Hey everyone,
Since I've taken a short break from writing, I've been going back and making some adjustments to the chapters already online.
As many of you suggested, I've replaced the slingshot with a sling. After doing a bit of research, I realized you were rightâtendon or sinew isn't actually elastic (you got me, I kneel đ ).
Several readers also pointed out that Lara's age was an issue. I had originally made her older so she could be in charge of the fire, but that ended up creating complications later. I've decided to adjust her age to about six years old during the MC's infancy, which should make things flow more naturally.
For now, I'm rolling out these changes on Patreon, and I'll update RoyalRoad, Scribble Hub, and WebNovel in time.
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Athan stirred, slowly emerging from the haze of fever-induced sleep. Earlier, weakened and with little else to do, he had surrendered to his dreams, escaping the discomfort of his aching body. Through brief moments of awareness, he had vaguely registered Lara and Kali tending to him, their quiet presence a constant as they cooled his skin and wiped away his sweat. But exhaustion had always pulled him back under.
Now, as his mind cleared, he realized the girls were gone. Instead, his mother sat beside him, carefully replacing the damp fur cloth on his forehead. Her movements were gentle, methodical, her face calm but watchful.
Noticing his open eyes, Rael's expression softened. A small smile touched her lips as she asked, "You want to drink?"
Athan swallowed, feeling the dryness in his throat. He nodded weakly, his body still sluggish from lingering fatigue.
Rael reached for a wooden bowl, lifting it toward him. As the liquid neared his lips, the familiar scent made him recognize it instantlyâthe same herbal concoction he had been given before.
Athan took a small sip of the warm liquid, feeling the bitterness coat his tongue before the heat soothed his throat. His body still felt heavy, but his mind was clearer now. Lowering the bowl slightly, he glanced at his mother.
"Where are the girls?" His voice came out rough, weaker than he expected.
Rael set aside the damp fur cloth she had just replaced, her gaze steady as she watched him drink. "They went to do their tasks. You been asleep for a while, and they knew I stay with you."
Athan blinked, processing her words. He vaguely remembered them being reluctant to leave. Even in his fevered haze, he had felt their presence nearby. He swallowed another sip before asking, "And the others? What's happening outside?"
Rael gave a small sigh, shifting her weight as she adjusted his bedding. "Men are working on the house. Your father, Ok, and Yun putting big effort, and the hunters help them for the day. The structure is standing now."
Athan's fingers tightened slightly around the bowl. It's standing. He exhaled through his nose, frustration flickering beneath his exhaustion. He should have been there.
Rael, noticing the change in his expression, reached out and brushed a few strands of damp hair from his forehead. "They doing just fine," she said gently, reading his thoughts with ease. "And you be back on your feet soon enough."
Athan exhaled, not fully convinced but too drained to argue. Instead, he focused on finishing his drink, letting the warmth settle in his stomach.
"What about you?" he asked after a pause, shifting his tired gaze toward her. "You just stayed here with me?"
Rael chuckled softly, shaking her head. "Not whole time. I had to gather herbs. We needed more medicine if your fever didn't break."
Athan glanced at the near-empty bowl in his hands. "Is that why this one tastes stronger?"
Her lips quirked slightly. "Yes. I use fresh herbs this time. It should help you recover faster."
He hummed in response, setting the bowl aside. His body still ached, and exhaustion clung to his limbs, but at least his fever seemed to be slowly fading. He let his head sink back against the bedding, staring at the shelter's ceiling.
Rael watched him for a moment before speaking again, her voice quieter. "You rest a little longer. Let the medicine do its work."
Athan closed his eyes briefly before cracking a small, tired smile. "Not like I have much choice."
Rael let out a small laugh, shaking her head. "No, you don't."
And with that, she adjusted the fur cloth once more, making sure her son was as comfortable as possible while he drifted back toward much-needed rest.
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Athan woke the next morning, his body still weighted by exhaustion, the lingering toll of relentless effort and illness pressing on his limbs. His sleep had been fragmentedâinterrupted multiple times through the night and the previous dayâeach time by his mother, Lara, or Kali, who carefully administered the herbal concoction Rael had prepared. The fever had drained him, left him hollow, but now, at last, it was gone.
Though his muscles ached, sore from both sickness and overwork, his mind felt clearer, lighter. As he shifted slightly in his bedding, he could feel the damp remnants of sweat clinging to his skin, the uncomfortable yet reassuring proof that his body had fought through the worst.
