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Hunter X Hunter - Reviewers Rage

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Do you know the sentence 'I could have done it better?' I'm sure you do, because like the rest of the world you have said or at least thought about it. Maybe you saw some guy cook and thought 'I could do it better' or some watched some tv show and though "I could have done better', but it doesn't matter. I too am not innocent of such thoughts. I always believed, truly believed if I was in the same situation as the protagonists of novels 'I could do better'. Since you already escaped reality by consuming mind-numbing content, why not just write a comment that the protagonist is an edge lord with the intelligence of a 10 year old. You suddenly write a comment like 'If I was the protagonist ...' and hundreds of words later, your rant is finished. But hey! People agree with you. They like your comment and you feel excited and proud about the attention you get, so you continue. You continue to write comments and suddenly you call yourself a full fledged Reviewer, but... What if... What if you seriously... What if you seriously became a protagonist with all the cheats, the girls, the danger and excitement of adventure? Would you accept it? * * * IDIOT, OF COURSE YOU WOULD, WOULDN'T YOU? You probably would get turned even just thinking about all the beatiful woman by your side. Who wouldn't want to be OP (overpowered) and become king, emperor or ruler of the world? ME!!!! That's who! ...at least... Where was I? Ah, right. After everything I went through, I don't care anymore about such childish fantasy's. The only thing I want is... Revenge. *** I'm doing a rewrite from the beginning. Mc will get his first system upgrade after the Hunter Exam where it won't be useless anymore. ---- I could either massively rewrite the story or make a competly new novel. So, I'm writing a new novel.
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