Ayman trudged through the empty streets, his mind spinning. The cemetery seemed miles behind him, yet its grip on his thoughts was suffocating. The man, his words, the money—it was all too bizarre.
He couldn't shake the image of the stranger's face, the way he vanished as if he were never real. "A ghost," Ayman whispered to himself, a shiver running through him. "It had to be." But how could a ghost carry money? How could it speak so plainly? His thoughts spiraled into questions with no answers.
The quiet streets of his neighborhood greeted him with an eerie stillness. He barely remembered how he got home. The night felt like a fever dream he couldn't wake up from. He climbed the creaking stairs to their small house, the weight of the night pressing heavily on his chest. As he opened the door, the familiar scent of couscous wafted through the air, grounding him momentarily.
On the kitchen counter, a folded note in his mother's handwriting caught his eye.
"Eat some couscous and leave the rest for tomorrow. I will stay with Marwa tonight."
Ayman stared at the note, his throat tightening. His gaze drifted to the pot on the stove. Steam no longer rose from it, but the aroma brought a pang of familiarity. For a fleeting moment, he imagined Karim walking through the door, grinning and teasing him about eating all the meat. His hands shook as he served himself a plate.
Sitting at the small kitchen table, he took a bite, the taste as warm and comforting as ever, but his heart felt heavy. The room seemed to echo with Karim's voice.
"Leave some for me, Ayman," he could almost hear Karim say, his brother's tone playful, as though he were there, leaning against the doorframe, smirking.
Ayman froze mid-chew. The fork in his hand trembled. He looked up, half-expecting to see his brother standing there, but there was only silence. The chair across from him, the one Karim always sat in, was empty. The memory of Karim's laughter filled the void, and Ayman clenched his jaw to suppress the sob rising in his throat.
He swallowed hard, tears blurring his vision as he continued eating. Each bite felt heavier than the last, each one a painful reminder of the life that had been ripped away from him. The kitchen, once filled with warmth and chatter, now felt hollow and cold.
"Karim..." he whispered, his voice cracking. His brother's name hung in the air like a prayer, a plea to undo the unbearable truth. But the silence that followed was deafening.
As Ayman pushed his plate away, he buried his face in his hands. The night had broken something inside him. Between the stranger's cryptic words and the crushing emptiness at home, he felt trapped in a nightmare. For the first time, he realized there was no waking up from it.
As Ayman sat at the table, staring at the empty chair, he murmured to himself, "Mother's with Marwa tonight. She's been having a rough time. Karim's gone… and she's pregnant." He clenched his fists, trying to steady his trembling hands. "I will protect her. For my brother. For his son."
The words felt heavier than the air around him, but they gave him a fleeting sense of purpose, like a thread to hold on to in the chaos. He repeated the promise under his breath, this time with more resolve, more desperation. "I'll take care of them. I won't fail again."
But the words felt hollow against the guilt gnawing at his soul. His mind churned with thoughts of what could have been, what he should have done. He blamed himself—whether it was fair or not. Every moment replayed in his head like a relentless storm.
Ayman finally dragged himself to his bed, After he hid the money in a drawer. the exhaustion of the night weighing on him. Yet, as he lay there, staring at the ceiling, sleep evaded him. The stranger's words from the cemetery rebound in his mind, mingling with Karim's voice, the warmth of the kitchen, and the suffocating guilt. His thoughts were a cacophony, relentless and unyielding.
Hours passed, and the first hues of dawn began to creep through the window. His body eventually gave in, pulling him into a restless, haunted sleep.
In his dream, he found himself back in the house, but it wasn't as he remembered. The walls were distorted, the shadows longer, stretching unnaturally across the floor. He heard voices—his mother, Marwa, Karim—all overlapping, indistinct, and eerie.
Then the scene shifted abruptly. He was in the car with Karim. The air was tense, suffused with anger and frustration. They were arguing, their voices escalating. "Why don't you listen to me, Ayman?!" Karim's voice thundered.
Ayman snapped back, his own voice filled with pain. "Because you don't understand! You never did!"
Suddenly, the argument was interrupted. A shadow loomed outside the car window. A man approached, his presence cold and menacing. He wore a long coat, and his face was obscured by the brim of a hat. But the most striking feature was the gun he carried, glinting ominously in the dim light.
Karim froze, his expression shifting from anger to fear. Ayman felt his chest tighten as the man raised the gun. "Get out," the stranger ordered, his voice deep and commanding.
"What's going on?" Ayman shouted, his voice cracking with panic.
The man didn't respond. Instead, he reached into the car, grabbed Karim by the collar, and yanked him out with an unnatural strength. Ayman lunged to stop him, but it was like his body was moving in slow motion. The harder he tried, the more sluggish he became, as if an invisible force was holding him back.
"Karim!" Ayman screamed, his voice echoing unnaturally, reverberating in the suffocating silence that followed. The man turned, his face still hidden, and pointed the gun directly at Karim's chest.
