly just…darkness.

Alice. Your turn.

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