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The evil knocks

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Chapter 1 - Unnamed

Chapter 1: The Light in the Empty House

Ritwik had always loved silence.

That was exactly why he rented the old house at the edge of the village. It stood alone beside a narrow dirt road, surrounded by tall bamboo trees that swayed and whispered whenever the wind passed through them.

The villagers had warned him.

"Don't stay there after dark," the tea stall owner had said.

Ritwik had laughed. "Why? Ghost?"

The old man didn't laugh back.

But Ritwik didn't believe in such things. He worked as a freelance writer and wanted a quiet place to finish his novel. The rent was cheap. Too cheap, actually.

That should have been his first warning.

The first night was peaceful.

Ritwik unpacked his laptop, arranged a small table near the window, and started typing. Outside, the wind rustled the bamboo leaves. Occasionally a dog barked somewhere far away.

By midnight, he was tired.

He shut the laptop and went to bed.

At exactly 2:17 AM, he woke up.

Not because of a dream.

Because of a sound.

Tap… Tap… Tap…

It sounded like someone knocking on wood.

Ritwik sat up in the darkness. The only light in the room came from the pale moon outside.

He listened carefully.

Tap… Tap… Tap…

The sound was coming from the other room.

He frowned.

"Probably rats," he muttered.

The house was old after all.

Still, something about the sound felt… deliberate.

Like someone knocking slowly.

Waiting.

Ritwik grabbed his phone and turned on the flashlight.

The beam cut through the darkness as he stepped into the hallway.

The house felt colder now.

The knocking had stopped.

He walked toward the small room at the end of the hall.

The door was slightly open.

But he was sure he had closed it earlier.

He pushed the door slowly.

Creeeaaaak.

The room was empty.

Only dust, broken furniture, and spider webs.

Ritwik sighed with relief.

"See? Nothing."

He turned to leave.

Then suddenly—

Tap.

Right behind him.

He froze.

The sound had come from the wall.

Slowly he turned around.

There was nothing on the wall except old faded paint.

But then—

Tap… Tap… Tap…

Now the sound was coming from inside the wall.

Like someone trapped behind it.

Ritwik's throat went dry.

He stepped back.

The tapping stopped.

Silence returned.

After a few seconds he laughed nervously.

"Pipes," he whispered to himself.

"Yes… old pipes."

Still uneasy, he returned to bed.

But sleep didn't come easily.

The next morning he went to the village tea stall.

The old man there looked at him carefully.

"You stayed the night?"

"Yes."

"Did you hear anything?"

Ritwik hesitated.

Then he shrugged. "Just some knocking."

The tea stall suddenly became quiet.

The old man sighed slowly.

"That house… twenty years ago… a woman lived there."

Ritwik leaned forward.

"What happened?"

The old man spoke softly.

"One night she disappeared. The police searched everywhere."

"They never found her."

Ritwik asked, "Then?"

The old man looked directly into his eyes.

"They found tapping sounds in the walls for three nights after that."

A cold feeling crawled down Ritwik's spine.

"Eventually… the sounds stopped."

"Why?" Ritwik asked.

The old man whispered.

"Because the wall was opened."

Ritwik swallowed.

"And?"

The old man didn't answer immediately.

Finally he said quietly—

"They found scratch marks from inside."

That night Ritwik decided something.

He would record the sound.

At 2:17 AM, the tapping returned.

Tap… Tap… Tap…

But this time it sounded closer.

Not from the other room.

From the wall beside his bed.

Ritwik slowly turned his head.

The flashlight trembled in his hand.

The wall was silent.

For a moment he felt relieved.

Then suddenly—

A faint crack appeared in the paint.

Something moved beneath it.

And from inside the wall…

A slow whisper emerged.

"Let… me… out…"

Ritwik stopped breathing.

The tapping began again.

But now it wasn't tapping.

It sounded like fingers scratching.

Trying to break through.

And suddenly—

A thin pale hand started pushing out from the crack in the wall.

Chapter 2: The Hand in the Wall

Ritwik could not move.

