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Chapter 70 - 070: Blood in the Mist

By the end of the third day, Naruto and Sasuke came back through the door with mud on their sandals, bark dust clinging to their clothes, and the stiff, exhausted look of boys who had pushed themselves past the point of comfort and kept going anyway.

Sakura straightened from where she had been helping Tsunami with the dishes. Kakashi, propped against the wall with his book half-open in one hand, lifted his visible eye.

"Well," he said mildly, "you're not completely hopeless."

Naruto blinked. "That's it?"

Kakashi's eye curved. "What? Were you expecting tears? A heartfelt speech? Maybe a hug?"

Naruto looked genuinely offended. "A 'good job' would've been nice!"

"A good job requires me to lower my standards," Kakashi replied lazily.

Shorai, seated near the window with a scroll open over one knee, looked up. "Good job, both of you."

Naruto immediately pointed at him. "See? That. That's normal."

Sasuke gave a quiet huff and leaned one shoulder against the frame, trying and failing to disguise how tired he was.

Kakashi closed the little orange book with one finger marking the page. "Shorai's right, though. Tree climbing was never the end goal." He tilted his head toward Naruto and Sasuke. "It was the fastest way to force your chakra control to improve under pressure. Now comes the more annoying part."

Naruto's face fell. "There's more?"

"There's always more," Shorai said.

Kakashi nodded. "You learned how to regulate the amount of chakra needed for a precise task. Fine control. Constant output. Immediate correction when it slips. That doesn't mean your taijutsu, your movement, or your techniques will magically improve on their own." He tapped the side of his head. "You have to apply it. Over and over, until your body stops treating it like a trick and starts treating it like instinct."

Sasuke's expression sharpened. Naruto groaned like he had just been handed a death sentence.

"No slacking," Kakashi added pleasantly.

The next morning, Naruto and Sasuke were gone before sunrise, racing each other back toward the trees with the raw, competitive energy of two boys who would rather collapse than admit the other had gotten ahead.

Not long after, Sakura found Kakashi outside.

"Kakashi-sensei…"

He was sitting on the stairs with one knee raised, book in hand, looking so unbothered that it was almost offensive. He glanced up at her. "Hm?"

She hesitated only a second. "Is there… something I can learn too?"

For once, Kakashi didn't answer immediately. His gaze lingered on her in quiet assessment—not dismissive, not patronizing, simply measuring. Then he shut the book over one finger and said, "Of course there is."

Sakura straightened.

"You have the best chakra control out of the three of you," he said. "It would be a waste not to build on it. Start with water walking."

Her eyes widened slightly. "Water walking?"

Kakashi nodded toward the shore. "Same principle as tree climbing. Smaller margin for error. The water won't hold still for you, and it won't forgive bad control." His eye bent in a faint crescent. "Perfect for you."

That was enough. Sakura bowed her head sharply and hurried off with fresh purpose in her step.

So the remaining four days divided them.

Naruto and Sasuke spent their mornings and afternoons competing with almost feral intensity—running trunks, refining footwork, forcing chakra through tired legs until their control stopped breaking under strain. Sakura took to the water with stubborn concentration, failing, correcting, and trying again until frustration gave way to rhythm.

And Shorai moved between worlds.

On the fourth day, he finished another round of treatment on Kakashi. The jonin could walk upright now without leaning on the wall or masking discomfort behind lazy posture, though the weakness still lingered in the muscles. The overuse had bitten deep. There were limits even to accelerated recovery.

Kakashi accepted the verdict with insulting ease.

"So I'm alive, mobile, and tragically forbidden from heroic overexertion," he murmured, already opening Icha Icha again. "Cruel."

"You can either rest properly," Shorai smirked, wiping his hands on a cloth, "or I can leave the recovery half-done and let your body remind you what nerve fatigue feels like."

Kakashi looked at him over the edge of the page. "You know, for a medic, your bedside manner is a little severe."

