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Chapter 5 - Chapter 5

The third assessment arrived with less anticipation.

Improvement had become routine.

The ranking board shifted predictably now.

Top remained top. Middle rearranged. Bottom struggled.

The stone pillar stood in the courtyard.

Unchanged.

Unmarked.

Outer disciples lined up as before.

Instructor Han stood beside it.

His expression gave nothing away.

Several disciples demonstrated steady growth.

Light rose higher than before.

Some even drew brief approval nods.

Zhao Rui's turn came.

His silver column surged clean and bright.

Stable. Confident. Controlled.

Five breaths this time.

Whispers followed after he stepped back.

He did not acknowledge them.

Names continued.

When Shen An's name was called, few eyes shifted.

His previous assessments had established expectation.

He stepped forward.

Placed his palm against the stone.

His strand had grown heavier.

Still small.

But dense enough now that guiding it required intention.

He circulated once.

The strand folded inward as usual.

Then touched the pillar.

A dim glow formed.

As before.

Low. Contained. Unimpressive.

Three breaths passed.

Four.

The glow did not rise.

It did not expand.

It sank.

As though pressing into the pillar itself.

Then—

A faint sound.

Soft.

Almost mistaken for settling stone.

Tick.

Several disciples frowned slightly.

Instructor Han's eyes sharpened.

The glow faded.

Shen An withdrew his hand.

Nothing dramatic had occurred.

No flare. No surge. No visible anomaly.

The elder stepped closer to the pillar.

Ran his fingers lightly along its surface.

There.

Near the base—

A thin line.

Barely visible.

Like a strand of hair etched into stone.

A fracture.

Small.

Clean.

Not explosive.

Not spreading.

But new.

The courtyard fell into a silence that felt different from before.

Instructor Han did not look at Shen An immediately.

He examined the pillar first.

Pressed his palm to it briefly.

The stone remained stable.

No Qi turbulence.

No backlash.

After a moment, he spoke.

"Assessment complete."

No commentary.

No alarm.

But his voice carried sharper edges.

Ink marked the slate.

"Low-grade root," he said as always.

A pause.

"Stable."

Shen An stepped back.

The board was updated.

His position did not change.

The fracture remained.

Thin. Unobtrusive. Unexplained.

Training resumed.

Whispers remained restrained.

Most assumed the pillar had worn naturally.

Stone cracked over time.

That was not unusual.

Only Instructor Han remained still longer than necessary.

After dismissal, he stayed behind.

Alone in the courtyard.

He knelt beside the pillar.

Placed his palm where Shen An's had rested.

Closed his eyes.

The stone resisted outward force easily.

Brightness did not trouble it.

Expansion did not disturb it.

But pressure—

Pressure applied inward—

Left marks.

He opened his eyes slowly.

Compression.

At six.

Without guidance.

Without technique.

A hairline fracture.

Not from strength.

From density.

Instructor Han rose.

His gaze shifted briefly toward the lower dormitories.

Toward a room near the bottom of the rankings.

The mountain did not react loudly.

But it had been touched differently.

That night, Shen An circulated as usual.

He did not know about the fracture.

He did not sense alarm.

He guided the strand inward.

It felt heavier than before.

Not larger.

He rested it carefully.

Small.

Dense.

Still.

Outside, the wind brushed across stone.

Inside, something that should have expanded—

Was beginning to sink.

And stone remembered pressure.

The pillar was gone the next morning.

In its place stood an empty space in the courtyard.

Outer disciples noticed immediately.

Whispers moved through the rows.

"Maintenance." "Wear." "Routine replacement."

No official explanation was given.

Training continued as usual.

Stance. Breath. Circulation.

But Instructor Han's gaze passed over Shen An more often.

Briefly. Unobtrusively.

Three days later, a new object arrived.

It was not stone.

It was darker.

Metallic. Smooth. Waist-high like the previous pillar, but veined faintly with silver lines.

Two inner disciples carried it carefully.

Instructor Han stood beside it.

"This artifact measures foundation depth," he said.

"Not brightness."

The courtyard quieted instantly.

Depth.

The word carried different weight.

"Same procedure," he continued.

"One circulation."

The line formed.

The first disciple stepped forward.

Palm to metal.

