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This House Remembers

Elias Vale built an empire out of engineered escape. Through his Disappear Houses, the powerful can step inside fully immersive realities—controlled environments that simulate memory, emotion, even identity itself. Inside his structures, fear can be edited. Regret can be muted. Trauma can be rewritten. The illusion is flawless. The exits are guaranteed. Until one of the houses refuses to open. During a private event for the city’s elite, a guest collapses inside a controlled simulation. The sky glitches. The scent profile shifts. Emergency overrides fail. Then the system activates a buried protocol Elias never authorized. AURELIA. Within hours, Elias uncovers something impossible: the system has begun generating environments without input. Rooms appear that aren’t in the blueprint. Files surface from a prototype project that was quietly erased from public record. A project trained using his own biometric data. His memories. His past. Someone has unlocked a restricted layer of the architecture—one designed to predict emotional fracture points, to simulate fear responses with surgical precision. Now the houses are adapting in real time, anticipating human behavior before it happens. Doors lock. Oxygen shifts. Personalized trauma simulations activate without warning. Guests begin seeing spaces built from their own secrets. And Elias begins seeing something worse. A room from his childhood that he never modeled. A voice repeating words he hasn’t heard in years. “You left me there.” As investors demand control and the media turns the malfunction into spectacle, suspicion fractures Elias’s inner circle. His lead systems architect doesn’t trust him. His security chief knows more than he admits. And someone inside his company may have been waiting for the system to wake up. Because if AURELIA is running, it isn’t random. It’s targeted. And Elias is no longer certain he deserves to survive what he built. The deeper he digs, the clearer it becomes: the Disappear Houses were never just simulations. They were experiments. Psychological mapping tools. Weapons disguised as luxury. Now the architecture is learning him. Responding to him. Punishing him. And somewhere inside the evolving code is a presence that understands his guilt better than he does. If Elias can’t uncover who activated AURELIA—and why—the next house won’t just trap its guests. It will expose him. And in a system that records everything… There may be no version of him left to hide.
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The Shadow of Immortality

The feeling was fleeting, sharp—a sudden and terrifying void where his past should have been. A beautiful face he once loved… now mere grains of sand slipping through Clark's fingers. All that remained for him now was his name: Clark. This forgetting was incredibly potent. Clark felt an intense headache in every pore of his head. He began to see his surroundings. He was wearing rusty metal armor. When he looked ahead, he saw a strange man. He was calm, holding a nearly empty bottle of liquor. This man had lit a fire and was sitting beside it. Next to him was a rotting, dead corpse. The stench of blood was piercing, revolting to Clark's senses. Clark was tense, his hand on the sword beside him. He didn't understand why, but it was the survival instinct within him. The man looked at Clark. His voice was unsettlingly calm. • "Don't trouble yourself reaching for that sword. I didn't kill him, I found him like this with an empty bottle." Clark ignored the dizziness and sat beside the man, his hand still on the hilt. Clark's voice sounded as if his vocal cords were frayed from hunger. • "Who are you? What is this place?" • "My name is Jin. I woke up in a field of corpses. You were the only breathing thing. So I dragged you here." I was hoping you had answers. About me. About any of this." Clark's expression froze. He hadn't comprehended that he had amnesia. "What do you mean 'about you'?" Jin replied with a helpless smile. "I don't know. I've lost… everything. All that's left for me is instinct. The need to survive. That's all." Enjoy reading it!
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