"For a patient, you're unusually committed to being inconvenient."

"Hm. Must be my charm."

Shorai left him to his book.

While Kakashi recovered, the burden of visible protection fell more and more on him.

Tazuna's workers were dwindling.

Each day, fewer men came. Some arrived late with hollow faces and eyes that kept cutting toward the road. Some left before noon after hearing rumors—another threat, another family leaned on, another warning delivered in the dark by men who smiled too much and spoke too softly. Fear spread more efficiently than disease. It needed no proof, only repetition.

Shorai stayed near the construction site through the mornings, cloak stirred by salt wind, senses spread thin and wide across the approach routes. He watched hands shake around tools. He watched men flinch at distant sounds that turned out to be nothing. He watched Tazuna try to stand taller than his exhaustion.

"It'll hold," Shorai told him once, when the old man's eyes had lingered too long on the half-finished span. "A little longer."

Tazuna gave a dry laugh with no humor in it. "You say that like you've already seen the ending."

Shorai's gaze rested on the fog beyond the water. "No," he said quietly. "Just enough to know panic won't help us reach it."

It was not comfort in the way Naruto would have given it, bright and impossible and infectious. But it was steady. Sometimes steady was what people reached for when hope felt too expensive.

The hours he did not spend guarding the bridge crew, he spent training.

Morning into afternoon. Evening into night.

He worked alone, away from the others, where the trees were dense enough to swallow sound and the sea breeze carried away the residue of chakra. Wind and lightning. Separation, fusion, balance. Tiny refinements repeated until his tenketsu ached and his pathways felt scraped raw from precision. The control was improving. Not fast enough to satisfy him, but steadily.

Blinding Flight remained his sharpest edge—dangerous, efficient, and still too costly to be wasted. The battery seals needed cleaner discharge timing. Lightning still wanted to spike where it should have flowed. Wind still needed finer shaping if he wanted less turbulence on release.

He kept at it until sweat chilled on his skin and his hands stopped trembling only because they had gone too numb to do so.

On one of those days, he noticed Inari.

The boy slipped away in the afternoon, shoulders hunched, heading toward the patch of forest Naruto and Sasuke had claimed as their battlefield. Shorai marked it without interfering.

By evening, just before he left for his own night training, he saw them again.

Naruto and Inari were sitting together on the shore, side by side in the dimming light, the sea rolling black-blue before them. Naruto was talking with unusual quiet. Inari wasn't looking at him, but he wasn't pulling away either. Whatever had passed between them had stripped some of the brittle hostility from the boy's posture.

Shorai watched only a moment before turning away.

So it begins, he thought.

Not with speeches. Not with miracles. Just one lonely boy deciding not to leave another one alone with his grief.

Sakura improved too.

By the last evening, she could stand on the water and move across it in short, careful steps before the surface betrayed her and she broke through with a splash and a furious noise of frustration. Each attempt lasted longer than the one before it.

Kakashi watched her from the porch once, eye narrowing with quiet approval before he masked it with his usual indifference.

The final night settled over Tazuna's house heavy and still. Even the air felt expectant.

At dinner, conversation came in patches. Naruto inhaled food between declarations of how badly he was going to crush the "stupid mist jerk" if he showed up again. Sasuke answered with disdain sharpened just enough to hide his own anticipation. Sakura was quieter than usual, tension tucked into the line of her shoulders. Tazuna drank more than he probably should have. Tsunami tried to keep the atmosphere warm for Inari's sake.

Kakashi, as always, looked like a man half-asleep through someone else's crisis.

When the meal was done and the house had begun to settle, he finally spoke.

"Tomorrow," he said, lifting his gaze from his cup, "we escort Tazuna-san to the bridge. Be ready by seven." His eye slid over each of them in turn. "I won't wait for late arrivals."

The words landed like a small stone dropped into still water.

Naruto grinned with immediate confidence. Sasuke's mouth tightened in something close to eagerness. Sakura looked as if she wanted to ask whether they were truly ready and already knew the answer would not comfort her.

