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Chapter 3 - Chapter Three

The Yanmen Mountains stretch across the northern border of Dai Commandery for a hundred li, their ridges steep and treacherous, their forests deep and secluded. The mountains teem with rare birds and beasts, as well as spirits and specters that have lurked among the ancient trees for untold years. Scattered at the foothills lie seven or eight villages, where folk earn their keep by tilling the soil and hunting game—rising with the sun, resting at dusk, passing their days in modest peace.

On the western slope of the Yanmen range there is a hidden ravine, roofed by towering ancient trees that shut out the sun year-round. At the bottom lies a natural cave, its mouth cloaked by a thousand-year-old wisteria so thick that even a passerby standing right before it would notice nothing amiss. Within this cave dwells an old vixen who has cultivated the Way for many centuries. Her coat has long since faded from russet red to silver-gray, and her spiritual attainment numbers no fewer than four or five hundred years. In her youth she ventured out into the world of men and weathered many storms; later she reined in her restless heart, retiring to the seclusion of Yanmen to devote herself wholly to her practice, hoping one day to cast off her animal form and achieve true fruition.

Decades ago, the old vixen gave birth to a son and a daughter. At birth, the son bore a black birthmark on his left hind leg, and his mother named him Hu Chuer. The daughter's coat was pure white as driven snow, with a single spot of vivid red between her brows—exceptionally bright and fine of feature—and she was named Hu Meier. Though brother and sister issued from the same womb, their temperaments were as far apart as heaven and earth. Hu Meier was clever and obedient, cultivating diligently alongside her mother and never venturing out to stir up trouble. Hu Chuer, on the other hand, was born wayward and mischievous. Armed with a handful of tricks his mother had taught him, he would slip out of the ravine every few days to make mischief among the human folk.

The old vixen had scolded him more times than she could count. After each reprimand, he would behave himself for a day or two, then lapse back into his old ways. She had beaten him, she had berated him, but in the end he was her own flesh and blood, and she could not bring herself to confine him by force. Late at night, by the dim glow of the cave's solitary lamp, all she could do was heave long sighs and reflect that this son must be her karmic retribution, sent expressly to test her cultivation.

One morning, as his mother settled into meditative trance, Hu Chuer once again seized the chance to slip out of the cave. He followed a mountain stream eastward, passed through a pine grove, and soon caught sight of the villages nestled below. It was springtime; beyond the village, peach blossoms blazed in full splendor, their pink petals swirling up on the morning breeze and drifting down over fields and pathways. A few village women were washing clothes by the stream, laughing and chatting, wholly unaware that a pair of glittering, sharp eyes watched them from the thickets on the hillside.

Hu Chuer crouched behind a tree, scratched his cheek, and pondered how best to toy with these mortals today. He delighted most in the art of transformation. Though his skill fell far short of his mother's, it was more than enough to fool the naked eyes of ordinary folk. With a shake of his body, he transformed himself into the likeness of a young gentleman—a face as fair as jade, brows delicate and eyes clear, a dark kerchief on his head, a pale moon-white robe upon his frame, and a folded fan in his hand. He looked for all the world like a handsome young scholar of good breeding.

He paused at the stream's edge to inspect his reflection and was quite pleased with the result. Then, swaggering boldly, he made his way down the hill.

The women washing clothes looked up as he approached. Hu Chuer smiled genially and raised his clasped hands in greeting. "Good ladies, this humble student offers his respects. May I inquire—does the village ahead go by the name of Zhao Family Village?"

A round-faced woman laughed. "It does indeed. Where have you come from, sir? And why are you walking these hills all alone?"

Hu Chuer had long since prepared his story, and he answered smoothly: "I hail from Dai Commandery, traveling beyond Yanmen Pass to seek my relatives. I lost my way in the mountains and wandered all night before finding my way out. Might I ask if there is a place in the village where a traveler might lodge?"

The women, seeing his handsome face and hearing his courteous speech, eagerly gave him directions. Hu Chuer thanked them and strolled along the village path. He had no real intention of seeking lodging—he was scouting the place, searching for a household with a pretty young woman he could tease.

Zhao Family Village comprised no more than a hundred households, built into the hillside, their cottages scattered here and there. Hu Chuer ambled along, peering left and right, cocking his ear toward any courtyard where a woman's voice could be heard. When he reached the eastern end of the village, he suddenly halted.