The thin pale hand pushing out from the crack in the wall looked almost human… but something about it felt terribly wrong.

The skin was grey. The fingers were long and twisted, with nails that looked like they had been scraping against stone for years.

Scratch… scratch… scratch…

The sound filled the room.

Ritwik's heart was pounding so loudly he could hear it in his ears.

"No… this isn't real," he whispered.

He shut his eyes tightly.

When he opened them again, the hand was still there.

And now the crack in the wall was getting wider.

Small pieces of plaster began to fall onto the floor.

The hand slowly pushed out farther… followed by another finger… then another.

Ritwik suddenly jumped off the bed and ran to the door.

He pulled it open and rushed outside the house.

The night air was cold and silent.

The bamboo trees moved slowly in the wind, making a dry whispering sound.

Ritwik bent forward, breathing heavily.

"What the hell is happening…"

He looked back at the house.

All the lights were off.

Everything looked normal.

Too normal.

For a moment he thought maybe he had imagined everything.

Maybe he had been half asleep.

But then—

From inside the house…

He heard it again.

Tap… Tap… Tap…

But this time the sound was louder.

More desperate.

Almost angry.

Ritwik shook his head.

"No. I'm not going back in there tonight."

He spent the rest of the night sitting outside on the old wooden bench near the gate.

Every few minutes the tapping echoed from inside the house.

It continued until sunrise.

Then suddenly…

It stopped.

The next morning Ritwik went straight to the tea stall again.

The old man was already there.

He looked at Ritwik's pale face and asked quietly,

"You heard it again… didn't you?"

Ritwik nodded.

"There was a hand."

The old man's eyes widened.

"A hand?"

"Yes… coming out of the wall."

The old man looked deeply disturbed.

After a long silence he said,

"You should leave that house."

"But I want to know what's inside the wall," Ritwik replied.

The old man shook his head slowly.

"Curiosity kills people in that house."

Ritwik leaned closer.

"Tell me everything."

The old man sighed and began speaking.

"Twenty years ago, the woman who lived there was named Madhuri."

"She lived alone after her husband died."

"People said she slowly went mad."

Ritwik listened carefully.

"Sometimes villagers heard her talking to someone inside the house… even though no one else was there."

"Then one night she disappeared."

"The police came."

"They searched the entire house."

"They found nothing."

Ritwik asked quietly, "Nothing at all?"

The old man nodded.

"Until the tapping started."

"For three nights, people heard someone knocking from inside the walls."

"The police finally broke one of the walls open."

Ritwik's chest tightened.

"What did they find?"

The old man lowered his voice.

"They found a small hidden space."

"And inside it…"

He stopped speaking.

"Inside what?" Ritwik asked impatiently.

The old man whispered,

"They found another wall."

Ritwik frowned.

"What do you mean?"

"It looked like someone had sealed something deeper inside."

"Like a second chamber."

"But the police never broke that wall."

"Why?" Ritwik asked.

The old man's hands trembled slightly.

"Because the scratching suddenly stopped."

"And after that… no sound ever came again."

That evening Ritwik returned to the house.

The place felt heavier now.

As if the air itself was watching him.

He walked slowly into the bedroom.

The crack in the wall was gone.

Completely gone.

The wall looked perfectly normal.

No marks.

No damage.

Nothing.

Ritwik stepped closer.

"This is impossible…"

He touched the wall.

Cold.

Very cold.

Then suddenly—

Tap.

Right under his hand.

Ritwik jerked his hand back.

Another sound came.

But this time it wasn't tapping.

It was breathing.

Slow.

Wet.

Breathing.

From inside the wall.

Ritwik felt frozen.

Then a soft voice whispered again.

Closer this time.

Right beside his ear.

"Why… didn't… you… open… it…"

Ritwik slowly turned his head.

No one was there.

But the wall began to crack again.

Long dark lines spread across it like veins.

And something inside the wall started pushing outward.

But this time…

It wasn't just a hand.

It was a face.

And the eyes opened.

They were staring directly at Ritwik.

And suddenly the face smiled