The shelter around him was quiet, save for the distant murmurs of villagers beginning their daily tasks. Outside, the rhythmic thud of wood meeting stone, the soft rustle of movement, and the occasional murmur of voices formed a backdrop of familiarity.
Blinking against the soft morning light filtering through the entrance, he drew in a slow, deep breath. Cool air filled his lungs, a sharp contrast to the burning heat of fever that had consumed him before. It was a relief.
His throat was dry. Instinctively, his gaze flicked toward his water flask, but before he could reach for it, a slight movement beside him caught his attention.
Lara, seated nearby, had noticed his stirring. Her sharp green eyes widened slightly, relief flickering behind her usual composure. Before he could say anything, she reached for the water flask, bringing it to his lips.
"Better?"Â she asked softly, her voice laced with both concern and quiet relief.
Athan swallowed gratefully, the cool liquid soothing his parched throat. He gave a small nod, feeling the warmth of her presence, steady and familiar.
A soft rustling came from nearbyâKali, curled up not far away, rubbed her eyes sleepily before turning toward him. Her lips curled into a small smile at the sight of him awake and responsive, the tension in her shoulders easing.
He wasn't alone.
The worst had passed, but he knew it would take time before he regained his full strength. For now, he allowed himself a moment of quiet, feeling the warmth of his partners beside him, grounding him after the haze of fever and exhaustion.
A little while later, Rael returned, her sharp gaze sweeping over him with the careful assessment of a healer and a mother. Lara and Kali left his side to resume their tasks, giving her space to check on him.
As Athan slowly sat up, a loud grumble from his stomach broke the silence, a stark reminder that aside from the medicinal brew, he hadn't eaten in two days. Weakness settled deeper in his bones, his body demanding nourishment to recover fully.
His mother, anticipating this, had already prepared something for him. She handed him a small selection of fruit, their vibrant colors a welcome sight after the dull haze of illness.
"Eat slowly,"Â she instructed, her voice firm yet gentle. "Your body needs to regain strength. Don't rush."
Athan nodded, accepting the fruit. He bit into its thick, fibrous skin, his teeth scraping against the rough outer layer before reaching the sparse flesh beneath. The taste was tangy, less sweet than he had hoped, but refreshing nonetheless.
The large seed inside took up most of the fruit's size, forcing him to nibble carefully around it. Though it wasn't much, the moisture soothed his throat, and with each small bite, he could feel his body waking up, his strength returningâslowly, but surely.
It would take time before he was back to full strength, but for now, he simply focused on the presentâon the quiet, on the taste of fruit, on the simple act of recovering.
At least, Athan thought, he could sit upâmaybe even stand. But the moment he voiced this thought, his mother shot him a firm, unwavering look.
"No."
There was no room for negotiation in her tone. His body still needed rest.
Athan let out a quiet sigh, feeling the weight of both exhaustion and his mother's firm care pressing him back down. Reluctantly, he settled into the bedding, shifting slightly to find a comfortable position.
With little else to do, his gaze drifted toward the entrance of the shelter. Through the opening, he could see the soft glow of daylight, its warmth a welcome contrast to the feverish haze that had gripped him the day before. The air smelled fresher, crisp with the lingering chill of morning, yet beneath it, the familiar scents of wood, earth, and distant cooking fires told him that the village was already stirring.
From the corner of his eye, a small movement caught his attention.
His mother was hunched over something, her posture slightly stiff with concentration. Curious, Athan turned his head just enough to get a better view.
She was writing.
Her own bark-sheet book lay open before her, its pages filled with symbols painstakingly tracedâsymbols she had learned not so long ago, drawing them again and again in the dirt until they became familiar. In her hand, a makeshift pen, its tip carefully fashioned from a fishbone, scratched against the surface, leaving behind dark strokes of charcoal ink.
Her movements were deliberateâsteady, yet hesitant, as if her mind was faster than her hand. The pen wavered slightly in her grip, unused to the smooth motion of gliding across the page rather than the rough, instinctive etchings she had once made in soil.
Athan watched in quiet admiration.
His motherâonce skeptical of writing, once uncertain of its valueâwas now embracing it with the same resilience that carried her through every challenge. Her brows furrowed in deep concentration, lips pressed into a firm, thoughtful line. There was no frustration in her expression, only determination, the same unwavering resolve that had always defined her.