Shorai only inclined his head.

On the surface, he remained his usual composed self. Inside, a thin line of tension drew tighter.

His gaze drifted, almost of its own accord, toward Naruto.

The stone should react, he thought. 'If pressure rises enough… if Naruto loses control, or if that resonance answers conflict the way I think it does—'

He cut the thought there.

Speculation was useful only until the moment action began.

Morning came cold and pale.

Shorai woke with a low exhale, fatigue clinging stubbornly to the edges of his body. Not enough to slow him. Enough to remind him that he had been burning himself down in increments for days.

When he entered the main room, Sasuke was already awake, checking his gear with ritual precision. Wire. Kunai. Shuriken. Everything laid out, inspected, returned. His face was unreadable in the weak light.

Outside, Kakashi stood by the railing with one hand in his pocket, looking out toward the mist-veiled water as if this were just another mildly inconvenient morning.

Sakura was tying her hair back tighter than usual.

Naruto was still asleep.

So was Inari, curled up and oblivious to the hour.

Shorai stopped near the doorway and looked at Kakashi. "You really intend to leave without Naruto?"

Kakashi didn't turn. "Hm? I intend to leave on time."

"That wasn't my question."

Now Kakashi glanced over, eye lazy and entirely too calm. "Knowing Naruto, he'll wake up, panic, shout, trip over his own feet, and still manage to find us before anything truly interesting happens."

Shorai studied him for a beat. "You enjoy pushing variables to see which ones break."

Kakashi's eye curved. "Only the educational ones."

Shorai exhaled through his nose. "With Naruto, that distinction is unreliable."

"True," Kakashi admitted. "But with you there, the margin for disaster improves."

Sasuke stepped closer, fastening the last strap at his wrist. "Hn. By the time that idiot gets there, we'll already have dealt with any of Gato's thugs." His expression cooled further. "He'd just get in the way."

Sakura looked from one to the other, unease tightening across her face. She opened her mouth, then stopped. Maybe she knew arguing would change nothing. Maybe she was afraid her own doubt would sound childish beside all this confidence.

Either way, she said nothing.

A few minutes later, they set out.

Tazuna walked at the center. Kakashi slightly ahead, unhurried in that deceptive way of his. Sasuke to one side, alert and silent. Sakura close enough to protect the client, but not crowd him. Shorai ranged a little wider, senses combing through the morning around them.

The path was damp beneath their sandals. Trees whispered overhead. Somewhere far off, water struck wood in a slow, hollow rhythm.

As they neared the unfinished bridge, the air changed.

Subtly at first.

The light dulled. Sound flattened. Moisture thickened against the skin.

Shorai's eyes narrowed.

Then Kakashi's hand came up.

Everyone stopped.

Mist began to gather ahead of them—too fast, too deliberate. It rolled across the bridge like something alive, swallowing edges, swallowing distance, swallowing the world beyond the narrow strip of stone beneath their feet.

In seconds, the scenery vanished into white.

Then a voice drifted through it, amused and low.

"Hu-hu-hu. Surprised to see me?"

Zabuza stepped out of the white, massive sword resting across one shoulder as though he had never been dragged away as a corpse at all. At his side came the same masked boy from before—small, composed, and silent, moving with that unnerving lightness that made it difficult to judge where his weight truly settled.

Kakashi's visible eye creased.

"On the contrary," he said. "We were expecting you." His gaze shifted, unhurried, to the boy beside Zabuza. "Both of you."

For the first time that morning, a flicker of interest passed through Zabuza's expression.

"Is that so?" His voice remained easy, but the ease had sharpened. "Then maybe it's you who should be prepared to be surprised."

He gave a short, piercing whistle.

Three figures burst from the mist in answer.

They landed in a blur of grey vests and muted armor, sandals scraping lightly against the bridge stone as they spread out with practiced precision. One to the left. One to the right. One directly ahead. In an instant, the road had been divided—Kakashi and the others toward the front, Shorai and Tazuna cut off toward the rear.

