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Snake of Cause

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When Alex Chen dies in a high-speed motorcycle crash, he expects nothing more than oblivion. Instead, he awakens beneath a triple-shadowed sky in a world ruled not by physics, but by karma — where cause and effect are forces to be bent, traded, and weaponized. Reborn into a realm of cultivators and karmic contracts, Alex finds himself gifted with the one thing he's always understood best: a system. Cold, calculating, and emotionally detached, he quickly realizes this world’s cultivation is built on exploiting the invisible threads that connect action to consequence — and he intends to master them all. Armed with a mind like a machine and a soul scrubbed clean of sentiment, Alex steps into a new life where fate is currency and manipulation is cultivation. As he ascends through deadly trials, spiritual economies, and cosmic debts, one question guides him: if karma is a machine, can a man become its engineer? Snake of Cause is a cerebral and gritty fantasy that blends Eastern cultivation tropes with Western philosophical fatalism, featuring a morally ambiguous antihero who seeks not justice — only control.
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Chapter 1 - The Price of Velocity

The speedometer read 140 mph when Alex Chen felt the first tremor of inevitability.

His Kawasaki Ninja carved through the midnight interstate like a blade through silk, engine screaming its mechanical hymn into the darkness. The world blurred past—white lines becoming streams of light, distant taillights smearing into red comets. Twenty years old, invincible, untouchable. The kind of immortality that came with youth and a motorcycle that could outrun consequence itself.

Or so he believed.

The call had come at 11:47 PM. His ex-girlfriend Ting Ting, voice cracking through tears and static: "Alex, please. I made a mistake. I need you." Three months of radio silence, three months of cold fury crystallizing in his chest, and now this. He'd thrown on his jacket without thinking, kicked his bike to life, and launched himself into the night like a missile seeking its target.

The highway stretched ahead, empty and inviting. Alex leaned into the machine, feeling the familiar rush as speed compressed time and space into a singular point of pure motion. 120 mph. 130. 140. Each increment a small rebellion against the laws that governed lesser mortals.

He'd always been calculating, even as a child. While other kids threw tantrums, Alex observed patterns. Cause and effect. Push here, get that. Smile this way, adults give you what you want. He'd learned early that the world was a vast machine of interactions, and those who understood the gears could make it turn to their advantage.

The motorcycle was simply another tool in that equation. Raw velocity translated to compressed time, compressed time to efficiency, efficiency to control. Sarah wanted him? He'd arrive on his terms, when he chose, how he chose. The speed wasn't recklessness—it was power.

The deer materialized from the darkness like a theorem becoming flesh.

Time dilated. Physics slowed to a crawl as Alex's mind processed the variables with crystalline clarity. Deer, thirty yards ahead. Velocity: 142 mph. Mass of bike and rider: 520 pounds. Kinetic energy: lethal. Reaction time: insufficient. Margin for error: zero.

In that suspended moment, Alex felt something he'd never experienced before—the sensation of being a variable in someone else's equation. The deer, startled by headlights, had already committed to its trajectory. Two paths converging on a single point in space-time, and no amount of calculation could rewrite the outcome.

He didn't brake. There wasn't time for fear, only for observation. As the deer's eyes reflected his headlight like twin mirrors, Alex noted with detached fascination how the universe seemed to pause, holding its breath before the inevitable collision. Cause and effect, stripped to its purest form.

The impact occurred at exactly 12:23 AM.

Alex Chen died at 12:24 AM, his final thought a strange mixture of regret and curiosity about what variables he'd failed to account for.

Consciousness returned like water filling an empty vessel—slowly, then all at once.

Alex opened eyes that weren't quite his own and stared up at a sky painted in impossible colors. Violet clouds drifted across a bronze sun that cast shadows in three directions. The very air hummed with energy that made his skin—this new skin—tingle with unfamiliar sensations.

He sat up carefully, taking inventory. Different body—leaner, harder, with calluses on hands that had never held a motorcycle throttle. Different clothes—rough-spun fabric in earth tones, utilitarian and worn. Different world, clearly. The vegetation around him grew in spirals and fractals, leaves that shifted color as he watched, trees whose bark seemed to pulse with internal light.

But the mind behind these new eyes remained unchanged. Alex Chen, twenty years old forever, calculating and cold as winter steel.

Interesting.

The transition hadn't dulled his analytical nature. If anything, death and rebirth had stripped away the last vestiges of sentiment, leaving only the core logic that had always driven him. He examined his situation with the same detachment he'd once reserved for chess problems and market trends.

Fact one: He was alive, or something approximating it. Fact two: This wasn't Earth. Fact three: The energy in the air suggested laws of physics different from those he'd known. Fact four: This represented an opportunity.

He rose to his feet, testing the responsiveness of this new form. Adequate. The body was young, healthy, and bore the subtle marks of someone accustomed to hardship. Previous owner had died recently—he could sense it in the way the flesh still held traces of trauma, invisible wounds that had nothing to do with physical injury.

How curious that death should prove to be merely another variable in a larger equation.

A sound reached his ears—voices, distant but approaching. Alex turned toward the source and saw figures moving through the strange forest. Robed figures carrying implements that gleamed with the same inner light as the trees. Cultivators, his new memories whispered. Practitioners of arts that transformed the very fabric of reality through will and understanding.

He stood motionless as they approached, a pale figure in rough clothing beneath an alien sky. When the first robed cultivator raised a hand wreathed in ethereal fire, Alex didn't flinch. He simply observed, cataloging details, noting the way energy moved around the man like visible air currents.

"Another fallen initiate," the cultivator said, his voice carrying overtones that seemed to echo in frequencies Alex could feel in his bones. "The Karmic Trials claim more each season."

Karmic Trials. The words resonated in Alex's consciousness like a bell struck in a cathedral. Knowledge that wasn't quite his own began to surface—fragments of understanding about a cultivation system based not on accumulating raw power, but on mastering the threads that connected cause to effect.

A system where karma itself could be harvested, traded, manipulated.

A system perfectly suited to someone who had always seen the world as a vast machine of interactions waiting to be exploited.

Alex looked up at the bronze sun casting its triple shadows and felt something that might have been satisfaction, if satisfaction were a calculation rather than an emotion. He had died pursuing a woman who had represented nothing more than unfinished business. He had been reborn into a world where unfinished business could be bought, sold, and rewritten according to his will.

The cultivator extended a hand. "Come, boy. The Academy awaits, and your thread has led you here for a reason."

Alex took the offered hand, feeling the electric tingle of karmic energy pass between them like a contract being signed. Yes, he thought, this would do nicely. This would do very nicely indeed.

Behind them, the spiral trees whispered secrets in a language older than mortality, and the wind carried the scent of possibilities vast as eternity itself.

The snake had found its garden.