Author: hello everyone before I actually start the story I just wanted to tell you all once more please give me your ideas your suggestions your constructive criticism I believe that your ideas can help shape a story in ways that regular storytellers can't the reason I say this is because when you add a suggestion to a story it makes people feel a part of something like they helped in this creation and I want all of you to be a part of my creation so please I need your criticism your your opinions everything I have a really big end game plan and I really really need help with some of the struggles the main character will face among the way I already have one but I feel like it's too soon so please feel free to comment anyway let us begin.
Author: also fasting before we start I wanted to make some sort of relationship between the main character and another monster like the main character raised it from a hatchling or like safety and it was forever in the main characters favor or something let me know what monster you would like to see that of I can list a few right now so you can make a decision when you're done.
1.espinas
2.astalos
3.tigrex
4.gypceros
Ajax over the last week we seen him has grown increasingly large already the size of a full adult glavenus and still in his teens after his encounter with that rathalos well it had evolved as well becoming purplish blue with extra tail spikes and an blue flame mark on its back and it's flame color turned pinkish with blue sparks and it's carapace has cracks in it from how hot it's inside are.
And spark power just generates off its body from the mix of minerals and heat making its body highly explosive meanwhile with the research commission Miko and patch we're in front of the entirety of the hunters guild as the guild leader spoke supreme commander spoke commander Tristan:researcher Miko Rihanna And patch Rihanna you have obtained new data of considered to be ultra rare glavenus species and witnessed new turf wars is that correct.
Miko nodded And spoke Miko:the way it's thought was unprecedented it was like it had a human consciousness capable of thinking of simple plans such as setting traps.
Miko procedure 2 hook up her son's recording to a movie recorder.
And it's sprung to life on a large piece of parchment they watched Ajax,s battle with duramboros and seen him trap an mitzutsune and then have a turf war with that same mitzutsune and immediately after that get into an turf war with rathalos activating some kind of black flames and then shooting it down with a bolt of dragon energy taking it directly out of the sky only to slam it on The ground Three times.
As each head of different divisions within the guild were stunned at the brutality of the turf wars supreme Commander Tristan: it seems this wyvern's definitely earned the brute within its name we'll have to study the species further set up a no hunting zone in the moonlight plains this unique ecosystem needs to be protected until we can truly assure so everything about this new Ultra species since you two know the most about it you will be the ones to lead the expedition.
Supreme Commander Tristan: oh and have you thought of the name for this new Ultra species?. Miko and patch looked between each other patch spoke up patch:we call it the 'abyssal glavenus' because it's black flame reminds us of the fires of the abyss and when enraged the flames turn white symbolizing yin and yang.
Immediately Miko patch and two hunters got geared up and returned to the moonlight plains meanwhile news had been published an ultra rare and powerful monster had recently appeared a new species of glavenus apparently as people read the newspaper this also attracted some unwanted attention.
Rogue hunters that had been kicked out of their guild or have killed endangered or baby monsters only to be kicked out of their guilds for doing such atrocities immediately after getting word two hunters one of Bowman and the other a heavygun user in particularly taking interest they would split the loot and use ajax's ultra rare body parts to build new weapons.
And then sell them for a high price on the black market hell they might even capture him and sell him to the highest bidder they snickered after receiving the location after they paid off one of the quest givers they immediately took a shortcut to get around the expedition team.
Meanwhile while this was going on ajax was drinking some water at the marsh when something came stomping in literally one of the most annoying things that could ever appear and one of the most powerful a male deviljho in extremely hungry one too you had a scar over his eye and x-shaped scratch on the side of his leg and tons of arrow and sword wounds all over his body indicated he's been attacked by a lot of hunters.
The deviljho roared and contested ajax for his kill ajax not wanting to get on an deviljho bad side proceeded to pick up his kill in his mouth and toss it to the deviljho who ate it with true gusto as ajax was about to leave he remembered something extremely crucial about deviljho.
They're like calamities they eat and consume everything in an ecosystem disrupting it immediately he turned around not letting his new home which he had recently conquered be destroyed by some gluttonous PICKLE! Deviljho sensing it was just called a slur in its mind roared at Ajax and started kicking his foot backwards.
Ready for a brute Force charge ajax decided to meet the challenge now deviljho was 1x the size Ajax as the two head-butted each other pushing back against each other for dominance deviljho lifted his head up disrupting the head butt opening his jaw and clamping it around Ajax neck.
Before lifting him in the air slamming him into the ground and tossing him through the tall ajax grunted and growled in pain and noticed as deviljho lowered its head and started charging forward planning to smash Ajax into the mountain behind him.
Ajax while still laying down trying to look as vulnerable as possible proceeded have black flames swell up in his throat before firing a black fireball Right directly and deviljho center of his brain expanding and covering half of its whole body the force of the impact hitting his head made deviljho turn to the side and fall over literally tumbling and extra 2 m away due to its gigantic size.
Deviljho began to obtain burn marks from how hot the black fire was you thought rolling in the dirt would put it out no no these flames literally super heat water you would literally have to pay you in a hill of dirt in order to get them to go deviljho is still a jho though is it tumbled back onto its feet so did Ajax.
As the two apex predator stared off at each other ajax drug his sword tail across the ground igniting it in Black flames just to make his attacks extra effective ajax proceeded to let a flame free hang in his throat fire constantly flowing out both sides of his mouth looking like an enraged dragon if they had a sword for a tail.
Deviljho entered chaos mode dragon energy pouring out of its mouth it's muscles bulging and it's eyes of blaze with dragon energy and rage as deviljho launched a breath attack of dragon energy while ajax was charging it exploded knocking him back there as deviljho charge he swung his tail forward with all his might while he was still grounded knocking deviljho off course into a tree.
