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Chapter 21 - THE CAVE OF EMBERS..

INT. MOUNTAIN CAVE – NIGHT

Outside...

Rain lashes against the mountains.

Thunder echoes through Shouzhou.

Inside the cave...

A warm fire crackles.

The disciples have finally fallen asleep after standing guard in shifts.

Only four people remain awake.

Qiao Tian.

Shinzi.

Princess Shin.

Xuan Dao.

Shin sits wrapped in a thick blanket, holding a steaming bowl of herbal soup.

Silence...

SHIN

(pouting)

It tastes horrible.

XUAN DAO

Without looking up.

Medicine isn't supposed to taste good.

SHIN

Then why can't medicine taste like lotus cakes?

XUAN DAO

Because then everyone would pretend to be sick.

The cave fills with quiet laughter.

SHINZI

Drink it.

All of it.

SHIN

(shaking her head)

No.

SHINZI

Shin...

SHIN

Brother...

I'm suddenly feeling much better.

See?

She stretches both arms dramatically.

SHINZI

Drink.

SHIN

No.

The siblings stare at each other.

Qiao Tian quietly watches while pretending to polish her sword.

Xuan Dao casually sips his tea.

XUAN DAO

Five silver coins on Shinzi.

QIAO TIAN

Without looking up.

Ten on Princess Shin.

Xuan Dao turns.

"Oh?"

XUAN DAO

You're betting against the responsible elder brother?

QIAO TIAN

She's more stubborn.

Exactly three seconds later...

SHINZI

Last chance.

SHIN

No.

Shinzi suddenly reaches over.

He gently pinches Shin's cheeks.

SHIN

Mmmph!!

Before she can protest—

He lifts the bowl.

SHINZI

Open.

SHIN

Never!!

QIAO TIAN

(deadpan)

Looks like I lost ten silver.

Xuan Dao bursts into laughter.

Finally...

Shin gives up.

She drinks the soup in one dramatic gulp.

SHIN

Blegh!!

That is definitely poison.

XUAN DAO

You're still alive.

Therefore...

It isn't.

Everyone laughs again.

A peaceful silence settles over the cave.

Only the crackling fire can be heard.

After several moments...

Shin quietly looks toward Qiao Tian.

SHIN

Young Master Qiao...

QIAO TIAN

Hm?

SHIN

Thank you...

For today.

Qiao Tian looks up.

QIAO TIAN

For what?

SHIN

You saved Brother.

Then you saved me.

Then you treated my injuries.

She smiles brightly.

SHIN

You're really nice.

Qiao Tian's expression softens almost imperceptibly.

QIAO TIAN

Anyone would have done the same.

SHINZI

No.

Everyone looks toward him.

SHINZI

Not everyone.

He looks directly at Qiao Tian.

SHINZI

Most people would've prioritized the mission.

You chose people first.

A brief silence.

QIAO TIAN

A sword exists to protect.

Otherwise...

It's merely another weapon.

Xuan Dao smiles proudly.

XUAN DAO

Finally.

One sentence worth remembering after years of training.

QIAO TIAN

Master...

XUAN DAO

I'm joking.

Mostly.

The cave erupts in laughter again.

Shin suddenly leans closer.

SHIN

Can I ask something?

QIAO TIAN

Of course.

SHIN

Have you ever smiled properly?

Complete silence.

Even Xuan Dao freezes.

Qiao Tian blinks.

QIAO TIAN

...I smile.

SHIN

No.

You do this.

She imitates Qiao Tian's tiny smile.

Barely lifting the corners of her mouth.

Everyone stares.

Xuan Dao immediately starts laughing.

XUAN DAO

That's...

Exactly her.

Even Shinzi laughs quietly.

Qiao Tian sighs.

QIAO TIAN

Is my expression really that obvious?

SHINZI

Very.

SHIN

One day...

I'm going to make you laugh properly.

Qiao Tian raises an eyebrow.

QIAO TIAN

Is that a challenge?

SHIN

Yes.

QIAO TIAN

Then I wish you luck.

SHIN

You'll lose.

QIAO TIAN

We'll see.

Xuan Dao suddenly stands.

XUAN DAO

Enough chatting.

Everyone sleep.

We reach the Heavenly Lotus Peak tomorrow.

SHIN

(excited)

That's where the sword is?

XUAN DAO

If the ancient records are correct.

SHINZI

And if they aren't?

XUAN DAO

Then we climbed a mountain for exercise.

The four of them laugh.

As everyone prepares to rest...

Shinzi quietly walks beside Qiao Tian.

SHINZI

(softly)

...

Thank you.

For saving my life today.

Qiao Tian looks ahead.

QIAO TIAN

You would've done the same.

SHINZI

Perhaps.

But...

You acted first.

A brief silence.

QIAO TIAN

Then...

Next time...

You can save mine.

Shinzi smiles.

SHINZI

It's a promise.

The two exchange a respectful nod before returning to their places.

Outside the cave...

Hidden among the trees...

A pair of crimson eyes watches the firelight flickering through the entrance.

Yu Yan.

He smiles coldly.

YU YAN

Enjoy this peaceful night...

Tomorrow...

None of you will be laughing.

FADE OUT.

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