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Chapter 1 - Last second

A quiet city at sunset.

Cars passing. People walking. Normal life."Nothing special ever happens to me… and honestly, I'm fine with that."Cut to Ren, walking alone, earphones in, expression blank

School Scene

.Classroom noise. Friends laughing. Teacher talking.en sits by the window, staring outside.A classmate calls out:

"Yo Ren, you coming with us?"Nah… I'll pass."They shrug and leave."People chase excitement… dreams… something more. I don't get it."

After School – Street

Golden hour. Long shadows. Wind blowing lightly.

Ren walks across a street while checking his phone.

Suddenly—SCREEEECH!!!

A truck loses control, speeding straight toward him.

People scream.

Everything happens too fast.

Ren looks up—

His eyes widen.

The First Death

BOOM.

Darkness.

Silence.???

A strange empty space.

No sound. No light. Just nothing.

Then—

tick… tick… tick…

A faint sound.

RESET

Ren gasps.

He's standing in the same street. Same position.

The truck is coming again.

But—

Everything is… slow.

No… not slow.

Frozen.

Time Stop

The world is completely still.

People mid-motion. Dust in the air not moving.

Ren looks around, confused.

Ren:

"…What…?"

He steps forward.

The truck is inches away—but not moving.

His breathing gets heavy.

Narration:

"This isn't real… right?"

He touches the truck.

It's solid.

Cold.

Real.

Panic

tick… tick…

A strange pressure fills the air.

Ren feels pain in his chest.

Ren:

"…What is this feeling…?"

Instinct kicks in.

He moves—barely dodging the truck's path.

Time Resumes

CRASH!!!

The truck smashes into a pole.

People scream.

Everything returns to normal.

Silence

Ren stands there… untouched.

Shaking.

Heart racing.

Ren (whisper):

"…I should be dead."

Aftermath

Crowd gathers. Chaos everywhere.

Someone asks:

"Are you okay?!"

Ren doesn't respond.

He just stares at his hands.

Night Scene

Ren in his room. Lights off.

Sitting on his bed.

Replay in his head.

Truck. Death. Darkness. Reset.

Realization

Ren:

"…I died."

Silence.

Ren (slowly):

"…and came back."

Test

Next day.

Ren stands at a crosswalk again.

Sweating.

Nervous.

Ren:

"…If it only happens when I'm about to die…"

He steps forward—

A car honks loudly, speeding toward him.

SECOND TRIGGER

Everything freezes again.

Understanding Begins

Ren breathes heavily.

But this time… he's calmer.

He looks around.

Ren:

"…So it's real."

Pain

Suddenly—

A sharp pain hits his head.

Like pressure crushing him.

Ren (gritting teeth):

"Ghh—!"

Ticking Sound Louder

tick… tick… tick…

He feels time is about to move again.

Quickly—he steps back.

Time Resumes

The car passes.

Barely missing him.

New Fear

Ren collapses to his knees.

Sweating.

Shaking.

But now—

There's something else in his eyes.

Not just fear.

Curiosity

Ren (whisper):

"…How far can this go?"

Ending Scene

Dark alley.

Someone watching from the shadows.

A mysterious figure.

Unknown Voice:

"…He survived again."

A faint smile.

Voice:

"Interesting."

Final Shot

Close-up of Ren's face.

Conflicted.

Scared.

But changing.

"The moment before death… is where everything begins."

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