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Chapter 11 - Chapter 11: Evaluation

Rio barely slept.

The envelope sat on the small desk beside his bed like a challenge.

Simple paper.

Simple words.

Yet somehow heavier than anything he had carried since arriving at La Masia.

Barcelona B Staff Evaluation.

Not promotion.

Not opportunity.

Judgment.

Different thing entirely.

The dangerous part wasn't excitement.

It was timing.

Too fast meant attention.

Attention meant pressure.

Pressure meant politics.

And politics destroyed more prospects than poor performances ever could.

Across the room, Messi slept curled awkwardly beneath his blanket, completely unaware of the storm quietly beginning beside him.

Rio checked the clock.

5:18 AM.

Too early.

Didn't matter.

He stood anyway.

Routine mattered more than sleep now.

Especially when the next step felt uncertain.

He moved quietly through mobility work.

Ankle stability.

Hip movement.

Core activation.

Slow.

Controlled.

His body had improved enormously these past months, but Rio knew the truth better than anyone:

Against boys his age—

he could dictate.

Against older players—

everything changed.

Strength mattered.

Speed mattered.

Cruelty mattered.

Older football wasn't just harder.

It was less forgiving.

At fifteen, mistakes got corrected.

At eighteen?

Mistakes got punished.

Sometimes violently.

A soft voice interrupted his thoughts.

"You're moving weird again."

Rio looked over.

Messi sat up halfway.

Hair destroyed.

Eyes barely functioning.

"You're awake."

"You make too much noise."

Lie.

Rio moved silently.

Messi yawned.

Then noticed the envelope.

Immediately more awake.

"…What's that?"

Rio hesitated briefly.

Then tossed it over.

Messi squinted.

Read slowly.

Expression changing.

Barcelona B.

Silence.

Then—

"They called you already?"

Already.

Exactly.

That word mattered.

Rio nodded once.

"Observation only."

Messi looked strangely irritated.

"You're fifteen."

"Yes."

"You're supposed to still train with me."

Unexpected answer.

Interesting.

Rio leaned against the wall slightly.

"I still train with you."

Messi looked unconvinced.

"No."

Small pause.

"They're gonna steal you."

The sentence landed heavier than it should have.

Because underneath the joke—

there was something real.

Fear.

Not of losing competition.

Losing partnership.

Rio studied him briefly.

Then said quietly:

"You planning to stop becoming the best player in the world?"

Messi frowned immediately.

"No."

"Then we're fine."

Long pause.

Then finally—

"…Okay."

Not fully convinced.

But enough.

For now.

The Barcelona B training complex sat only minutes away.

Yet somehow felt like another world entirely.

Different atmosphere.

Different energy.

Sharper.

Colder.

No boys pretending.

No academy softness.

No dreams.

Only survival.

Rio noticed it instantly.

Older players moved differently.

Less wasted movement.

More aggression.

More edge.

These weren't children trying to impress coaches.

These were teenagers fighting for careers.

Some already knew they wouldn't make it.

That made them dangerous.

Very dangerous.

Rio arrived early.

Naturally.

A coach stood near midfield speaking with staff.

Broad shoulders.

Weathered face.

Hard expression.

The kind of coach who had seen hundreds of hopeful kids disappear.

He noticed Rio immediately.

Long look.

Judging already.

"You're Fiero."

Not question.

Statement.

"Yes."

The coach looked him up and down.

Pause.

"…You look younger."

Rio almost smiled.

"I am younger."

Nothing.

No reaction.

Good.

This man wasn't interested in charm.

"You'll train midfield."

"Observation only."

"Don't try to impress anybody."

Interesting instruction.

Rio nodded once.

"Understood."

The coach crossed his arms.

"We don't care about academy hype here."

Good.

Rio didn't either.

"Ball moves faster here."

"People hit harder."

"Think faster or drown."

Simple.

Clear.

Accurate.

Rio liked him already.

