To strip away the "AI smell" and maintain the Joe Abercrombie grit, the blurb needs to move away from heroic promises and toward clinical, physical desperation.

Here are two options in English, designed to grab a reader’s attention by focusing on the "Body Horror" and "Tactical Nihilism" of the story.

Option 1: The Clinical Horror (Best for "Hardcore" Readers)
Soren Valcrest was supposed to be a corpse by the end of Chapter One.

He was the "Trash Prince"—cannon fodder designed to die so the Hero could look good. But the script glitched. Soren stayed alive. Now, he is a redundant variable in a world that is actively trying to delete him.

The System isn't here to help. It’s an auditor, not a guide. It tracks the Narrative Debt he owes for every breath he wasn't supposed to take. Survival has a physical price:

The Latency: A 400ms delay between his soul and his skin. His left side is a ghost-limb, always a heartbeat late to the fight.

The Anchor: A device in his pocket that burns his flesh while broadcasting his unfiltered thoughts to every predator in the room.

The Overwrite: An 8% infection of his mind, turning his logic into the cold, ruthless efficiency of the villain he was written to be.

Soren isn't trying to save the world. He’s just performing surgery on a broken destiny with a blunt knife.

The story already wrote his ending. Soren just hasn't decided to read it yet.

Chapter 11 - Publish Test Final