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Chapter 4 : The Soul Palace

After eating his fill, Arthur went back up to his room.

It was time.

He didn't know it yet, but he was about to start a journey where almost nothing would go the way he expected. Where he'd lose people he loved. Where he'd meet death more than once. A journey with no clear direction, no fixed ending, no guarantees attached to any of it.

He sat down on his bed, crossed his legs the way the protagonist of his favorite novel always did, and tried to remember exactly how it had felt when his power first woke up.

Minutes passed. Then hours.

Four hours in, Arthur felt something stir deep inside him. A slow current, almost without weight, drifting in from the air around him and seeping through his skin. This was what people had started calling mana. Once it got inside, it moved on its own, flowing toward a point just below his navel.

His dantian.

Rose had explained it to him before she left. Everyone had one, a kind of internal reservoir where refined mana settled and where a cultivation base took root. It was as important as it was fragile. Destroy someone's dantian, and they died. Survive with a broken one, and in some cases that was considered worse.

As Arthur focused on pulling in more mana, the ring on his finger activated without warning.

A torrent of mana tore through his pores all at once and rushed toward his dantian.

For a fraction of a second, it felt like everything inside him was about to collapse in on itself. Pain shot up his spine, sharp enough that his vision went white at the edges. Then something else stepped in, an energy that was chaotic and ordered at the same time, something that didn't belong to him and yet felt completely native. It swallowed the excess, steadied the flow, and started reorganizing everything from the inside out.

It didn't feel gentle. It felt like his body was being rebuilt while he was still using it.

Arthur ground his teeth and rode it out. Not just his mana, his whole body, felt lighter and sharper afterward, stronger in a way that had nothing to do with muscle. But the cost was obvious too. His shirt was soaked through with sweat. His hands wouldn't stop shaking for a full minute after the energy faded.

Just as he was about to surface from the meditation, his mind slid somewhere else entirely.

The palace in front of him was pure white, without a single blemish. It looked like marble, but felt purer than any marble he'd ever seen. Wide stairs led up to it, unhurried, and Arthur climbed them slowly, careful not to disturb the silence of the place.

At the top stood a door made of something like black gold, covered in symbols that curved and locked together across both panels, forming a circle that spanned the whole width of the entrance.

Arthur studied them without stepping closer.

There was something familiar about the shapes. Nothing he could name, but something he recognized, the way you recognize a word in a language you haven't spoken in years. They reminded him of the engravings on his ring, except older, and far more complicated.

Then the symbols started to glow.

They spun faster and faster until the door opened on its own.

"Come in."

The voice from inside was old. Not weak, not rough, nothing like that. Old the way wisdom is old, settled and vast, and when it spoke the air around Arthur seemed to answer it.

He stepped through.

The corridor beyond was lit by small round stones set into the walls, each giving off a dim blue glow. It ran maybe fifty meters. It felt endless.

Arthur kept walking.

At the far end was another door, plainer than the first but no less strange. He pushed it open without much resistance and stepped into a tall, quiet hall, not unlike the inside of a cathedral. At the far end, raised on a low platform, two figures sat on plain cushions.

They looked young. Twenty, maybe less. But they felt ancient in a way that had nothing to do with how they looked, the same quality the voice had carried, something enormous sitting just under the surface.

"Welcome, Arthur."

The woman spoke first. Her voice carried the same weight as the one that had greeted him at the door.

"Who are you. Where am I."

"Inside your soul palace," the man answered, with a smile that suggested he'd expected exactly that question.

"What is a soul palace." Arthur looked between them. "And you still haven't told me who you are."

"You don't need to be nervous," the woman said. "We'll explain everything."

She folded her hands in her lap.

"My name is Zhixu. This is Hundun." She gestured at the man beside her. "We're the personification of Order and Chaos inside you. We exist here because you're the child of both. In a sense, you made us."

Arthur wasn't sure he understood any better than before. It must have shown on his face.

Hundun spoke before he could respond.

"We were born the moment you awakened your elements, to guide you. We're not human, and we're not spirits in the usual sense. If it helps, you can think of us that way anyway."

"How exactly are you going to help me."

"We'll answer some of your questions, and guide your cultivation," Hundun said. "But understand something first. We only exist here. We can't manifest outside this palace. Not yet."

Zhixu cut back in before Arthur could ask anything else.

