"Hmm, your refining technique for this Feather Spirit Pill is correct, and the fusion of ingredients has reached seventy percent. However, the heat control was insufficient, and your handling of the final ingredient, the Phoenix Tail Bamboo, needs to be improved."
"This Feather Spirit Pill of yours... your handling of the ingredients is acceptable, and your heat control is at a passing level. But during the final condensation, you neglected to gather the Pill Qi, causing the elixir's efficacy to diminish."
"Unacceptable. Heat control, ingredient processing, the steps... all aspects are failing. The only commendable part is the purification..."
On Xianyun Peak, several hundred students stood in neat rows, each holding a golden Feather Spirit Pill. As Qin Ya passed each person, he would point out their shortcomings and explain them.