There stood a small, enclosed yard, its wattle fence overgrown with morning glories. Inside, several peach trees bloomed in profusion. Beneath the blossoms sat a young woman of seventeen or eighteen, working at her loom. She wore a plain blue cotton dress, and her hair was adorned with nothing more than a single silk flower. Her attire was simple and unadorned, yet her features might have been painted by an artist's brush, and her skin was fairer than snow. The morning light filtered through the peach blossoms and fell across her in dappled patterns, so that she seemed a figure lifted straight from a painting.

Hu Chuer's eyes went wide and fixed. He had seen many a woman, but one with such looks was rare. He adjusted his clothes, flourished his fan, and stepped up to the gate, clearing his throat with a deliberate cough.

The young woman heard the sound and looked up. Seeing a strange man standing outside her gate, she promptly set down her shuttle, rose to her feet, and a guarded expression came over her face.

"Who are you?"

Hu Chuer made a deep bow, assuming his most cultivated air. "Forgive my impertinence. I am traveling from Dai Commandery. I lost my way in the hills and walked all night to reach this place. I am parched with thirst and would beg a bowl of water from you, miss."

According to rural custom, a woman should not receive a strange man when no male relative was at home. The young woman took a step back and called toward the house, "Mother! Someone is here."

An old woman with graying hair emerged from the cottage, carrying a winnowing basket. She came to the gate and looked Hu Chuer up and down. Seeing that he was decently dressed and did not appear villainous, she said, "Wait a moment, sir. I will fetch you some water."

The old woman turned back inside, and the young woman followed. As she passed through the doorway, she glanced back at Hu Chuer, her eyes full of caution.

Hu Chuer accepted the water bowl and drank slowly, his eyes secretly appraising the yard. He had a glib tongue; after drinking, he thanked the old woman profusely, praising her kind and gentle appearance and the young woman's grace and virtue. Soon he had the old woman beaming with pleasure. In the course of their conversation, he learned that the young woman was called Zhenniang. Her father had died young, and she lived with her mother, the two of them scraping by on her weaving. Zhenniang was already betrothed, promised to a hunter of the village named Zhao Dalang; they were to be wed after the autumn harvest.

Hu Chuer's lips murmured congratulations, but his heart itched with restless desire. He took his leave of Zhenniang's home, made a circuit through the village, and found a family willing to put him up for the night, claiming he needed a day's rest before continuing his journey. The household, seeing him as a refined and courteous young man, cleared out a spare room for him.

After nightfall, Hu Chuer lay tossing and turning on the bed, his mind wholly occupied with Zhenniang's image. He was a fox-spirit by nature, with a heart that knew no constancy; the more unattainable something seemed, the more it tormented him. Enduring until the third watch of the night, he sat up, formed a hand-seal to render himself invisible, and slipped quietly out the door.

Moonlight flooded the village like water; all was still. Hu Chuer found his way back to Zhenniang's yard with practiced ease and vaulted lightly over the wattle fence. Creeping to the window, he wet a fingertip with spittle, poked a small hole in the window paper, and pressed his eye to it.

Inside, a single oil lamp burned like a bean. Zhenniang sat beneath the lamplight, mending clothes. Her mother had already retired and could be heard snoring faintly. Zhenniang's head was bowed, her needle darting up and down; the lamplight flickered across her face, making her gentle features appear all the softer.

Hu Chuer's heart burned with unbearable longing. He could restrain himself no longer. With another shake, he transformed—this time into the very likeness of Zhao Dalang: thick brows over large eyes, a sturdy, broad-shouldered frame, dressed in the short tunic and leather vest of a hunter, a hunting knife hanging at his waist. His command of the transformation art was imperfect; in broad daylight a close observer might have detected flaws. But at this late hour, with the lamplight dim and Zhenniang's head bent over her work, how could she tell the difference?

"Zhenniang," he called softly from outside the window.

Zhenniang's needle paused. She looked up, startled. "Dalang? What brings you here so late?"

Hu Chuer mimicked Zhao Dalang's rough voice: "I was coming down from the hills after hunting. I passed by and saw your lamp still lit, so I came to look in on you."

Zhenniang set down her sewing and moved toward the window, though she did not open it. Through the paper she replied, "It's too late; it wouldn't be proper. Dalang, please go home. Whatever you have to say can wait until tomorrow."

Hu Chuer would not be denied. He reached out and pushed against the window. Zhenniang gave a frightened gasp and pressed hard against the casement, her voice faltering. "Dalang! What are you doing? Stop it at once!"

