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Chapter 45 - Ash of Burning Bodies

 

### **1: The Shattered City** 

The forest of Nimora was no more. Trees that once whispered secrets now screamed. The earth bled black ichor. The sky... *the sky had been set on fire*. 

Adam, Zera, and Laboubo (hidden in Adam's collar) stood at the cliff overlooking the ruins of **Alfaris**—where a fortress of fused bones rose like a graveyard given architecture. 

Zera tightened her grip on her flame-tipped spear. The blood streaking her face wasn't hers. Adam, meanwhile, carried something new in his posture since the battle with the two-winged beast—*a predator's grace*. 

Laboubo's whisper slithered into Adam's ear: 

> *"This isn't war... It's an *extermination*."* 

Adam bared his teeth: 

*"Then we'll be the plague that kills the plague."* 

They descended into hell. 

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### **2: The Manufactured Inferno** 

The streets of Alfaris trembled beneath them. Abandoned houses burst open, disgorging *things* that might have been human once—now just melted flesh and exposed viscera, wielding bone-weapons, laughing through lipless mouths. 

Zera's battle cry rent the air: 

> *"No mercy! They're already dead!"* 

Adam hurled a burning incantation. Fire spiraled around his arm, coalescing into a blade of pure flame. His first strike turned a creature to ash—but two more crawled from its remains. 

Laboubo shrieked: 

> *"Left! Above! Below! They multiply like *cancer*!"* 

The battle was a grotesque ballet. Blood painted the streets, then the sky itself. Zera slammed her spear into the ground—a shockwave launched dozens of corpses airborne. She was bleeding from her ears, eyes, fingertips... *and laughing*. 

Adam, decapitating a three-headed abomination: 

*"You're *enjoying* this?"* 

Zera grinned as she impaled a creature: 

*"I've never felt more alive in a hundred years."* 

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### **3: The Summoned** 

The earth split. From the fissure rose a serpent of fire and soot—its eyes shattered glass, its body slithering over the screams of dead children. Its voice vibrated in their bones: 

> *"Who dares defile Alfaris? Who summons *me*?"* 

Adam stepped forward, grandmother's pendant blazing: 

*"I've come to finish what she started... Whether as her heir or her *executioner*."* 

The serpent laughed—a sound like breaking spines: 

> *"She killed me once... but buried me poorly. And you? You'll *pay*."* 

It struck at light-speed—but Zera intercepted with her spear. The collision *shattered the sky*. 

Laboubo wailed: 

> *"It's not just a beast—it's one of the *Storm Keys*!"* 

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### **4: The Fracture** 

The serpent halted abruptly. 

> *"I've opened the Gate. Now Nimora *breaks*."* 

Above them, the sky *tore*. Black tendrils pulsed like veins of a dead god. From the rift fell... *things*. Not bodies. *Not quite memories either*. 

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### **5: The Choice** 

Laboubo trembled: 

*"Adam! If we don't seal the rift now—"* 

But Adam hesitated. From within the tear... *he heard her*. 

The grandmother's voice, clearer than ever: 

> *"Don't trust even me, Adam."* 

He turned to Zera: 

*"I'm going in. Hold them off."* 

She spat blood: 

*"If you don't return, I'll storm heaven itself to drag you back—dead or alive."* 

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### **6: The Descent** 

Adam leapt into the rift—into the wound of the world. Inside: 

- **A colorless void** 

- **Millions of whispering faces** 

- **And something... *smiling* back** 

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### **🔥 Closing Scene:** 

Zera kneels in the ruins, her spear burning like a candle in a slaughterhouse. Above her, the rift pulses—and within it, Adam isn't screaming. 

*He's smiling.* 

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### **⚔️ Key Enhancements:** 

1. **Zera's Bloodlust**: Her laughter mid-battle reveals her *true nature*—perhaps she's part of Nimora's original sin. 

2. **The Serpent's Truth**: As a "Storm Key," it hints at a *greater design* behind Nimora's apocalypse. 

3. **Adam's Smile**: The rift is showing him something *worse than death*... and he's *accepting it*. 

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