A clean split.

An executioner's arrangement.

Shorai moved at once.

He stepped in front of Tazuna and guided the old man back with one arm, placing his own body between the bridge builder and the newly arrived trio. His eyes flicked over them in a single sweep.

Kirigakure, or once of it. Missing-nin by the look and smell of them. Their gear was practical, stripped down, layered for movement rather than show. Not jonin monsters on Zabuza's level—but veterans. Men accustomed to killing quickly and leaving little behind.

Kakashi let out a small breath, almost bored.

"Oh?" he said. "So this isn't just about pride after all. Here I thought you came for a rematch."

Zabuza's gaze hardened.

"Last time was a fluke," he said coldly. "That Sharingan trick won't catch me twice." He tipped his head slightly toward the men behind Shorai. "Those three are insurance. They finish the mission. I take my time with you."

Kakashi's eye slid to the masked boy. "And him?"

A pause.

Then Zabuza smiled, and for the first time there was something almost genuine in it.

"My sharpest tool," he said. "Haku."

The boy inclined his head politely.

"Everything he knows," Zabuza went on, "he learned from me."

Kakashi hummed as if considering a curiosity in a shop window. Then his gaze shifted.

"Sasuke," he said mildly, "why don't you keep him busy?"

Sasuke's mouth curved by the slightest degree. "Hn."

Zabuza barked out a rough laugh.

"Keep Haku busy?" he repeated. "You're either confident or stupid."

"Sometimes both," Kakashi said.

"Shorai," he added without looking back.

"No worries, Kakashi-san," Shorai replied, his tone level. "Leave the rear to me."

He did not take his eyes off the three men in front of him.

For a moment, no one moved.

Mist curled low over the stone. Water dripped faintly from the steel supports below. Somewhere beyond the white veil, waves struck timber with a dull, distant rhythm.

Then the man in the center—scar across the jaw, narrow eyes, one hand already resting on a kunai—spoke first.

"Brat," he said. "Move aside and hand over the old man. You might keep your life."

Shorai regarded him without expression.

"Can I ask something first?"

The man gave a short, humorless chuckle. "You want last words?"

"No." Shorai's gaze stayed steady. "Just a comparison."

A beat of silence.

The mist-nin's brow twitched. "What?"

"How do the three of you," Shorai asked, almost politely, "compare to Momochi Zabuza?"

The man's mouth pulled into a sneer. "Enough to kill you."

Behind them, metal rang.

Zabuza's brief intimidation with the water clones was over.

Haku had moved.

Sasuke met him at once, kunai flashing. The exchange was fast enough to blur at the edges—one step, two, the scrape of sandals, the hiss of senbon slicing the air. Sasuke was reading him well, better than before. His footwork was clean, chakra control tightening his movement into something leaner, more efficient.

For an instant, it looked almost effortless.

Haku flicked senbon. Sasuke slipped past the first spread, angled inside the second, and drove forward with a burst of speed that made even Kakashi's eye sharpen in approval.

The masked boy formed a one-handed seal.

At the same moment, Sasuke saw his opening and committed.

He pushed chakra hard into his feet, surged over the damp bridge surface, and slammed a knee into Haku's chest.

Haku's body bent with the impact and flew backward, skidding toward Zabuza.

Sasuke landed in a crouch, a quick smirk touching his face.

Too soon.

The water scattered from the earlier clash—small droplets, kicked and splashed across the bridge—shivered in midair.

Haku's seal tightened.

Those droplets lengthened into needles.

"Sasuke!" Kakashi warned.

"Let them play, Kakashi!" Zabuza cut in, one hand dropping to the hilt of Kubikiribōchō. "We've got our own business."

The senbon shot forward.

Sasuke's eyes widened, then narrowed. At the last moment, he forced chakra into his legs and twisted away, the improved control from tree training saving him by a margin so thin it might as well have been luck. The senbon hissed past his shoulder and cheek instead of burying themselves in something vital.