The two of them wrestled, the window between them. Though Zhenniang was a woman, desperation lent her strength. And Hu Chuer, fearful of making too much noise and rousing the old woman, found himself momentarily unable to force it open. As they strained against each other, a sudden suspicion seized Zhenniang—the voice outside sounded like Zhao Dalang's, true enough, but there was something odd about its cadence, an unnatural stiffness. And Zhao Dalang had always been steady and proper; never once had he presumed the slightest liberty with her. Why would he come in the dead of night to force her window?

"You are not Dalang!"

Zhenniang's voice rose sharp and loud. "Who are you?"

Her cry rang out, waking the old woman in the bed.

The old woman sat up blearily. "Zhenniang? What's the matter?"

Seeing his ruse uncovered, Hu Chuer panicked. Casting caution aside, he threw his weight against the window and shoved it open, lunging to grab Zhenniang. She screamed and stumbled backward, tripping over a low stool and landing hard on the floor. Hu Chuer leaped in through the window; moonlight streamed in behind him, and now Zhenniang saw his face clearly. It bore seven or eight parts resemblance to Zhao Dalang, yet there was an indefinable wickedness about the eyes and brow, and a strange, crooked smile tugged at the corner of his mouth.

"Zhenniang, don't be afraid."

He sidled closer, grinning. "It's me, Dalang. Don't you recognize me?"

Just then, a thunderous shout erupted from outside the gate.

"Who goes there!"

The roar shook the room; the candle flame shuddered. Hu Chuer whipped his head around to see a burly figure charging through the gate—broad-shouldered and barrel-chested, a longbow slung across his back, a quiver of arrows at his hip, and a hunting trident gripped in his hands. Who else could it be but Zhao Dalang?

As it happened, Zhao Dalang had been hunting in the hills that night, setting snares for hares. He had intended to stay out until morning but discovered he had forgotten his fire-striker, so he descended the mountain to fetch it from home. Passing near Zhenniang's house, he had heard her cry of alarm from a distance. Racing over at full speed, he arrived just in time to see a man climbing through her window.

Zhao Dalang was a hunter by trade and fearless by nature. Far from being intimidated, the sight filled him with blazing fury. He drove the butt of his trident into the ground, snatched the longbow from his back, and nocked a white-feathered arrow. "Where did this scoundrel come from?" he bellowed. "Get out here now!"

Hu Chuer, seeing the tide turn against him, forgot all about Zhenniang and bolted for the door. He fled blindly, bursting out of the yard and racing down the village lane toward the hills. Zhao Dalang gave furious chase. Under the moonlight, the two figures sped one after the other out of the village and into the peach orchard at the foot of the mountain.

Hu Chuer was swift, but Zhao Dalang was a hunter with powerful legs. After a li or so, he had closed the distance. As he ran, Zhao Dalang noted something strange in the fugitive's gait—an odd, unnatural motion unlike any human stride. But rage burned in his chest, and he had no time to puzzle over it. He drew his bow and aimed at the fleeing figure's left leg.

Thwip!

The arrow flew true, sinking deep into Hu Chuer's left leg. A shriek of agony split the night—a cry that sounded not at all human, sharp and shrill as a wild beast's howl. Before Zhao Dalang's eyes, the figure ahead stumbled and pitched forward. A cloud of black smoke burst from the fallen form, and when it cleared, there was no handsome young gentleman to be seen. In his place lay a red-furred male fox, dragging its wounded left leg as it scrabbled into the underbrush with a desperate limp.

Zhao Dalang stood frozen, his bow nearly slipping from his grasp. In more than a decade of hunting, he had shot countless foxes—but never had he heard of a fox transforming into human shape to molest the village women. Steadying his nerves, he mustered his courage and approached the thicket. On the ground lay a trail of blood leading up the slope into the dense forest.

He crouched down, touched a fingertip to the blood, and brought it to his nose. Mingled with the coppery scent of blood was the rank musk of fox—identical to that of every fox he had ever skinned. Straightening up, he stared into the dark, brooding woods, and a stubborn resolve welled up in him.

"A beast dares to take human form and bring calamity to our village?"

He clenched his jaw. "If I let you escape tonight, who knows what mischief you'll stir up later?"

He glanced back toward the village. The lamp still burned in Zhenniang's house, and faintly he could hear the sound of weeping. His heart clenched, and for a moment he nearly turned back to comfort her. But his eyes fell once more on the trail of blood, and in the end he lifted his trident and followed the spoor into the mountain forest.

