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And a happy new year. :D
Been a while, I've made some progress but like always I'm stuck on the revision of chapter one. But not only the revision, because now I've got two whole originals I'm concepting/concepted. One is a futuristic dystopia I wish to make into a cinematic game/series— and the other is a prequel to the Enclosure. However, I'm writing this one to adapt into a movie. As an introduction into the series.
(Removed previous details about the movie, and the games I mentioned. I have a screenshot, which means I'M SPARED IDIOCY! I don't want a thief to become "Inspired." THOUGH TIS IT BE NO MATTER. I still got several more concepts, games, and movies.) They came to me, in a dream. Then they became an Idea— and ideas are bulletproof.
So with all that said— Merry Christmas to all, and to all a good night!