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CANDIDATE

[ Recommend reading the menial details at the bottom ] The first thing he learned about the world was that it had a ceiling. It was very far away. At the very bottom of a world made of layers, a "nameless" boy awakens beneath a sky he cannot reach and among laws that do not recognize him. In this abyss, law is the only truth, and power is taken by those who dare to climb and discover themselves. Each layer above holds new civilizations, new rules, rulers, and fragments of something that governs reality itself. He must discover who he truly is and why he was given an identity that may not be his own, all while conquering the realms. To grow, one must exert one's own willpower on the world as law, and to conquer, that law must triumph over all else. [-----------] The Menial Details THE POV FOR THIS NOVEL IS THIRD PERSON OMNISCIENT The main character of this novel is interesting in the fact that he is basically built from the ground up as the story progresses. It may be hard to form a connection with this character at first because he has no connection to himself. As I write, I will try to maintain the balance between the mystery/growth aspects and the story being readable. This MC is NOT, and will never be an edgelord. His personality will change throughout the novel, but he will always lean more righteous than nihilistic, aura farming, and edgy. Early chapters will likely have lore and faster progression. An auxiliary chapter for progression will likely be created once there is enough content.
Stephan_Ricci · 1.4k Views

Throes of Mystery

In a Victorian-Era world where two moons drift silently in the sky, casting pale light over industrial cities and shadowed streets, a young man finds himself inexplicably transmigrated into the body of a beggar in Kargoth, a bustling industrial city of the Iron Crown Territories. Filthy, starving, and almost invisible to the people around him, he drags himself from the roadside and steals a set of oversized clothes, slipping them on over his ragged form. Each little step feels like a victory: avoiding the jeers of market-goers, dodging city guards, finding his way through the crowded streets without drawing too much attention. To survive, he takes on menial jobs, hauling loads for middle-class merchants in the market. Every Dosh he earns feels like a lifeline, every shilling a fragile foothold in a city that would swallow him whole if he let his guard down. Weeks pass, and he finally manages to save enough to leave Kargoth, boarding public transport and then smuggling himself inside a freight bound for Ironhold. From there, he prepares for the long, hard journey to Frostgate, the northern border town, hoping to escape the oppressive grind of the city. Along the way, he notices small, strange things—shadows that don’t quite match the light, coincidences that are too perfect, the twin moons shining in a way that feels… deliberate, almost too aligned. He doesn’t think much of them, chalking them up to chance or his imagination, unaware that the world around him is far stranger than he could ever guess—a world where hidden forces are quietly shaping lives. Still oblivious to Veils, Archetypes, and the secret Continuists and Intervener organizations manipulating the hidden rules of the world, he is just a beggar, a hustler, a fugitive scraping by on the fringes of Victorian-era industrial life. His journey is slow, harsh, messy, and human—the perfect crucible for someone about to awaken into a secret world of power, intrigue, and dangerous ambition.
Shins_ · 658 Views