A faint glow surfaced along the silver veins.

Shallow. Even.

Recorded.

Another followed.

Brighter lines.

Still near the surface.

When Zhao Rui approached, several disciples watched openly.

He placed his palm upon the artifact.

Silver veins lit sharply.

The glow extended deeper than previous disciples.

Clear. Strong. Reaching inward several visible layers before stabilizing.

A low murmur followed.

Instructor Han recorded without expression.

"High-grade root. Solid depth."

Zhao Rui stepped back.

His gaze remained forward.

Names continued.

Shen An waited.

He felt no shift in breath.

No tension in his chest.

When called, he stepped forward.

The metal felt colder than stone.

He guided his strand once.

As always.

Folded inward.

Condensed.

Then touched the artifact.

For a moment—

Nothing.

Then—

A dim glow appeared along the outermost silver vein.

As expected.

Low-grade.

But the glow did not spread outward.

It moved inward.

Slowly.

Silently.

The first layer illuminated faintly.

Then the second.

Then—

A third.

Whispers rose before discipline suppressed them.

The glow did not brighten.

It deepened.

Layer by layer.

The silver lines beneath the surface shimmered as the strand pressed downward.

Not expanding.

Descending.

Instructor Han's expression did not change.

But his hand tightened slightly around the slate.

The glow stopped at the fourth inner vein.

Not explosive. Not blinding.

Just deep.

Then it settled.

Held.

Five breaths.

Six.

Perfectly stable.

The light did not flicker.

Did not waver.

It simply existed far beneath where others had reached.

Shen An withdrew his hand.

The glow faded from the surface.

The courtyard was silent in a way it had not been before.

Not impressed.

Not celebratory.

Confused.

Instructor Han spoke calmly.

"Low-grade root," he said.

A pause.

"Unusually dense foundation."

Ink marked the slate.

Shen An stepped back.

His position on the ranking board did not change.

Depth was noted.

Ranking was based on stage advancement.

Brightness still ruled progression.

But something had shifted.

Several older disciples glanced at him now.

Not with admiration.

Not with hostility.

With reassessment.

Zhao Rui's gaze passed briefly over Shen An for the first time.

Not lingering.

But not ignoring.

Measurement had occurred.

That night, in his stone room, Shen An circulated once more.

The strand felt heavier than before.

As though the descent had carved space.

Not larger.

But deeper.

He guided the strand inward.

It settled further than before.

Lower.

More compact.

Outside, ambition still rose like flame.

Inside, something continued to sink like weight.

And weight, unlike flame—

Did not flicker.

After the depth assessment, nothing changed publicly.

Rankings remained brightness-based.

Access privileges remained unchanged.

Zhao Rui still entered the inner chamber twice weekly.

Shen An still received the smallest portion of spirit rice.

But internally—

Something was different.

The strand no longer felt like a thread.

It felt like a bead.

Small.

Dark.

Heavy.

When he guided circulation, it resisted movement.

Not unstable.

Not fractured.

Simply compact.

As if it no longer wished to travel the old pathways.

During stance training, Shen An's legs trembled earlier than before.

Not from weakness.

From weight.

His center of gravity felt denser.

Instructor Han noticed.

Said nothing.

That night, Shen An swallowed his three grains.

The warmth descended as usual.

He guided it inward.

The bead absorbed it.

There was no outward growth.

No widening of meridians.

The bead tightened.

Pressure formed.

Subtle at first.

Then unmistakable.

A quiet heaviness settled in his lower dantian.

Not pain.

But fullness.

Like a container reaching capacity.

He slowed his breath further.

The pressure did not dissipate.

It increased.

Not chaotically.

But steadily.

He did not panic.

He did not force expansion.

He allowed the compression to continue.

The bead darkened.

Denser than before.

The air around him felt thinner.

As if nearby Qi was being drawn inward passively.

Not pulled.

Not seized.

Simply absorbed by gravity.

Across the room, another disciple coughed during hurried circulation.

The sound felt distant.

Muted.

Shen An's awareness narrowed inward.

The bead compressed once more—

Then—

Shifted.

Not outward.

Not upward.

Inward.

The pressure vanished instantly.

In its place remained something smaller.

But unmistakably different.