He landed badly but alive.

Shorai saw all of that in fragments.

Enough to judge. Not enough to intervene.

The pressure in the air shifted.

Cold rolled across the bridge in a sudden wave, sharp enough to prickle the skin.

Ice, Shorai thought at once.

So it begins.

He kept his attention forward.

The three mist-nin spread a little wider, testing angles, trying to force him to divide his awareness. Smart enough not to rush blindly. Not smart enough to understand what they were measuring.

Then Sasuke's voice broke from the front through the deepening mist—a sharp sound, more anger than pain.

Reflex tugged at Shorai's focus.

He turned his head a fraction.

That was enough.

"No one taught you not to look away from your opponent?"

A strangely distorted voice came from directly ahead.

Shorai exhaled, almost disappointed.

"Trying to put me in Genjutsu? Pushovers," he muttered.

His sensory field caught the mismatch at once: the voice was ahead, but the chakra signature did not line up with it.

The three men lunged, eyes bloodshot.

They came low and fast, kunai first, one center and two angling to flank. Their timing was disciplined—just staggered enough that a straight dodge would expose his back or Tazuna's position.

Shorai moved.

He sent chakra through his body in a quick internal surge, feeding wind nature through pathways already worn raw from days of refinement. His right foot slid across the bridge stone in a sharp arc, pivoting his body sideways, then further until his back turned briefly to the incoming rush.

To an outside eye, it looked wrong.

A mistake.

What they did not see was the white-haired boy's hand moving behind his back.

Shorai drew both palms closer together, and between them a small vortex of wind began to gather—tight, circling, restrained. Thin chakra clung to his hands like a sheer film, pressing the air inward until it trembled with potential.

Let's see the product of my elemental honing.

A faint smile touched his lips.

"Improvisation on the go," he murmured.

'Shorai Style: Slicing Wind Blast.'

His senses caught the approach before sight ever had to. He shifted with the rhythm of the charge, turning in a smooth arc to the right, his body aligning with the center attacker just as the man entered range.

Then Shorai thrust both palms forward.

The compressed wind burst free.

Woosh.

It struck the nearest mist-nin square in the chest with a violent, focused release. Wind and chakra tore through him in one widening surge, the edge of the blast cutting deep while the force behind it hurled him backward. He slammed across the bridge, skidding nearly thirty meters before coming to an ugly stop.

His vest was shredded. The protection was gone in strips. Deep cuts opened across his body where the wind had bitten through flesh and cloth alike.

Shorai's mouth curved faintly.

Almost like Wind Release: Great Breakthrough.

His eyes shifted to the two remaining enemies, closing in from left and right.

Now you'll be the first to experience my elemental taijutsu.

He withdrew his hands, clenching them into inverted fists at his waist. Wind and lightning chakra began to gather around him in a thin, restless layer, the two natures pressing against each other as he lowered his stance.

Swift Release: Shadowless Flight.

Tzzss—zoom.

His body blurred.

For an instant he vanished from sight, only to reappear directly in front of the man on the left.

'Shorai Style: Twin-Flowing Strike.'

His fists moved as one—one rising, one dropping—each tracing a tight circular line before crashing into the enemy's chest. The impact was not simple. The compressed chakra inside the strike detonated at the moment of contact, wind and lightning surging together through the man's body.

The vest caved in.

Bone cracked.

Blood burst from the wound as the force drove him backward, sending him tumbling across the bridge beside his ally.

The last standing mist-nin lunged in desperation.

Shorai's senses caught everything.

The shift of weight. The twitch of shoulders. The angle of the blade before it fell.

He moved in quick zig-zagging steps, slipping away from each blow before it could land, always one breath ahead of the strike. He did not need the Sharingan for this.

By now, his mind worked like a two-tomoe eye, and his body responded seamlessly.

I'm down to about half my reserves...

