Ficool

Chapter 6 - Chapter Five — The Trial of Flame and Steel

The courtyard of the Tempest Moon Sect was transformed overnight.

Where once only worn sparring mats and cracked stone tiles sprawled, now stood polished rings drawn in silver dust, tall banners fluttering like flames under the noonday sun, and a crowd of disciples, instructors, and even foreign guests packed tight along the terraces. Magic crackled faintly in the air—tense, expectant, alive.

It was time for the Trial of Flame and Steel.

Kieran stood among the other outer disciples, each marked by simple robes of muted gray. His hands trembled slightly as he tied back his hair, eyes scanning the central arena. Despite all he'd seen, all he'd begun to remember… he still didn't feel ready.

"You'll do fine," whispered Linya, elbowing him gently.

She was the only other kid his age among the outer disciples, a wiry, fox-eyed girl who carried herself like she belonged in the royal court and the back alleys at once. Her fighting style was fast and tricky. She could drop someone twice her size before they blinked.

"I saw you train last night," she added under her breath. "Even the stone tiles were sweating."

Kieran gave her a look. "You saw that?"

"I see everything," she said smugly.

He didn't have time to reply. An elder's voice echoed across the courtyard, magically amplified.

"Disciples of the outer ring, step forward!"

The twenty of them moved in sync toward the raised platform.

"Today, you will face two challenges," said the elder. "The first: control. The second: combat. You must prove you are not only skilled in martial forms, but that your mind and spirit are tempered as steel."

Kieran's chest tightened. Combat. That meant fighting in front of the whole sect.

And based on the whispers, not all of the audience were friendly.

---

In the shaded pavilion above the arena, the inner disciples and visiting nobles sat in carved jade chairs, sipping iced nectar and eating candied lotus petals. Among them sat Rhael Aerondel, the Crowned Star of the academy, and Damon Halden, the sect's strongest young swordmaster.

"I don't see what's so interesting about this," Rhael drawled lazily, swirling the contents of his crystal goblet. "Outer disciple matches are usually barely above peasant brawls."

"You say that," Damon said coolly, "but I notice you haven't looked away once."

Rhael didn't answer. His eyes were fixed on one figure now stepping into the arena.

A slim boy with unruly hair and strange, sharp grace in his movements.

Kieran.

The name the stars had whispered to him in dreams.

---

The first trial was deceptively simple.

Each disciple was handed a feather. They were told to make it float—for as long as possible—without touching it, and without letting it burn, freeze, or vanish from unstable magic. It was a test of balance and spiritual control.

Half the candidates failed within seconds.

One lost his eyebrows in a flash of green flame. Another turned her feather into iron, which promptly fell like a rock.

When Kieran stepped into the center, he ignored the stares. He closed his eyes. Slowed his breathing.

He didn't force the magic. He let it hum.

He remembered the spiral rune on his palm. The equations it had shown him in his dreams.

Pressure over distance. Flow over force. Thought over instinct.

The feather rose.

Slowly. Gently.

Then it began to spin. Dance.

Swirling around him like a tiny silver star caught in orbit.

Gasps rose from the watching crowd.

The elder watching the trial blinked. "That is… unprecedented."

When time was called, Kieran lowered the feather onto the judge's hand as gently as a falling snowflake.

He turned to walk off, heart pounding.

But the audience was no longer murmuring. They were clapping.

Even Rhael raised an eyebrow. Damon, beside him, was frowning—but not in displeasure.

---

"Second trial," the elder intoned. "Combat."

The combat ring flared with heat as enchantments activated—barriers designed to prevent lethal damage and contain excess magical overflow. A gong sounded.

The matches began.

Kieran watched as disciples faced off, paired by draw. Linya danced through her match like a whirlwind and dispatched her opponent with a grin. Others struggled.

And then—his name was called.

"Kieran versus Ordan of South Flame."

Kieran stepped forward, jaw tightening.

Ordan was three years older, broad-shouldered, and already had a reputation as a fire-user. His smirk showed he didn't see Kieran as a threat.

They bowed.

Then the gong sounded.

Ordan struck first, a searing whip of fire cutting through the air.

Kieran rolled under it, rising fluidly. His body moved faster now. More instinctively. Ember's training, hidden inside memories, flickered in his limbs.

Ordan pressed forward, flame arcs flying, trying to corner him.

Kieran ducked one strike, twisted around another, and channeled his own magic—not to attack, but to redirect.

The fire bent. Curved.

And lashed back toward Ordan.

He barely blocked it.

"What the—?!"

Kieran struck next.

A single pressure-point blow to the ribs—redirected kinetic force from Ordan's own stance.

The bigger boy stumbled. Kieran swept his leg.

Ordan fell.

The gong rang.

And the crowd erupted.

---

"He redirected fire," one of the inner disciples murmured.

"Did you see that footwork?"

"I didn't even know he was from a known family…"

Rhael sipped his drink, thoughtful.

Damon's expression was harder to read.

But his eyes didn't leave Kieran.

---

By the end of the trial, Kieran was one of five disciples advanced to the inner court.

He barely had time to process the shock before the elder addressed them once more.

"You five will now be permitted access to the first-tier of the Hall of Stars—our most sacred library. You will be housed in the inner disciple quarters and begin formal advanced training."

Kieran bowed low, trying to mask his pounding heart.

He had done it.

The first step on the path to the academy's elite.

He was now one step closer to unlocking the secrets of his rebirth—and his true purpose.

But he didn't yet realize what came with such success.

He didn't yet see the eyes watching him now not with amusement, but with intent.

Or the slow pull of fate weaving bonds that would not break.

---

That evening, the sky burned gold.

Kieran stood in the corridor outside the inner disciple quarters, holding a bundle of freshly folded robes in his arms, when he heard a familiar voice behind him.

"You looked like a demigod today."

He turned, startled, to see Rhael.

The prince leaned against the doorframe like he owned the place—which, technically, he kind of did. His expression was lazy, but his gaze sharp.

"You're exaggerating," Kieran said.

Rhael tilted his head. "You're deflecting."

A pause.

"Why are you talking to me?" Kieran asked. "Shouldn't you be mocking me with the others?"

"Oh, I mock plenty," Rhael said, walking closer. "But not you."

"Why?"

"Because you're not like them." His voice dipped slightly. "And I'm curious."

Kieran stepped back. "Well, don't be."

Rhael raised an eyebrow. "I should warn you, I'm not used to people telling me 'no.'"

Kieran stared at him. "Get used to it."

Rhael's smile widened.

Then, just as he turned to leave, he paused.

"Oh. And you should watch out for Damon."

Kieran frowned. "What do you mean?"

"Just that he doesn't like being wrong," Rhael said casually. "And today, you made him look very wrong."

Then he vanished down the corridor, robes billowing.

---

That night, Kieran couldn't sleep.

Not because of nerves. Or excitement.

But because the sigil on his palm burned faintly again.

He looked at it under the moonlight.

The spiral seemed to shift.

And a word echoed in his head.

Not in a voice.

In an equation.

Balance = Truth ÷ Pain.

He didn't understand it yet.

But he knew it was only the beginning.

And somewhere deeper in the mountain—

The stars stirred.

---

More Chapters