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Chapter 1 - The Bet With The Death(The Beginning)

The Temple of Duttapukur.This is a real story that has lived in my family for generations. It comes from a remote village in the Indian state of West Bengal called Duttapukur, where my maternal home is located. My mother once heard this story from her grandmother, and perhaps her grandmother heard it from someone else before that. Like this, the story has travelled through generations.

Many such stories were told in the family, but this one still carries an unsolved and tangled mystery.

In the village stood a very old temple of Lord Shiva. The temple had been abandoned for more than fifty years(from my mother's grandmother's time). Time had almost swallowed it completely. The walls were covered with moss and mould, thick layers of dust lay everywhere, and broken stones and fallen leaves surrounded the place.

Hardly any human footprints could be seen there.

Even animals avoided the place.

People said that once a priest lived in that temple. One night, many years ago, he accidentally slipped and fell from the staircase on the second floor of the temple and died. After that incident, strange things began to happen. Villagers claimed to hear footsteps, whispering voices, and sometimes the faint ringing of a temple bell late at night.

Since then, people believed that the spirit of thepriest still wanderedinside thetemple.

No one dared to go near it after sunset.

Years passed. With time, education, science and technology started influencing the minds of the younger generation. Superstitions slowly began to fade.

Among those youths were four close friends — Anil, Sunil , Sumit and Amit .

One evening, on the night of Amavasya, when the sky was completely dark without the moon, the four friends were sitting in a small roadside tea stall, chatting and laughing. They had just returned to the village a day earlier from their hostel for vacation.

The tea shop was dimly lit by a weak yellow bulb. Crickets chirped in the distance.

Suddenly Sumit leaned forward and said quietly,

"Doyouremember the old Shivatemplenearthe banyangrove?"

The moment the shopkeeper heard those words, his face stiffened. His hands trembled slightly as he placed the cups of tea on the wooden table.

"Please … babu… don't talk about thattemple," he said in a low and fearful voice.

The boys burst into laughter.

Sunil smirked.

"Oh come on ! You people still believe inthese ghost stories?"

The shopkeeper shook his head nervously.

"Youngmen should not challenge thingsthey donot understand," he muttered.

Amit leaned back in his chair and laughed loudly.

"Ghosts? Spirits? It's all nonsense. Just fear and imagination. "

The shopkeeper did not reply. He only looked at them silently, his expression uneasy.

While returning home, Amit suddenly stopped walking.

An idea flashed in his mind.

He turned to his friends with a mischievous grin.

"Let 's make abet," he said.

Sunil raised an eyebrow.

"Whatkind of bet?"

Amit said slowly,

"Anyone whocan enter that temple tonight and lightadiyaon thesecond floor — thesame place wherethepriest died — willgetone hundred rupeesfrom me ."

For a moment, silence fell among them.

Sunil laughed loudly.

"Areyou serious? You want to bet on ghosts?"

Sumit looked uncomfortable.

"Guys… maybeweshouldn't messwiththis. Mygrandmother always said—"

"Ohstopit!" Sunil interrupted. "Youstill believe these stories?"

Amit smirked.

"Ifghosts really exist, why don't theyshow themselves?"

Sunil folded his arms and teased him.

"Thenwhy don't you go, Amit? If you're so brave."

The words struck Amit's pride.

His smile faded.

"Fine," he said firmly.

"I 'll do it."

Later that night, after dinner, the four friends met again and quietly walked towards the temple.

The path leading to it was narrow and surrounded by tall grass and ancient trees. The wind whispered through the leaves.

The temple appeared in front of them like a dark shadow against the night sky.

It looked far worse than they had imagined.

The building was cracked and broken. The entrance gate hung crookedly. Bats flew out as they approached.

The darkness inside was so thick that it almost felt alive.

The four friends stood silently.

Their faces had turned pale.

Sunil swallowed nervously.

"Amit … maybe weshould go back. I was only joking earlier. "

Amit's voice trembled slightly.

"No. I havealready said I willdoit."

Sumit grabbed his arm.

"Please don't go. Something doesn't feelright."

But Amit pulled his hand away.

"I'll beback in five minutes. "

He lit a small diya and slowly stepped inside the temple.

The air inside was cold and damp.

Every step echoed through the empty hall.

He felt as if someone was watching him from the darkness.

A strange chill brushed against his neck.

"Just thewind…" he whispered to himself.

His heart was beating faster now.

He climbed the broken staircase carefully.

The wooden steps creaked under his weight.

When he reached the second floor, the silence felt heavy, almost suffocating.

With trembling hands, Amit placed the diya on the floor and lit it.

The small flame flickered weakly.

Suddenly…

He felt warm breath near his ear .

Amit froze.

Someone whispered.

Or perhaps… something.

His blood ran cold.

He turned around quickly.

No one was there.

"Who's there?" he shouted, his voice shaking.

The darkness remained silent.

Terrified, he rushed toward the staircase.

Then suddenly—

He felt a sharp tug from behind.

As if someone had pulled his shawl(this incident have happened at the time of winter).

Amit screamed.

He lost his balance.

And in the next moment—

He slipped from the staircase.

His body crashed violently against the stone floor below.

Outside, his three friends heard the sound.

But fear held them frozen.

They stood there all night, too terrified to enter.

Slowly, the darkness faded.

The sun began to rise.

Morning light spread across the village.

Finally gathering their courage, the three friends entered the temple.

Their hearts pounded as they walked inside.

Then they saw it.

Amit's lifeless body lying on the cold floor.

His eyes were wide open… red… frozen in terror.

But what they saw next made their blood freeze.

On the staircase above…

Amit's shawl was hanging from a rusty iron hook

As if someone had pulled it… and held it there.

The three friends looked at each other in horror.

None of them spoke.

Because deep inside…

They all knew something was terribly wrong.

And to this day…

No one in Duttapukur dares to enter that temple at night.

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