Shorai lifted one palm and released a gust just strong enough to shove his opponent back and create a narrow opening. Then he turned inward and let the Reality Stone answer.

Complete sensory state. Detect presence and energy. Keep me updated on Naruto's change of energy, Sasuke's vitals and current state. Also update me on my chakra reserves.

The answer came instantly.

[Naruto approaching. No significant change. Sasuke standing. Body damaged, fatigue building. Operator's state: 59% chakra.]

Shorai's eyes narrowed.

"Hm... he's about to appear, eh?"

Then—

Fiew!

Tak!

Tud!

A shuriken struck something in the mist, followed by the heavy sound of a body hitting the bridge.

The flashy entrance had begun.

Shorai and the last mist-nin both froze and turned toward the sound, the interruption slicing through the tension like a blade.

From somewhere in the fog, Kakashi's voice drifted out, flat with disappointment.

"Naruto..."

The illusion of a grand arrival shattered at once.

Naruto gave an awkward, sheepish laugh before straightening himself, trying to recover the dignity that had just been ripped out from under him. His eyes found Shorai at the rear, still facing the lone remaining enemy.

"Help Sasuke! I'm in control here!" Shorai shouted without taking his eyes off the man in front of him.

Then he looked back to the mist-nin.

"So..." he said quietly, his voice almost calm enough to be worse than anger, "where were we?"

The man trembled.

Whether from fear or fury, Shorai did not care.

"Let's end this charade."

For a moment, they stood in silence.

Then Shorai closed his eyes.

His sensory field spread wider. Chakra surged through his veins. He drew a slow breath and settled into his second stance.

"I wonder how your body will handle this."

Wind and lightning compressed around him again, tighter this time, binding themselves to his frame in a thin pale layer. His palms glowed faintly with chakra as he pushed harder, far beyond the amount required for a simple strike.

[User's chakra: 57%... 55%... 52%... 50%... 48%... 40%...]

And then he felt it.

A shift.

Familiar.

The residue of the first release had changed something in him. The flow of the elements was faster now, cleaner, more obedient. Internal and external currents aligned under precise control, and for one breathless instant the technique answered as though it had been waiting for this exact moment to awaken.

'Swift Release... Stage Two... Phantom Step.'

The mist-nin barely had time to register the flicker of a silhouette.

Shorai vanished.

When the man blinked, Shorai was already there—standing directly in front of him, close enough for him to see the pale calm in the boy's eyes.

The white-haired boy's voice was quiet.

"Swift Strike: Pressure-Point Destruction."

Thrust. Thrust. Thrust.

The technique had been meant to be precise.

It was not.

Shorai had poured too much chakra into it, too much elemental force, too much velocity. What should have been a controlled internal disruption became something far worse—a savage, grotesque collision of wind cutting and lightning piercing, the force tearing outward as much as inward.

The man's scream tore through the mist.

"AAAHHHHH!!!"

For a heartbeat, everything on the bridge seemed to freeze.

"Shorai!"

"Shorai-kun!"

"Boy, are you alright?!"

No one could see clearly through the fog. Only the flash of motion, the scream, and then silence.

Shorai stood with his bloodied palms open before him.

For one stunned second, he only stared.

Then the fatigue hit.

His target lay ten meters away in a spreading pool of blood, his body mangled by the combined violence of the strike. Wind had carved. Lightning had pierced. The sheer force of the blow had turned the attack into something far more brutal than he had intended.

[Current chakra reserve... 30%.]

[29%...]

[28%.]

Shorai moved at once, dashing toward the two fallen men and delivering final blows before either could recover enough to matter.

"I'm good," he called out, forcing the words steady. "Don't worry. My side is done!"

But the sentence had barely left his mouth when a cold weight washed over him.

Wrong.

Shorai's gaze snapped to his hidden seals.

They were shaking.

[Naruto. Abnormal energy spike. Two sources. One from the chest, another from the mind.]

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