Warm-ups told him everything.

Immediate difference.

Intensity shocking.

Passing sharper.

Movement faster.

Physicality relentless.

Even simple rondos felt vicious.

No one protected possession politely.

Mistakes punished instantly.

Rio misplaced one pass.

Immediately—

Crunching shoulder.

Hard contact.

Legal.

Painful.

The older midfielder barely looked at him.

"Wake up, kid."

No apology.

No kindness.

Good.

Reality.

Needed reality.

Rio reset mentally.

Faster.

Must process faster.

Adapt.

Always adapt.

The first scrimmage arrived quickly.

Rio placed central midfield.

Not attacking role.

Interesting.

Test of control.

Good decision.

Harder.

Older striker muttered nearby:

"That's the wonder kid?"

Laughter.

Rio ignored it.

Whistle.

Game started.

And immediately—

Disaster.

Speed overwhelmed him.

Not mentally.

Physically.

Everything happened faster.

Presses arrived sooner.

Passing windows smaller.

Contact harder.

Minute three—

Rio intercepted beautifully.

Saw the right idea instantly.

But half-second slow.

Pressed immediately.

Ball gone.

Counterattack.

Goal.

The coach didn't yell.

Worse.

He simply watched.

Expression blank.

Judging.

Rio hated blank expressions.

Ten minutes later—

Another mistake.

Read play perfectly.

Position excellent.

Touch too soft.

Older defender bulldozed through him.

Ball gone.

Rio hit the grass hard.

Breathing heavier now.

Interesting.

Frustrating.

Because mentally—

he belonged.

Physically—

not yet.

The gap mattered.

A lot.

Someone offered a hand.

Unexpected.

An older midfielder.

Dark hair.

Maybe nineteen.

"You think too much."

Rio stood slowly.

"…Excuse me?"

"You're trying to solve everything."

The player shrugged.

"Sometimes just play."

Interesting advice.

Possibly useful.

Whistle restarted.

Rio adjusted.

Simplified.

Fewer risks.

Faster decisions.

Cleaner movement.

No hero football.

Just efficiency.

And slowly—

the game stopped overwhelming him.

Not dominating.

Surviving.

Important difference.

Minute twenty-six.

Breakthrough moment.

Older striker checked deep.

Center-back followed.

Space opened.

Tiny.

Quick.

Rio saw it immediately.

One touch.

Turn.

Weighted through-ball.

Perfect.

Goal.

Silence.

Then—

Several heads turned.

Interesting.

Coach stopped writing briefly.

Also interesting.

The older midfielder smirked slightly.

"There you are."

Not praise.

Recognition.

Different thing.

Better thing.

Training ended brutally.

Rio exhausted.

Actually exhausted.

Legs heavier than usual.

Mind tired too.

Harder than expected.

Good.

Growth required discomfort.

The coach approached eventually.

Clipboard under arm.

"You drowned less near the end."

Harsh.

Fair.

Rio nodded.

"I adjusted."

"Yes."

Pause.

Then—

"You see things early."

Another pause.

"But your body isn't there."

Honest.

Correct.

"Eat more."

"Recover better."

"Get stronger."

Simple.

Then—

Unexpectedly—

"Come back next week."

Rio blinked once.

"…Seriously?"

The coach shrugged.

"Don't get excited."

"You survived."

Barely praise.

Still praise.

Rio accepted it.

Small win.

Important win.

Back at La Masia—

Messi waited.

Actually waiting.

Again pretending not to wait.

Poorly.

"You look terrible."

"Thank you."

"How bad?"

Rio sat heavily.

Long exhale.

"…Hard."

Messi blinked.

"You said hard."

"Yes."

"They're faster."

"Stronger."

"Meaner."

Messi looked weirdly relieved.

"…Good."

Rio raised eyebrow.

"What?"

"You're human."

Silence.

Then—

Rio laughed.

Actually laughed.

Unexpected.