A small, knowing smile tugged at the corner of his lips.
She was learningâand quickly.
Adjusting his position slightly, Athan gained a clearer view of what his mother was writing. Her fingers curled tightly around the pen, her movements careful yet determined as she etched words and symbols onto the bark-sheet pages.
She was documenting herbs, carefully noting their properties, uses, and appearances. Each entry was accompanied by sketches of leaves and stems, their outlines rough but recognizable. Her strokes were slower, more deliberate than his ownâless fluid, more cautiousâbut unmistakably determined.
Athan remembered how she had once spoken of wanting to record her medicinal knowledge, ensuring it would not be lost with time. Now, seeing her fully committed to the task, he realized just how deeply his illness must have solidified that decision.
The suddenness of his fever had been a reminderâa warningâthat knowledge left unrecorded could be lost when it was needed most. Had she not been present, had she not known which herbs to use, the others might have struggled to care for him. That thought must have weighed heavily on her mind.
Her hand moved steadily, but every so often, she paused, her gaze flickering to the small pouch of gathered plants beside her. She would pick up a leaf, run her fingers over its texture, turn it in the light, ensuring every detail was accurate before committing it to the page.
It was a slow processâone requiring patience and precisionâbut one filled with purpose.
Athan watched in silence, a quiet sense of pride welling up in his chest.
One day, these pages might save lives, not just his, but those of their entire clan.
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After a while, Rael set down the pen, carefully sealing the inkwell before exhaling a quiet sigh. She flexed her fingers, then began massaging her palm and knuckles, rolling her wrist as if to ease the unfamiliar tension.
It was the first time she had written on paper and for so long, and the motion had engaged muscles she had never truly used before. Her fingers, used to grinding herbs, weaving fibers, and gripping tools, now ached in a way that was strange yet oddly satisfying.
Athan observed her silently, noting the slight wince as she rubbed at her hand. He hesitated before speaking, his voice laced with hopeful determination.
"Can I at least find something to do?" he asked. "Since I can't get up, I could finish the pot I started a couple of nights ago. I wouldn't need to move muchâjust use my fingers to carve out the details."
Rael's gaze lifted, studying him with a mix of concern and contemplation.
She knew her son too wellâeven the simplest task could quickly spiral into a full-fledged project if left unchecked. Yet, this was small, controlled, contained.
After a moment's hesitation, she gave a small nod. "Alright. But just that. No other projects."
Athan grinned faintly and shifted into a more comfortable seated position, relieved to finally do something with his hands. Reaching for the partially carved wooden pot, he let his fingers trace the smooth grain, feeling the subtle imperfections in its surface before carefully resuming his work.
His hands, though weakened from illness, quickly found their rhythm. The small blade glided steadily, shaving away thin curls of wood, refining the shape with deliberate precision. Unlike heavy labor, this work required focus rather than strength, allowing him to lose himself in the careful motions.
Time drifted by in measured silence, the only sound in the shelter being the faint scraping of blade against wood.
Eventually, the pot was complete, its form well-balanced, smooth to the touch. Satisfied, Athan set it aside, letting his fingers brush over its finished surface one last time.
His gaze lifted toward his mother. "Can I have another piece of wood?"
Rael let out a knowing sigh, but after a moment, she relented, handing him a fresh block.
"Just one more. Then you rest."
Athan nodded, already reaching for his tools as he settled back into work.
Hours passed quietly, the world outside moving at its own pace while the shelter remained filled with nothing but the steady rhythm of carving. Each cut was measured, each motion purposeful. His hands, though still regaining their strength, practiced delicate refinements, smoothing edges, shaping curves, honing his technique.
By the time he finished the second pot, nearly three hours had slipped away. His body still carried the remnants of fatigue, but his hands were steady, his mind clear.
Satisfied, he set the second pot beside the first and leaned back slightly, exhaling in quiet contentment.
Even while recovering, he had created something.
And that alone brought him peace.
After some time, Lara and Kali returned, their hands filled with freshly gathered dandelions. As they deposited their haul onto one of the large flat stones near the fire, their eyes instinctively drifted toward the shelterâand stopped the moment they noticed Athan sitting upright.
