Well, overall it's okay, but there's a lot of room for improvement.
"That bitch has impressive movement technique! Can Feng Block the Heavens Illusionary Phantom Concealment Soul Grabbing Great Array! Rise!!!"
Can Feng isn't dumb, seeing Tie Dan jumping around under the moonlight, barely touching him with a corner of his clothes, clearly toying with them. He roared, pulling out a Command Flag from his sleeve, clutched it in both hands, and threw it with a wave, planting them all over the ground! Then holding a pair of small flags in each hand, he swung them around like a traffic conductor, violently shaking them!