"No!" Ayman tried to run, to throw himself between them, but his legs refused to move. His screams grew louder, more desperate, as the gunshot shattered the silence.
The dream shifted again. Ayman found himself back in the cemetery, the stranger from earlier standing over him. But this time, the man's face was clearer. It was a shadow looks like Ayman but His eyes burned like fire, and his mouth twisted into a sinister smile.
"You can't escape it, Ayman," the man said, his voice a deep rumble. "This is your fate. You made the choice."
Ayman woke with a gasp, his body drenched in sweat. The pale light of dawn spilled into the room, but it did nothing to chase away the chill in his bones. His chest heaved as he tried to steady his breathing, his hands clutching the sheets.
The nightmare felt too real, like a warning—or perhaps a memory twisted by his guilt. He buried his face in his hands, tears streaming down his face. "Karim… I'm so sorry," he whispered.
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Ayman woke with a start, his body heavy from exhaustion. The three hours of restless sleep had done little to replenish him. His muscles ached, and his mind felt foggy, but he forced himself out of bed. The house was unusually quiet, save for the faint murmur of voices coming from the hallway.
Dragging his feet, Ayman stepped into the hallway to find his mother and Marwa sitting on the worn-out couch. A steaming pot of mint tea rested on the small table between them. His mother cradled her cup, her face pale and weary, while Marwa sat stiffly, her hands folded over her lap. They spoke in hushed tones, their whispers carrying the weight of shared sorrow.
"Good morning," Ayman said softly, trying to inject some normalcy into the room. "How are you both? Marwa, how are you feeling today? Do you need anything?"
Marwa's eyes briefly flickered at him, but she didn't meet his gaze. "I'm okay," she said flatly, her voice devoid of its usual warmth. Her face was drawn, her eyes rimmed red from sleepless nights and tears. Ayman could see the hollow ache in her expression, the silent mourning of someone who had lost everything.
His mother sighed, her tired eyes locking onto Ayman's. "Ayman," she began, her voice strained but firm, "you need to start thinking about the future. We've lost Karim… our provider, our rock. You need to find a job. Things need to change now."
Ayman's stomach churned at her words, but before he could respond, she continued. "We'll manage for a while with the compensation from the government—his pension and the death benefits—but that won't last forever. We can't rely on it." She paused, her voice dropping to a whisper. "I went to pick you up from the police station, and you lied to me. You told me you didn't see him that day."
The air grew heavier. Ayman felt his throat tighten as his mother leaned forward, her gaze piercing.
Ayman nodded, swallowing hard. "Yes, Mama. I'll find a job. I'll do whatever I can."
Her expression softened, and for a brief moment, a flicker of pride crossed her face. "Good," she said, patting his shoulder lightly. "That's my son." She rose to her feet, her movements slow and deliberate. "I'll get you some coffee."
As she walked to the kitchen, Marwa looked up, her gaze sharper now. "Ayman," she said, her voice low but firm, "tell me the truth. What happened that day with Karim?"
Ayman stiffened, caught off guard. "What do you mean?" he asked, trying to keep his voice steady.
"You know what I mean," Marwa said, her voice rising slightly. "The last time anyone saw Karim, he was with you. The police told me he came to get you from the station. Then you lied to me and your mother when you claimed you hadn't seen him."
"I didn't lie, I wasn't with him in the car," Ayman said quickly, though his voice wavered.
Marwa's eyes narrowed. "Then explain it to me. What happened? Why was he with you?"
Ayman looked away, his hands clenching into fists. "It's not what you think," he said, his voice barely audible.
"Then tell me what it is," Marwa snapped her tone sharper now. "What happened in that car, Ayman?"
Ayman hesitated, the words caught in his throat. Finally, he let out a shaky breath. "We argued," he admitted, his voice trembling. "He came to find me. We fought about… things. I got out of the car, and he drove off. When he entered the tunnel… that's when the accident happened. I swear, Marwa, I didn't hurt him. I didn't cause it."
Marwa stared at him, her eyes burning with a mixture of anger and grief. "You fought with him? About what? What could have been so important that it—" She cut herself off, her voice breaking.
Before Ayman could respond, his mother returned, holding a steaming cup of coffee. "Here," she said, handing it to him. "You'll need your strength if you're going to start working."
Ayman took the cup, his hands trembling slightly. "Thank you, Mama."
As she sat back down, Ayman hesitated, then asked, "Mama, did you see anyone around the house yesterday? A man, wearing all black?"
His mother frowned, thinking for a moment. "Yes, I did. He was lingering outside for a while. I thought he might be one of those undercover policemen. Why are you asking about him?"
Ayman felt his heart quicken. "Ah, no reason," he said quickly, forcing a small smile. "Just curious."
He excused himself and returned to his room, shutting the door behind him. Sitting on the edge of his bed, he stared into his coffee, his thoughts racing.
"It was real," he whispered to himself. "I knew it. It was real."