For a heartbeat, they simply stared, their faces shifting from surprise to pure excitement. Then, without hesitation, they hurried toward him, their steps quick, their expressions alight with relief.
"You're up!" Lara blurted, crouching beside him, her green eyes scanning his face for any lingering signs of fever.
"You feel better?" Kali added, her voice laced with eagerness as she settled next to Lara, her sharp gaze flicking between him and the blanket still draped over his legs.
Athan, caught off guard by their sudden enthusiasm, let out a small, tired chuckle.
"Better, yeah." He stretched his still-sore arms slightly, rolling his shoulders before exhaling. "Still have aches. Muscles hurt. But⊠a lot better than before."
The girls exchanged relieved glances, their shoulders loosening now that they had confirmation straight from him.
"Good." Lara gave him a firm nod before smirking. "You were out for a bit. Thought we have to keep feeding you like a baby forever."
Athan huffed a weak laugh, shaking his head. "Thanks⊠for taking care of me."
At that, both girls straightened slightly, their faces flashing with something between pride and warmth.
"Of course!" Kali said, as if it had never been a question.
"We make sure you didn't just melt away," Lara teased, nudging his arm lightlyâthough gentler than usual, as if aware he was still fragile.
Athan shook his head again, a small smile lingering at the corner of his lips as he watched them.
Satisfied, the girls bounced back to their feet, the playful energy still in their movements.
"We'll be back," Lara said, already turning toward the river. "Gotta check the fish trap. Maybe we have something fresh for tonight."
"Rest," Kali added, throwing him a pointed glance before following after Lara.
Athan watched them go, their excited chatter fading as they disappeared toward the water. He exhaled, stretching his sore limbs just a little more.
They really had taken care of him.
He made a silent note to repay the favorâonce he was back on his feet.
For tonight's meal, they would likely use the fish that had been smoked in previous days, preparing either a hearty soup or a rich stew.
A few minutes later, Lara returned, carrying a large pouch that wriggled slightly. As she set it down, the fabric shifted, revealing faint, muffled movements inside. With practiced ease, she reached in and pulled out three medium-sized fish, their scales catching the afternoon light in a shimmer of silver and blue.
Without wasting time, she began gutting and cleaning them, her knife moving with steady efficiency. The soft squelch of flesh, the light scraping of scales, and the occasional splash of water as she rinsed the fish all blended into the familiar rhythm of food preparation. Meanwhile, Kali busied herself fetching water, making several trips to fill the large cooking pot.
Once the fish were cleaned, Lara tossed the heads and tails into the pot, their oils slowly releasing into the water, enriching the base of the broth. She then carefully arranged the remaining fish on the smoking rack, ensuring they would be properly preserved for later use.
Nearby, using a pair of tongs, she retrieved several heated stones from the fire, their surface glowing faintly with residual heat. One by one, she dropped them into the pot, the sudden sizzle of contact sending up a burst of steam and bubbling water.
By then, Kali had finished her last trip to the river and turned her attention to the smoked fish from their stores. Taking a sharp knife, she sliced it into small, manageable pieces, each cut precise and quick before she added them to the simmering broth. The rich, briny scent of smoked fish began to deepen as it mixed with the gentle heat of the boiling water.
Next, she focused on the dandelions, their bright yellow petals and jagged leaves still fresh from earlier. She finely chopped them, along with remaining root vegetables, their earthy aroma blending with the fish and broth before she tossed everything into the pot.
The girls worked wordlessly, their movements efficient, practiced. Every so often, Lara gave the stew a stir, checking its consistency, while Kali ensured the fire burned evenly, adjusting the embers on the now cold rock with a careful hand.
Once the meal was ready, the rich aroma of the stew filled the air, its warm, savory scent drawing the villagers toward the fire.
Lara and Kali called everyone to eat, and soon, a line formed in front of the steaming cooking pot, bowls in hand. The villagers approached in an orderly fashion, their faces showing a mix of anticipation and satisfaction after a long day's work.
Taking turns, Lara and Kali carefully ladled the thick stew into each bowl, ensuring everyone received a fair portion. The hot broth swirled with bits of smoked fish, tender root vegetables, and wilted greens, its surface glistening from the natural oils released during cooking.
Once the last person had been served, they filled their own bowls and prepared an extra portion for Athan and Rael before settling down near them, the fire's warmth comforting against the cool evening air.