Messi grinned immediately.

"There he is."

And somehow—

after the hardest football day in months—

the room felt normal again.

For a few minutes.

Until Rio remembered:

This was only the beginning.

The next morning, Rio woke before the alarm again.

Not because he needed to.

Because his body had started to understand something his mind already knew:

adaptation was no longer optional.

Barcelona B had exposed a gap that no academy match ever revealed.

Not talent.

Not vision.

reaction time under pressure.

He sat at the edge of his bed, staring at his hands.

Same hands.

Still fifteen.

Still too light for the level he had just stepped into.

Across the room, Messi was already awake.

Watching him.

"You didn't sleep."

Rio didn't answer immediately.

Sleep had happened in fragments.

Short, broken pieces of recovery.

Not rest.

Messi stood and threw him a bottle of water.

"You thinking again?"

Rio caught it.

"Always."

Messi frowned slightly.

"That's your problem."

Rio looked up.

Messi continued more seriously now.

"You don't stop thinking when the play stops."

Pause.

"You keep playing it."

That landed more accurately than it should have.

Rio exhaled.

"…That's how I see it."

Messi nodded once.

"Then you need more speed, not more thoughts."

Simple.

Clean.

Correct.

And somehow—

infuriating.

Because it was true.

The training ground that day felt different.

Not just harder.

Evaluative.

Rio noticed staff presence immediately.

Not loud.

Not obvious.

But positioned.

Watching.

Measuring.

Barcelona B coaches.

Academy staff.

Even someone from the first-team technical circle, standing further back near the fencing, pretending not to observe.

Rio didn't need confirmation.

He felt it.

Attention changed air pressure.

Messi noticed it too.

"You see them?"

Rio nodded slightly.

"Yeah."

Messi adjusted his boots.

"They're watching you more than me."

Rio didn't respond.

Because that part was becoming harder to ignore.

Training began with intensity drills.

Barcelona B again.

Second session.

Faster already.

Less forgiving.

Rio adjusted immediately.

Simplification.

Less risk.

Earlier decisions.

First touch direction instead of control.

Pass before pressure.

Not elegance.

Efficiency.

And slowly—

he stopped losing the ball.

Not dominating.

But stabilizing.

Stability mattered more at this stage.

A coach nearby muttered:

"He learns fast."

Another replied:

"That's the problem."

Rio heard it.

Didn't react.

Let it exist.

Mid-session scrimmage.

Rio was marked tighter this time.

Directly.

Man-to-man pressure.

Clear instruction.

Test him.

Good.

Tests meant opportunity.

But also exposure.

First few minutes—

he struggled again.

Not physically worse.

But mentally overloaded.

Pressures arriving faster than expected.

He miscontrolled once.

Immediate contact.

Hard shoulder.

Ball gone.

But this time—

he didn't fall apart.

He reset instantly.

That was new.

Important.

Messi shouted across:

"Drop earlier!"

Rio heard.

Adjusted.

Timing change.

Five percent earlier positioning.

Suddenly—

space opened again.

Not much.

But enough.

He took it.

One touch forward.

Second touch through line.

Progression.

Clean.

Controlled.

The older midfielder watching him narrowed his eyes.

Better now.

Still not enough.

But better.

Then came the moment everything shifted.

Barcelona B pressed high.

Aggressive line.

Risky structure.

Exactly what Rio had studied.

But studying wasn't enough here.

Execution mattered.

A loose pass from defense.

Interception window.

Instant decision.

Rio moved.

But so did the opposition midfielder.

Faster than before.

Physical.

Intentional.

Collision unavoidable.

Rio braced—

and got knocked sideways.

Ball lost.

Counterattack forming instantly.

But something unexpected happened.

Messi.

From deeper position.

Sprinted back.

Intercepted.

Stopped counter.

Clean tackle.

Then immediately looked up.

Not panicked.

Focused.

He saw Rio recovering.

