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Chapter 9 - SYSTEM OF PUNISHMENT : REBIRTH IN ANOTHER WORLD

Chapter 9: Ghamand, Jung Aur Zinda Rehne Ka Faisla

Swarn Bhoj ke bahar jo hungama hua tha…

uski goonj ab poore Kaalnagar me fail chuki thi।

Sadak ke dono taraf log jama the…

kuch dar ke maare chup…

kuch curiosity se dekh rahe the।

Beech me khada tha— Pankaj

Aur uske saamne—

👉 Senapati Clan

👉 Rajvansh Clan

Do sabse powerful parivaar।

Hawa achanak bhaari ho gayi।

DHUM… DHUM…

Do log aage badhe—

👉 Bhairav Senapati

👉 Veer Rajvansh

Unke aane se hi log peeche hatne lage।

“Clan heads aa gaye…”

“Ab to ye ladka gaya…”

Log dheere-dheere fusfusaane lage।

Bhairav ne Pankaj ko upar se neeche tak dekha।

Phir thandi awaaz me bola—

“Hum… apni talwar kisi bacche ke khilaf nahi uthate…”

Poora mahaul ek pal ke liye chup ho gaya।

Veer ne bhi haath baandh kar kaha—

“Tumne galti ki hai… par tum abhi itne bade nahi ho ki hum khud tum par haath uthayein…”

Pankaj halka sa hasa—

“Accha… to main tumhe baccha lagta hoon?”

Uski aankhon me ek ajeeb si chamak thi।

“Phir theek hai… pehle tumhare ‘bade log’ bhejo….

Bhairav ne peeche khade logon ki taraf dekha—

“Isse samjhao… apni aukaat.”

Veer ne bhi signal diya—

“Alive ya dead… farq nahi padta.”

Aage badhe—

👉 5 Senapati Clan ke young elites

👉 5 Rajvansh Clan ke young warriors

Har ek ke paas alag aura… alag confidence।

Logon ne saans rok li—

“Ye sab… top fighters hain…”

“Wo ladka akela hai…”

🧠 System Scan

[Multiple Enemies Detected]

Total: 10

Average Level: 7–9

Special Abilities: Fire, Wind, Sword Arts

Threat Level: HIGH

Pankaj ne dheere se apni ungliyaan crack ki—

“Chalo… time waste mat karo…”

Ek hi signal par—

👉 Sab 10 ek saath Pankaj par toot pade

BOOOOM!!!

Zameen hil gayi…

dhool hawa me udd gayi।

👉 Ek fire user ne blast kiya

👉 Do sword users left-right se aaye

👉 Ek speed user peeche se ghuma

Pankaj charo taraf se ghira hua tha।

⚡ Blood Sense Activate

[Skill Activated]

Blood Sense

→ Enemy movements predicted

Sab kuch slow lagne laga।

👉 Attack aane se pehle hi wo react kar raha tha

👉 Ek sword attack dodge

→ seedha pet me punch

→ DHAM!!

👉 Fire blast ke beech se nikla

→ attacker ko chain se kheechkar patka

→ CRASH!!

👉 Speed user ko mid-air pakad liya

→ seedha zameen par

→ DHUUUUMM!!

“Ye kya hai…?”

“Ek banda… 10 ko rok raha hai…?”

Ek buddha aadmi bola—

“Ye aam insaan nahi hai… isme kuch alag hai…”

Ek ladka dar ke maare bola—

“Ye to kisi kahani ka hero lagta hai…”

💀 Strategy Change

Ek elite chillaya—

“Individual attack band karo! Combine karo!”

Fire + Wind + Sword energy ek saath—

MEGA BLAST!!!

Is baar—

Pankaj hit ho gaya

BOOOOM!!!

Wo peeche ghisak gaya…

Kapde jal gaye… haath par chot।

[HP: 52%]

Status: Injured

Pankaj ne khoon saaf kiya—

Aur muskura diya।

“Accha… teamwork bhi aata hai tumhe…”

[Skill Activated]

Punishment Aura Lv2

→ Damage ↑↑

→ Fear Effect ↑

Hawa bhaari ho gayi।

Young elites ke chehre par pehli baar tension dikhi।

Pankaj aage badha—

👉 Ek kick – enemy hawa me

👉 Chain se kheech kar punch

👉 Do log ek saath gir gaye

DHAD DHAD DHAD!!!

“Hum… isse nahi jeet sakte…”

“Ye monster hai…”

4 elites peeche hatne lage।

👉 10 me se 6 gir chuke the

👉 4 mushkil se khade

Pankaj dheere-dheere unki taraf badha—

“Ab bhi ladoge?”

⚡ TABHI…

DHUUUUMMM!!!

Zameen phir se hilli।

Sab ruk gaye।

Bhairav ek kadam aage badha—

Is baar uska aura… pehle se kai guna zyada bhayanak tha।

Hawa ruk si gayi।

Veer ne apni talwar nikali—

Usme se neeli aag nikal rahi thi।

🧠 System Panic

[EXTREME WARNING]

Targets Re-evaluated

→ Bhairav Senapati: Level ???

→ Veer Rajvansh: Level ???

Threat: LETHAL

Survival Chance: 6%

⚡ Pressure

Pankaj ne mehsoos kiya—

👉 Pair bhaari ho gaye

👉 Saans tez ho gayi

“Ye… level alag hai…”

Bhairav ne dheere se kaha—

“Ab samajh aaya… tum aur hum me kitna farq hai?”

Veer ne bhi bola—

“Ab tumhara khel khatam.”

Pankaj ke dimaag me ek second me hazaar thoughts aaye—

👉 “Fight karu?”

👉 “Ya yahin khatam ho jaun?”

System flash hua—

[Advice]

→ Immediate Retreat Recommended

→ Survival Priority HIGH

🧠 Smart Decision

Pankaj ne aankhen band ki…

Phir dheere se kholi।

“Abhi… nahi…”

Jaise hi Bhairav ne attack start kiya—

👉 Pankaj ne dhool udayi

👉 chain se building par swing kiya

SWOOOSH!!!

Veer ne talwar se strike kiya—

Par hawa me sirf khaali jagah thi।

“Wo bhaag gaya?!”

“Impossible… itne logon ke beech se…!”

Bhairav halka sa hasa—

“Bhaga nahi…”

“Zinda rehna seekh gaya hai…”

Pankaj ek building ke upar khada tha…

Saans tez… body injured…

Par aankhon me aag—

“Main wapas aaunga…”

⚡ System Update

[New Objective]

→ Grow Stronger

→ Defeat 2 Major Families

→ Survive Kaalnagar

Reward: Unknown

Neeche shehar me hungama chal raha tha…

👉 Do parivaar gusse me

👉 Log dare hue

👉 Aur ek naam sabki zubaan par—

Pankaj.

Aur upar…

Wo ladka jo abhi bhaaga tha…

👉 Dar ke kaaran nahi

👉 Balki jeet ke liye

Chapter 9 End

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