okey , i finley sitting to rewrite some of chapter , many of you have pointed out bunch of mistakes i've made in starting chapter, and the scene that you did not like or could have been much better
i would like to , leave you suggestion and ideas in comment section.
AND
I have a friend who also started writing a fanfic , its a demon slayer fanfic where a man gets reincarnated as "Muzan" the big bad michael jackson copy (lol)
and the author ( my friend ) does not use AI , AT ALL , he is somewhat and establish writer ( on web novel ) and had written some original novel and is writing a originel novel , he also got contract from we novel too, so if you re interested then check it out
"Demon Slayer: Reincarnated as Muzan Kibutsuji"
author : TheDevil_Supreme