The path was rugged, the trees dense. Even in daylight the mountain trails were hard going—how much worse in the dead of night. In one hand Zhao Dalang held a flickering spill, in the other his trident; his bow was slung over his shoulder again, the arrows rattling in his quiver with every step. The blood trail appeared and disappeared—a small pool on a rock here, a smear against a tree trunk there, a scattering on dead leaves. Yet Zhao Dalang's long hunting experience kept him on the track; he never lost it.

He had followed for perhaps half an hour when he came to a mountain stream. The blood trail vanished at the water's edge. He searched up and down the bank until, on the far side, he spotted a single bloody footprint pressed into a patch of moss—a print no larger than a man's thumb, unmistakably the track of a fox. He waded across and pressed on into the deeper mountains.

The farther he went, the taller and thicker the trees grew. Overhead, a dense canopy of branches and leaves blotted out the moon entirely. The light from his spill illuminated only a few feet ahead; beyond that, darkness pressed in on all sides. The only sounds were the moan of wind through the treetops and the cries of unseen night birds.

He followed the trail for another stretch, until it vanished utterly at the base of a sheer cliff. Zhao Dalang held up his spill and peered around. He noticed a fissure in the rock face, half-hidden by an ancient wisteria vine. He was about to push the vine aside and investigate when a sudden chill gust rushed from the crevice, and his spill's flame guttered wildly, nearly dying out.

A cold prickle ran down Zhao Dalang's spine. He took a step back. He had spent years in these wilds and knew that the mountains held things best left unprovoked. Something in the breath issuing from that crack made his hunter's instincts scream a warning: Danger ahead.

At that moment, two points of faint green light kindled deep within the crevice.

The twin green lights hung suspended in the blackness, motionless, fixed coldly upon Zhao Dalang. He tightened his grip on the trident, every hair on his body standing on end. He had seen the eyes of wolves, of wildcats, even of bears—but never eyes like these. The green glow held a chill, penetrating quality, as though they could look straight through flesh and into the soul.

The green lights drifted slowly closer. A massive shape emerged from the shadows of the fissure.

It was a silver-gray vixen, far larger than any ordinary fox—nearly the size of a small calf. She sat crouched at the mouth of the crevice, the darkness of the cave yawning behind her. Her eyes gleamed like green jade, catching the feeble light of his spill with an eerie, cold luster. In that gaze there was no anger, no fear—only a terrifying calm.

Zhao Dalang met her eyes for a long moment. The hand gripping his trident was slick with cold sweat. He opened his mouth as if to speak, but found he could make no sound at all. The old vixen's gaze was like a mountain, pressing down upon him until he could scarcely breathe.

Slowly, the vixen lowered her head, her eyes traveling from the trident in his hand to his bow and quiver. Her gaze lingered for a heartbeat on the white-feathered arrow still stained with Hu Chuer's blood. Then she looked up again, and her eyes met Zhao Dalang's once more with profound depth.

In that single look, Zhao Dalang understood with absolute clarity a single, unspoken emotion: She had marked him.

There was no growl, no lunge, no unnecessary movement of any kind. The old vixen merely turned, silent as a ghost, and withdrew into the darkness of the crevice. The twin points of green light receded gradually, until at last they were swallowed by the depths of the cave.

Zhao Dalang felt as though a great weight had been lifted. He staggered backward several steps, his back colliding with a pine trunk, and gasped for breath. Only then did he realize his clothes were soaked through with cold sweat. He dared not linger another moment. Turning, he fled down the mountain, stumbling and tripping, unaware of when his spill had gone out.

By the time he reached the stream again, the eastern sky was tinged with the gray of dawn. He collapsed on the bank and scooped up handfuls of icy water, splashing his face until he felt his soul return to his body.

He thought back to the old vixen's gaze, and a mix of lingering fear and bewilderment filled him. That creature could easily have harmed him—a fox-spirit of that size could likely have taken his life without effort—yet she had not. She had merely looked at him, then retreated into her den.

What Zhao Dalang did not know was that the old vixen had refrained from attacking not out of mercy, but because she understood the laws of Heaven's Way. After centuries of cultivation, she knew well that any spirit who revealed her true form and took human life in the mortal realm would invite divine retribution. Hu Chuer's transformation to harass a mortal woman was already a violation; being shot for it was his just punishment. If she now killed Zhao Dalang in retaliation, she would be compounding one offense with another. At best, her cultivation would be grievously set back; at worst, she would draw down the thunderbolts of Heaven.

So she had endured.

But she would not forget the debt of that arrow.

