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Chapter 22 - I’m Back

This is just an update, but thanks to all who stayed with the series up to this point and for the new comers. I want to say that life happened and that's why I haven't updated the series in a while, I'll be back on it and bringing some great content. I first want to address the issue and I feel like I've done it in the past but it won't hurt to address it again. I've read some of the old comments and some of the new, this nerf that Tato received from me is not detrimental, he will get much more powerful later on. This series is going to be like a typical shonen story where the mc is weak and then get stronger as the series goes on. Just like Nastu and Goku did in their series.

If you're after an op character where they're omnipotent and all knowing, like some ff that I've seen, this isn't the story. Those kinds of characters are bland and lack character, unless done correctly, which is rarely done.

Tato may not fly in certain situations because you don't see Goku flying around all the time, and there's times where he bangs his head or whatever else for comedy purposes, same with this story.

Some of you might be thinking how can Tato destroy this character but struggle with the next, I'm trying to carefully balance his character and the other character he fights to where there's content and also how the character is in the fairy tail series. Lullaby was not a challenge because it's already weak and the characters defeated it easily but if you remember they struggled against Lyon. This is the reason why Tato struggles and ultimately has to go all out and shows us his new power he had hidden.

I assure you that Tato power is going to get much stronger and he's going to have fights differently and much more explosive.

With the idea of a harem, so bare with me as I try and develop the relationship with Tato and the girls. Sometimes harems are done poorly and they're rushed and don't make sense. I will try and flush the interactions to where they make sense and give more character to the relationships rather than just having full on pound town action that some people insert.

I will try and update as much as time will allot me, and I will try and keep inserting the music. Ways to listen to it would be Spotify, or Apple Music. If you have a membership with YouTube. Just look them up and play them and just let it play as you read the story, if not then you can let your imagination go wild! Which is all about reading and story telling!

Also, if you've familiar with the fairy tail series, you know that we're coming up on an awesome new arc, the phantom lord arc and you know what that means, awesome fights and even new power for Tato!

So thank you for your paitence and I hope you continue to enjoy the series! And ultimately use the power of your imagination!

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