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Chapter 3 - ECHO

Nova POV

The creature finds her anyway.

She climbs. The boy below her climbs. The fire escape shakes under both of them like it is reconsidering its life choices. Three flights up, roof access, a door that is locked because of course it is, because nothing in this place has the decency to be easy

The thing hits the building.

Not climbs. Hits. Like the concept of climbing is beneath it, and ramming through structural supports is a more honest way to travel. The whole fire escape shudders. A bolt near Nova's hand pops loose and spirals down into the dark, and she does not watch it land; she is already moving, she is already looking for something, anything

The extinguisher is bolted to the wall beside the roof door. Old. Red gone orange with rust. She wrenches it free with both hands, and the bracket fights her, and she wins, which is the first thing she has won all night, and she holds it like a bat and turns around.

The creature pulls itself up over the fourth-floor railing.

Close, it is worse. The not-face up close is just an absence. Blank space where features should be. The mouth is open, and nothing comes out of it, no sound, which is somehow the worst part.

The boy has made himself very small in the corner behind her. She can hear him breathing.

"Don't watch," she tells him.

"I'm not," he whispers. He is watching.

The creature lunges.

Nova swings.

The extinguisher connects with the side of its head, or what she is calling its head for lack of better vocabulary, and the sound is enormous and wrong, a deep bell-toll that she feels in her back teeth. The thing staggers. One of its six legs buckles.

And then she feels it.

Something in the air. A pressure that has nothing to do with wind. It starts in her palms, spreads up her arms, and moves through her chest like someone pressed a key, and a door she didn't know existed swings open inside her.

The world stutters.

That is the only word for it. Like a video buffering for half a second. The creature's motion mid-lunge, recovering, already swinging back toward her reverses. Not slow. Reverses. Its own momentum turns inside out, and the force of everything it was throwing at her gets picked up and thrown back, doubled, a weight she could never have generated on her own, and the creature flies backward into the brick wall hard enough to crack it.

The whole building shudders.

Nova stands there.

The extinguisher drops from her hands. Hits the grating with a clang.

The creature does not get up.

A chime sounds clean and bright and utterly out of place, and her panel blinks back to life.

ABILITY ACTIVATED.GLITCH: ECHO INVERSION.DESCRIPTION: [UNDEFINED]NOTE: THIS ABILITY SHOULD NOT EXIST.

She reads it twice.

This ability should not exist.

She is covered in rust, and her arms are shaking, and she just doesn't know what she just did. She felt it happen. She felt the moment something opened in her. But she couldn't have told you how, and she cannot tell you how to do it again, and the system, apparently, cannot explain it either.

The panel updates.

FIRST MISSION: COMPLETE.ANOMALY NOTE: RESULT INCONSISTENT WITH PLAYER PARAMETERS.YOU HAVE BEEN FLAGGED.

"Flagged," she says out loud. Her voice comes out steadier than she expects. "Great. Wonderful."

"What does flagged mean?" the boy says from the corner.

"I have no idea."

"Is that bad?"

She looks at the creature slumped against the cracked brick. At the panel hanging in her vision, with its cheerful notification that she is an inconsistency. At her own hands, which are scraped and shaking and apparently capable of things the Game itself did not plan for.

"Probably," she says.

He makes a small sound. She almost feels bad about that.

She finds out his name while they wait for something else to come. Patch. Nineteen years old. Four months in the Game, surviving entirely by locating danger and immediately going the opposite direction, which he explains with a pride that is both completely reasonable and deeply funny, given their current situation.

"And yet here you are," Nova says. "On the fire escape."

"I heard the timer going, and I panicked, and this was the closest thing," he says. He pauses. "I am usually better at running."

"How many people do you run with?"

"Just me." His voice goes quiet on that. Just a little. "It's safer."

She doesn't push. She knows what that kind of quiet means.

The creature hasn't moved. The mission is complete. Her panel has stopped sending updates, which should feel like a relief and mostly just feels like the silence before the next thing.

She is leaning on the railing, looking out at the bruise-colored skyline, when she feels it.

Not a sound. Not a movement. A weight in the air, directional, specific. The particular feeling of someone watching you who is very good at not being seen.

She looks across the alley.

The rooftop opposite is dark. Nothing obvious. No shape, no silhouette, no glowing panel she can make out from here.

But the feeling doesn't go away.

She has felt versions of this before the awareness of a room shifting when someone important walks in. The way attention has a texture if it's focused enough.

This is focused.

Whoever is over there is not being careless. They are not crouched and scared and hoping to stay hidden. They are standing exactly where they want to stand, watching exactly what they want to watch, and they have chosen her specifically.

It doesn't feel like a threat.

That is almost more unsettling. A threat she could prepare for.

This feels like the moment before someone makes a decision. Like she is being turned over slowly in someone's hands, examined, weighed.

She stares at the dark rooftop, and the dark stares back.

Her panel flickers.

One new line. No header. No source.

YOU SURVIVED SOMETHING YOU SHOULD NOT HAVE.

She looks at it.

Then, before she can think better of it, she looks back at the rooftop and says quietly, to the dark and whoever is standing in it, "I know."

The feeling shifts.

Not gone. Closer.

Patch tugs her sleeve. "Who are you talking to?"

She doesn't answer.

Across the alley, in the dark, something moves.

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