Ajax stumbled up from his stun and thought internally ajax:'why did that affect me so much and why do I feel a little weaker wait a minute I possess dragon energy as well and the only thing that can damage a monster with dragon energy is another monster with dragon energy.' it was there he realized this was a Battle of endurance who could endure more dragon energy.
Immediately he charged at deviljho as deviljho hold its head back and swung it forward with its jaw wide open ready for a devastating chomp Ajax jumped to the side did a backflip with his tail still on the fire and severed the entirety of deviljho tail clean off and due to the heat the wound was castrated immediately after cut meaning that tail would never grow back.
Ajax also remembered how deviljho when needing to recover strength would eat their own tails and immediately scooped up its tail in his Jaws and literally using his flames in his throat slowly swallowed it down till it was completely gone deviljho watched extremely enraged not only did Ajax cut off its tail he straight up swallowed it whole.
Deviljho was getting tired dragon energy drained stamina like way too quickly but old jho wouldn't give up that easily as the two charged at each other biting onto each of their necks trying to tussle each other down Ajax immediately realize that he was losing footing stabbed his tailblade into the ground.
And started tussling on even terms with deviljho ajax after 2 minutes of trying to wrestle each other pulled his tail out of the ground stop trying to tussle with deviljho removing his making deviljho stumble and release its grip.
Due to the lack of the other Force pushing back against it deviljho recovered only for Ajax imbued his tail with dragon energy and jumped up and slash him on his right side running down his rib cage to his thigh making deviljho lose some of its scales.
Deviljho was getting weaker the dragon energy in that slash had started to do its job but still deviljho would not back down as he got ready to charge forward ajax focused his dragon energy his scales turning purple as dragon energy surged on the bladed part of his tail.
Immediately he started swinging his tail wildly doing all 360s putting small gases and large cuts all over deviljho for biting onto his tail building up Force and swinging that's his tail flew up diagonally from the left putting a gigantic gash under deviljho throat severely wounded with heavy amounts of dragon energy surging through its body.
Deviljho falls face forward kicking up a lot of dust as it slowly closed its and fully died that fight had Ajax extremely hungry so hungry in fact he could eat an whole deviljho.....😈😈😈 Ajax used his tailblade to cut open deviljho and devour him from the inside eating his intestines organ's heart and even dragon sac no part went unwasted not in the skin.
All that remained was one large skeleton and an deviljho head meanwhile the researchers had arrived and set up camp in one of the super flat tree tops as Miko and patch went out to observe ajax the two hunters grabbed orange flag that started making a perimeter for the no hunting zone.
When the duo finally located Ajax they witnessed the horrific sight of him eating an fully grown deviljho down to the bones literally suddenly a large steel arrow with dynamite nailed itself directly in ajax steel jaw before exploding knocking him over.
As ajax got up stunned as heck shaking his head looking around then he noticed them in the tall grass hunters as he assumed considering he didn't know they were rogue the one with the bow fired another only for ajax to deflect the arrow bolt and run past them and cut down a tree that was right next to them.
Making it fall over directly under the luckily they dodged out of the way and gave Chase as ajax had an extremely well thought out plan Miko and patch followed to make sure to intervene if necessary as ajax let them to the Marsh he began swaying his tail on the ground back and forth as the two hunters came out of the tall Grass he drug his tail on the ground igniting it in Black flames one of them spoke while dodging.
Rouge hunter:so the rumor was true your the wyvern of the black flames. Ajax only growled in response as they stepped just close enough he spun around and cut down a tree startling an grazing herd of aptonoth who had assumed a predator was stalking them causing them to stampede directly into the Hunter's direction knocking over another dead tree forcing the hunters to roll out the way which gave way.
For Ajax to grab the hunter with the bow gun by the arm flailing him around until *CRUCRAK!* The hunters arm got bitten off as he flew into the water of the marsh ajax simply swallowed his whole arm meanwhile the hunter had managed to stand up while screaming and absolute agony blood gushing like a fountain the smell of the blood awakened another predator as something began creeping up on him as he continued to scream suddenly a pair of Jaws bit deep into his torso it was mitzutsune they had entered a blood frenzy.
And literally beat the guy in half and swallowing the top half of his body leaving the other half for an gauji to swallow the other rogue hunter in absolute fear of watching his partner literally get his arm bit off and then 5 seconds later get bitten in half as he was about to run patch grabbed him by the back of his collar.
Patch asked questionably patch: where are you going Mr. Immediately the rogue Hunter turned around and got on his knees and started begging rouge hunter: please take me away please I don't want to be here anymore that that thing got my friend killed take me to jail I'll serve my time please please just give me away from it.
Patch shrugged and pulled out a pair of handcuffs he had just in case there was a rogue Hunter after slapping the cuffs on him they waited for the building team to arrive as the two hunters took the rogue Hunter back to the guild to answer for his crimes he was charged 8 months for killing an baby rajang 30 days for evading arrest and another month for attempting to hunt in an unauthorized area and total bringing his sentence.
To 1 year after getting the perimeter built they tagged all the monsters that weren't already tagged in order to see if they would escape their wild captivity so they could be returned if they ever did escape.
Author: and that's the end also I wanted to let you guys pick two things you see I'm having problems with my first novel I started writing the saiyan demigod I want an harem type relationship but I want you guys to choose who should be his first
1.minor god
2.cerulian
3.angel+goddes of destruction
4.Supreme mother of angels
5.goddess of time