And instead of safe pass—

he played forward.

Risk.

Trust.

Rio was still off-balance.

But he ran anyway.

Because Messi had already made the decision for him.

Pass arrived.

Slightly behind him.

Not perfect.

But intentional.

Rio adjusted mid-run.

One touch control.

Second touch release.

Through ball.

Space exploited instantly.

Goal.

Silence.

Then reaction.

Not loud.

But sharp.

Because everyone on the pitch understood:

That wasn't individual quality.

That was connection.

A system forming.

Messi jogged past Rio briefly.

"You okay?"

Rio nodded.

"…Yeah."

Messi smirked slightly.

"You're slower here."

Rio almost smiled.

"I noticed."

After training, the Barcelona B coach approached him again.

Same expression.

More curious now.

Less dismissive.

"You survived better today."

Rio nodded.

"Still not enough."

The coach studied him.

"You know that already?"

"Yes."

Pause.

"And yet you keep going."

Rio shrugged slightly.

"That's the job."

That made the coach pause.

Longer this time.

Then—

"You think like senior players already."

Rio didn't respond.

Because that wasn't a compliment.

It was a warning.

That evening, Messi didn't go to video games.

Instead, he sat beside Rio in Room 12.

Watching him stretch.

"You're changing your training again."

Rio nodded.

"Had to."

Messi leaned forward.

"You think it's working?"

Rio hesitated.

Honest answer.

"…Partially."

Messi picked up a resistance band from the floor.

"Then I help."

Rio looked at him.

Messi shrugged.

"I'm faster than you now anyway."

That was true.

Annoyingly true.

Messi continued:

"If they're stronger, we get stronger."

"If they're faster, we get faster."

Pause.

"If they're smarter…"

He looked at Rio.

"…we don't lose that part."

Rio exhaled slowly.

That last line mattered more than Messi probably realized.

Because that was the danger.

Not falling behind physically.

But losing the advantage that made everything else possible.

Vision.

Clarity.

Control.

Rio nodded once.

"Alright."

Messi smiled.

"Good."

Then added:

"Also, you owe me dinner if I make you faster."

Rio almost laughed.

"Deal."

Two days later.

Barcelona B again.

Third session.

This time—

something changed.

Rio didn't feel lost early.

Still difficult.

Still physical.

But manageable.

His adjustments were working.

Earlier decisions.

Faster release.

Cleaner positioning.

Less hesitation.

And Messi's influence showed too.

Not directly.

But in timing.

Because now—

Rio was thinking half a second ahead more often.

Not enough to dominate.

But enough to survive comfortably.

And survival at this level—

was the first real step.

During scrimmage, the older midfielder who had mocked him earlier passed by close.

"You're still thinking too much."

Rio didn't respond.

But this time—

he didn't agree either.

Because it wasn't thinking anymore.

It was recognition.

And recognition was faster than thought.

That difference mattered.

After training, the coach gave him a final look.

Less skeptical now.

More measured.

"You come back next week."

Pause.

"Same time."

Rio nodded.

"Understood."

The coach turned slightly.

Then added:

"Don't rush the first team."

That sentence hung in the air longer than expected.

Because it wasn't advice.

It was awareness.

Rio understood what it meant.

People were starting to notice.

Properly notice.

And once that happened—

nothing stayed slow anymore.

That night, back in Room 12, Rio lay awake again.

Messi asleep early this time.

Exhausted.

Improving faster than anyone expected.

Rio stared at the ceiling.

Thinking.

Not about tactics.

Not about training.

But about acceleration.

Not physical.

Career acceleration.

The envelope from Barcelona B had changed something.

Not his ability.

His timeline.

And somewhere deep in the club structure—

people had started watching him differently.

Not as a prospect.

But as a question.

And questions always demanded answers.

Eventually.

Rio closed his eyes.

One thought remained.

Speed is no longer an advantage.

It's a requirement.

And he had only just begun to learn it.

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