"Before you ask more, let me explain the fundamentals. And listen carefully to this part."

Her tone shifted. Something colder crossed her expression.

"What happened just now nearly killed you."

Arthur went still.

"Your fusion wasn't clean. It was forced. Two primordial forces that were never meant to sit in the same body, jammed together by something with enough authority to make it happen anyway. That kind of intervention doesn't come free. Not for the one it happened to."

"What does that mean, exactly," Arthur said.

"It means your power is real, and it's also a wound that hasn't finished closing," Hundun said. "Every time you draw deeply on it, your body pays for that in ways an ordinary cultivator's doesn't. What you felt just now, the pain, the shaking, that wasn't weakness. That was the actual cost showing up on schedule."

"So it gets easier from here," Arthur said. It came out somewhere between a question and a hope.

Zhixu didn't answer that gently.

"No. It gets harder. The stronger you grow, the more Order and Chaos will try to pull apart from each other again, because that's their nature. Keeping them balanced will take more effort at your next breakthrough than it did just now, and more again after that. Some realms ahead of you were built for cultivators with one clean affinity. You don't have that luxury."

She let that sit for a second.

"You are strong. Possibly stronger than anything currently walking this world. But strength that costs you blood every time you spend it is not the same thing as an advantage."

Arthur absorbed that in silence. Somewhere underneath the words, a colder thought settled in alongside them: whatever this power was, it hadn't been given to him for free, and nobody had asked if he wanted the bill.

"Understood," he said, finally. "What else do I need to know."

Zhixu produced a book from nowhere, its cover reading Chaos and Order Primordial Scripture.

"This is your cultivation technique. It was born with you and unlocked the moment you awakened. We're going to put its contents directly into your mind now, so you don't do something reckless again."

She stood, and in the same motion reappeared directly in front of him.

Up close, she was striking in a way that was hard to process. Arthur noticed it, and immediately felt a little ridiculous for noticing.

She pressed one finger to his forehead.

Information poured in, vast and organized, filling him without overwhelming him. He understood all of it at once, how mana moved through the body, what each stage demanded, what the steps built toward.

From that, he understood what had happened earlier. He'd stumbled into the first stage of cultivation: Flesh Awakening. The goal was simple in principle, saturate the flesh with mana, then break through to Meridian Opening. He guessed he was around five percent of the way there.

For most people, the first stage took up to six months.

Arthur suspected his timeline would look nothing like that. He was the child of Chaos and Order, holder of two primordial laws, running a cultivation technique ranked beyond anything he could currently measure, with a ring pushing his mana intake up by three hundred percent.

A week, maybe less, he thought.

Assuming his body didn't give out first.

Zhixu was already back on her cushion.

"How are you feeling."

"Better. Fewer questions." He paused. "The technique explains how to cultivate. It doesn't explain how to fight. What do I do about that."

"Good question," Hundun said, and for once nobody cut him off. "You have two options. Build your own techniques, or acquire existing ones. To find combat arts or spells, you go into the portals and take them off the creatures inside, or you buy them from someone who did."

He kept going before Arthur could interrupt.

"Most techniques you'll find are element neutral. Anyone can use them. How well they work in your hands depends on your affinity level. The tiers run poor, low, medium, high, complete, and one with the element." He looked at Arthur steadily. "You're at the last tier. One with Chaos and Order. Which means even without a single technique, you're already dangerous compared to almost everything you'll face."

Arthur waited to see if he was finished.

He opened his mouth to ask something else.

Zhixu got there first.

"I know you have more questions. But it's time for you to leave. You can't stay in your soul palace much longer, or—"

She didn't finish the sentence.

His vision went dark.

The hall was quiet again.

Zhixu looked over at Hundun, something close to curiosity on her face.

"What do you think of him."

"Promising," Hundun said. "But why did we have to lie to him about who we really are."

"Because the full truth would be a weight he can't carry yet." She turned her gaze toward something past the walls of the palace, something only she could see. "He's still too weak. If he knew everything now, I don't think even the ring could hide him from what's watching."

Hundun went quiet for a moment.

"You're probably right. Either way, it's done. We need to rest. Bringing him here cost more than it should have."

"Agreed." She closed her eyes and rose slowly off the cushion, floating still in the silence of the hall. "We'll see him again when he's ready."

Hundun closed his eyes as well.

The hall went silent.

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