Where there had been a compressed mass—

Now there was a core.

Stable.

Silent.

Self-contained.

Not a strand.

Not a bead.

A point.

Perfectly still.

Qi flowed toward it naturally.

Without guidance.

Without effort.

Shen An opened his eyes.

He did not breathe harder.

He did not gasp.

He simply observed.

The core remained.

Tiny.

Dense beyond measure.

He guided a cautious circulation.

The Qi moved smoother than before.

Meridians felt clearer.

Less friction.

As though pathways had adjusted subtly to the new center.

No surge. No explosion.

Just alignment.

In his quarters, Instructor Han paused mid-step.

He felt it.

Not a flare.

Not brightness.

But a drop.

Like something settling deeper within the mountain.

His gaze shifted toward the dormitories.

He did not move.

He simply waited.

The sensation stabilized quickly.

Contained.

Controlled.

No backlash.

No instability.

Instructor Han exhaled slowly.

At six years old—

Forming a stable core fragment without expansion was unheard of in the outer court.

It was not a breakthrough stage.

Not officially.

But it was foundation transformation.

And foundation determined ceiling.

Shen An lay down afterward.

He did not test limits.

He did not attempt a second circulation.

He closed his eyes.

The core remained.

Small enough to overlook.

Heavy enough to endure.

Outside, the mountain stood unmoved.

Inside, something had taken shape that did not seek height—

But depth.

And depth did not announce itself.

Morning training remained unchanged.

Stance. Breath. Single circulation.

But something subtle had shifted since the new artifact assessment.

Ambition had sharpened.

Instructor Han's instruction was simple:

"Those ranked top five may attempt a second circulation under supervision."

A ripple passed through the courtyard.

Second circulation.

Permission.

Controlled.

Zhao Rui stepped forward without hesitation.

He sat.

Closed his eyes.

His first circulation was smooth.

Silver Qi moved cleanly through established pathways.

He completed it.

Without pause—

He began the second.

The flow was faster.

More confident.

The air around him felt slightly charged.

Several disciples watched discreetly.

Shen An did not.

He completed his single circulation as usual.

Stopped.

The core within him remained still.

Halfway through Zhao Rui's second cycle—

His breathing tightened.

Only slightly.

The Qi accelerated near his chest meridian.

Too eager.

A faint tremor ran through his shoulder.

Instructor Han's voice cut in immediately.

"Slow."

Zhao Rui adjusted.

But momentum had already built.

The Qi struck a narrow channel too forcefully.

A brief distortion rippled outward—

Invisible to most.

Not to Instructor Han.

Zhao Rui exhaled sharply.

The circulation broke.

Qi scattered lightly within his meridians.

Not enough to injure.

But enough to sting.

His eyes opened.

Composed.

Yet not flawless.

Instructor Han placed two fingers lightly against Zhao Rui's back.

Redirected flow.

Stabilized.

"Your vessel is not yet ready for that speed," he said calmly.

Zhao Rui nodded once.

Training resumed.

But the courtyard atmosphere felt different.

Perfection had shown limitation.

Controlled.

Corrected.

But seen.

That night, whispers were softer than usual.

"He pushed early." "Still stronger than anyone." "He'll succeed next time."

Respect remained intact.

But untouchability had thinned.

Shen An sat on his mat.

Three grains dissolved.

He guided the warmth inward.

The core absorbed it effortlessly.

He did not attempt a second circulation.

He did not feel tempted.

Because for him—

There was no second to attempt.

The core did not move along the old pathways anymore.

It rested.

Drawing Qi inward naturally.

Without strain.

Without surge.

He felt the mountain's Qi drift toward him faintly.

Not pulled.

Not forced.

Simply settling where gravity allowed.

He opened his eyes slowly.

Across the room, Zhao Rui sat in meditation longer than usual.

Refining.

Correcting.

Adjusting.

Flame stabilizing after flicker.

Shen An lay down quietly.

His path did not seek speed.

And for the first time—

Speed had revealed cost.

Instructor Han remained awake longer that night.

He recorded two observations on the slate:

Zhao Rui – rapid growth, minor instability.

Shen An – minimal growth, abnormal density, zero deviation.

He closed the slate.

The mountain favored neither.

But it remembered both.

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