Back in the deepest recesses of the cave, the old vixen crouched beside Hu Chuer. He had reverted to his true form and lay curled upon a pile of dry grass, the wound on his left leg still seeping blood. His whole body trembled, and pitiful whimpers escaped his throat. Hu Meier crouched nearby, gently licking her brother's injury.

When their mother returned, Hu Meier lifted her head. Her silver-white fur shimmered faintly in the cavern's gloom, and the crimson mark between her brows seemed brighter than ever. Softly, she said, "Mother, his wound is deep. The arrowhead grazed the bone."

The old vixen said nothing. She bent her head and sniffed at Hu Chuer's wound. Then she moved deeper into the cave, retrieving several medicinal herbs from a crevice. Chewing them into a poultice, she applied the mash to the injury, then tore a strip of inner bark fiber and bound the wound tightly.

Hu Chuer trembled with pain but did not dare cry out. He stole a glance at his mother's face. Her expression was utterly blank as she methodically licked the blood from his leg. That silence frightened him more than any scolding could.

After a long while, the old vixen finally spoke, her voice low and rough. "The bone is damaged. Even after it heals, this left leg will be shorter than the others."

Hu Chuer shuddered and buried his head between his forepaws.

"Do you understand where you went wrong?" Her voice remained eerily calm.

"I… I should not have gone to the village…" Hu Chuer's reply was barely a whisper.

"That is not it."

The old vixen cut him off. "Your error was in using the arts I taught you to do evil. I passed on the transformation technique so that you might protect yourself in danger—not so you could use it to prey upon mortal women."

Hu Chuer dared not speak.

"The path of cultivation hinges above all upon refining the heart. If your heart lacks discipline, then no matter how many arts you possess, it will all come to nothing in the end."

The old vixen sighed, and her voice was heavy with exhaustion. "That arrow was loosed by a mortal hand, but the true wound came from your own greed. Remember this lesson. From this day forward, you will be a cripple. Every step you take, the ache in that leg will remind you of this day's transgression."

Hu Meier spoke gently from the side. "Mother, Brother knows he was wrong."

The old vixen glanced at her daughter, and her gaze softened a measure. Of her two children, the daughter, though younger, possessed a far steadier nature than the son, and she cultivated with diligence. Sometimes the old vixen even felt that Hu Meier was her true heir.

"Meier, remember this."

The old vixen's words came slowly. "For us fox-kind, cultivation is hard-won. Every increment of attainment is bought with centuries of bitter practice. Mortals are already predisposed to fear and suspect us. If we go out of our way to stir up trouble, we are simply courting destruction. The arrow your brother took today is his own karmic retribution. He has no one else to blame."

She paused, her gaze turning toward the depths of the cave, as if looking at something far away.

"But as for that hunter…"

Her voice dropped to a murmur, as though speaking to herself—or to some unseen listener. "I will remember him."

Hu Meier looked up at her mother. Deep within the old vixen's eyes, those twin points of green light flickered once, then subsided, returning to their usual calm.

From that day on, Hu Chuer was a cripple. After the wound healed, his left leg was shorter than the right, and he walked with a pronounced limp. The younger foxes in the clan began calling him "Left Lame" behind his back. That nickname lodged in his heart like a thorn, and every time he heard it, his hatred for the hunter deepened.

As for Zhao Dalang, after returning to the village, he recounted the night's events to Zhenniang and the village elders. All were horrified and relieved in equal measure, and everyone declared that it was only Zhao Dalang's courage and true aim that had driven off the fox-spirit. Zhenniang, badly shaken by the ordeal, fell ill for half a month. Zhao Dalang stayed by her side day and night, bringing her medicine and soup, never leaving her. After she recovered, their wedding was moved forward, and they were married before summer's end.

On the day of the wedding, Zhao Family Village was decked with lanterns and streamers, bustling with joy. Zhao Dalang wore new clothes, a red flower pinned to his chest, his grin so wide it seemed his mouth might split. Zhenniang, her face hidden beneath a red bridal veil, stepped out of the wedding palanquin and took his hand, and the two of them bowed to Heaven and Earth amidst the boisterous cheers of the crowd.

No one noticed, on the hillside beyond the village, behind the ancient pine tree, a silver-gray vixen crouched in silence. She gazed at the lights and the revelry in the village below for a long, long time. Then, without a sound, she turned and melted away into the gathering dusk of the mountain forest.

Behind her, a string of footprints disappeared into the tall grass. Among them, one print was fainter than the rest—shallower by three full parts.

It was the mark left by her left forepaw.

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