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Chapter 3 - The fissure in the sky

Jean chewed his pancake slowly, his mind still lingering on that strange moment—that brush of something against his thoughts. But the feeling had faded, and breakfast was breakfast, and life moved on.

"If I forgot, then it wasn't important" Jean thought.

His mother finally sat down with her own plate, sliding into the chair beside his father. The kitchen felt complete now, all five of them gathered around the table like they did every morning.

"Uncle Eugene is coming by today," Jean's mother said, pouring syrup on pancakes. "He mentioned it yesterday."

Jean perked up slightly. His uncle—his father's younger brother—was always a welcome presence. Different from his father's quiet steadiness, Uncle Eugene was loud, laughing, the kind of man who filled a room with stories and warmth. Jean had always liked him.

"I'll wash up," Jean said, standing with his empty plate.

'I will finish the game today! For sure!'

He was at the sink, scrubbing, when the doorbell rang.

His sister bolted from the table—always eager to be the one to answer—and a moment later, Uncle Eugene's voice boomed through the hallway.

"Morning, little Angel! Where's my favorite niece?"

"I'm your only niece!" Julie giggled.

"Exactly! Makes it easy to have favorites!"

Jean smiled, drying his hands as his uncle strode into the kitchen. Eugene was built like his elder brother—solid, present—but where Jean's father was calm water, Eugene was a river, always moving, always flowing.

He greeted everyone with quick hugs, ruffled Jean's golden blonde hair and his brother's, then waved off Jean's mother when she offered him food.

"Thanks… but I'm stuffed, Emily, absolutely stuffed. Ate at that diner downtown and I'm pretty sure they're trying to kill me with portion sizes." He patted his stomach. "Worth it, though."

Jean's father chuckled. "Sit anyway. Keep us company."

Eugene pulled up a chair, and soon the two brothers were deep in conversation. Jean tried not to listen—it felt like eavesdropping—but the kitchen was small, and their voices carried.

Jean wondered for a moment.

'What are they talking about?'

"...heard about that tomb," Eugene was saying. "Alexander Kane. You know him?"

Jean's father shook his head. "Only from the news. Seems like a big deal."

"Bigger than they're telling," Eugene said, lowering his voice slightly. "I've got a friend in the geological survey. Says the readings from that site are... weird. Impossible, almost."

"Weird how?"

Eugene was about to open his mouth to answer—

The ground suddenly moved.

Not shook. Moved. Like the Earth itself had taken a breath and shifted position. The kitchen windows rattled. A cup tipped over, spilling coffee across the table. Jean grabbed the counter to steady himself, his heart suddenly hammering.

Jean recoiled, his mind racing.

'A earthquake? At a time like this?'

Everyone was frozen for a heartbeat. Then his father was moving.

"Outside. Now."

They moved as a unit—mother grabbing the little girl's hand, father scooping up the younger brother, Jean and Uncle Mark following close behind. They burst through the front door and joined the chaos already unfolding on their quiet street.

The shaking subsided slowly.

Neighbors stood in clusters, pointing upward. Phones were out, cameras recording. And some were watching the news regarding the tomb.

And then Jean saw why… Why did the ground move.

The sky was cracked.

A massive fissure split the azure blue, stretching from one horizon to the other like a wound that hadn't quite opened. It pulsed faintly, edges shimmering with something that hurt to look at—not light, not darkness, but something in between.

"A stitch," Jean whispered. "It looks like a stitch."

His mother pressed close to his father, her face pale. "What is that? What's happening?"

His father pulled her tighter, but Jean saw it—the uncertainty in his eyes, the fear he was trying to hide. "It's fine. The government and the army will—they'll do something. They have to."

"But what could the government do?" Jean's mother's voice cracked. "That's beyond human logic. Beyond—"

The sky cracked open.

The sound came first—a deafening, world-ending scream of reality tearing apart. Jean clamped his hands over his ears, but it didn't help. The sound was inside his head, inside his bones, inside everything. His siblings cried out. His mother screamed.

And from the wound in the sky, things began to fall.

Jean didn't see them clearly—none of them did. Just shapes, dark against the brightness, tumbling from the rift like seeds from a broken pod. Some fell fast, plummeting to earth. Others flew—flew—on wings that shouldn't exist, spreading across the sky like a plague.

"Inside!" his father roared. "Everyone inside, NOW!"

They stumbled back into the house, slamming the door, huddling in the hallway away from windows. The sounds outside were chaos—screaming, crashing, the blare of car alarms and distant sirens. Jean's mother clutched his sister. His father held his brother. Jean pressed against Uncle Mark, both of them breathing too fast.

Then, silence.

Not complete silence—there were still sounds, distant and wrong—but the immediate chaos outside their door seemed to fade. The ground stopped trembling. The screaming moved further away.

Minutes passed. Or hours. Jean couldn't tell.

Finally, his father crept to the door and slowly opened it.

"The rift is gone," he said softly. "It just... closed."

They emerged slowly, one by one, into a world that had fundamentally changed.

The sky was clear again—blue and innocent, as if nothing had happened. But the street was littered with debris, with overturned cars, with things Jean couldn't identify and didn't want to. In the distance, sirens wailed. Police. Ambulances. The sounds of a city trying to understand what had just happened.

Then a strange shadow fell upon him.

Jean felt it before he saw it—a darkness that blotted out the sun, a presence so vast it made the air itself feel heavy. His skin prickled. His breath caught. Every instinct screamed at him to run, to hide, to not look up.

But he looked.

And his world shifted.

'No! It can't be! Right?' Jean mind juggled on it.

Up above in the azure sky a creature was slowly hovering in one place, it was massive—impossibly, terrifyingly massive. Its wings spanned wider than their house, it spanned over meters, wider than anything had a right to be. Its body was a nightmare of feathers and bone, its head a long, terrible beak that could crush a car, tear through a bus like paper. Its claws, hanging beneath its body, were each the size of a person.

It was descending. Toward them.

Jean's mother screamed. His sister buried her face in her shoulder. His brother froze, staring.

His father found his voice first.

"RUN!"

They ran towards the house.

His mother grabbed his sister, clutching her tight. His father seized his brother, lifting him despite the boy's weight. Jean's hand was caught by someone—Uncle Eugene—and then they were moving, sprinting towards the house.

But Jean couldn't stop looking.

He ran, but his head turned, his eyes fixed on the creature… but then it landed in front of their home and stood in front of them too. It was ancient. Impossible. A ghost made flesh. Its wings folded against its body, and it stood there—taller than the houses on either side—its massive head turning slowly, surveying the neighborhood and then them.

They quickly started sprinting away from the house, away from the monster, away from everything.

And in that moment, all the posters on his walls, all the figurines on his shelves, all the years of quiet fascination crystallized into a single, terrified whisper.

"Quetzalcoatlus..."

Uncle Eugene's arms wrapped around him, lifting him, carrying him faster. Jean watched over his uncle's shoulder as the creature—the pterosaur, the giant of the Cretaceous—turned its massive head toward them.

Their eyes met.

And Jean understood, with terrible certainty, that the world he had known was gone.

Nothing would ever be ordinary again.

A terrible Shriek escaped from the creature's terrifying maw, it felt like a literal Demon had descended upon the land. And the end was near.

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