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Chapter 5 - The Boy Who Broke Everything

Some people yell at others… because they're too scared to talk to themselves."

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Scene:

A deserted, rusted industrial zone in Ningenai.

Crumbling walls. Broken pipes. The air itself felt... heavy.

Almost no one came here —

Because Kuro lived here.

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Saito had come because Mira told him:

> "He's intense. But if you understand him…

maybe you'll start understanding yourself too."

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Kuro — black hoodie, fierce eyes, jaw always clenched.

He spray-painted graffiti on the walls — filled with rage.

Jagged words. Broken shapes.

> "They called me broken.

So I broke everything."

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Saito quietly approached him.

But Kuro had already noticed.

Kuro (mocking):

"Well well... Mr. Perfect, huh?

You lost or just here to sketch people's pain?"

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Saito didn't flinch.

For the first time, he wasn't hiding behind his usual calm.

He wasn't in his world of trophies anymore.

Saito (gently):

"I just… want to understand.

Understand you."

Kuro (laughs coldly):

"Understand me?

You?

You're the guy no one ever rejected.

You've never tasted failure.

You're the golden boy they hang on posters."

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That one stung.

Saito stayed quiet.

Kuro stepped closer. Really close.

Kuro (low and bitter):

"I was never perfect.

I just wanted to be... enough.

But people always remember the smallest mistakes."

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Flashback:

Kuro stands in front of his father, holding a report card.

Just one subject — a 'C'.

Father (disgusted):

"A C?

You'll never become anything.

You just talk big. Do nothing."

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Back to present:

Kuro:

"When people keep telling you that you're nothing...

one day, you believe them."

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Saito had no clever words.

Just guilt in his eyes.

Saito (softly):

"...No one's ever looked at me like that.

They just keep praising me.

And I... thought that's what life is."

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Kuro bursts out.

All the pain explodes.

Kuro:

"I broke!

But they wanted me to smile like nothing happened!

Perfect people get forgiven for everything…

Imperfect ones?

They're remembered only for their mistakes!"

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Suddenly, he picks up a rock —

And SMASHES it against an old mirror.

Glass shatters.

In each broken shard — his face reflects back.

Different expressions. Different pieces.

Kuro:

"I'm a mirror.

Every angle shows something else.

But people only look at the version…

that fits their comfort."

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Saito stares silently.

Then, picks up one shard —

And sees himself.

Saito (thinking):

"…I've only been what they made me into."

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Silence.

No drama. Just rawness.

Saito quietly sits beside Kuro.

Doesn't say a word.

Kuro (softer now):

"When I first saw you…

I wanted to scream at you.

But now…

Maybe for the first time…

I don't feel like screaming."

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Night falls.

Kuro finishes a new piece of graffiti.

He writes:

> "I'm still broken.

But I don't blame anyone anymore."

He tosses the spray can to Saito.

Kuro:

"Go ahead. Write your truth."

Saito thinks for a second —

Then writes:

> "I was always praised…

And yet, I never felt proud."

Kuro smirks.

His first real smile.

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Chapter End Note (Saito's POV):

> "Kuro showed me another face of life —

The rage. The breaking. The screaming…

They're all signs of being alive.

Maybe…

I should've broken a long time ago."

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TO BE CONTINUED…

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