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Chapter 1 - 'kale dophar ka snata' chapter -1

Sahar mai rehne wala ek ladka 'surya' apne dada ji ke maut ke baad unke ghar 'santi gram' jata hai .

Waha ke logo ka kehna tha ki uske dada ji ki maut budhape ke karan hua h, lekin Surya jab us ghar mai ja kr waha ke saman ko dekhta hai to usko ek dayri milti hai, jisme unhone gaon ke har ghar ke bare mai kuch ajeeb bate likhi thi .

*. Key mistery elements*

. The vanishing girl: 10 saal phle gaon ki ek ladki gayab ho gyi thi , aur uske baad se har saal usi din ek safed phool kisi n kisi ke ghar ke bahar milti h .

* The silent villages: gaon Wale Bahar walo se baat nhi karte hai or saam hote he log apne ghar ka darwaja band kr dete .

* The clock tower: gaon ka purana clock tower jo 10 saal pehle ruk gyi thi , vo acchanak raat ke 3 baje bajne lagta hai.

". Surya ghar ke Store room mein baitha hai .

Bahar barish ho rahi hai . Use ek purani cassette milti hai , jab vo use bjata hai toh usme se uske dadaji ki Aawaz aati hai . Jo keh rahe hai ki "Surya " jab tak tum ise sunoge Mai ja chuka hounga. Tum iss gaon se chale jao ..... Ye gaon khoon ka pyasa hai, tabhi acchanak koi uske darwaze pr zor se knock karta hai.. surya ki saanse ruk jati hai vah dar se kampane lagta Hai uske sanse ruk jati hai , voh daar se kampane lagta hai .

Tabhi ghar ke bahar se kutto ke rone ki aawaje aane lgti h . Thandi hawa chalne lgta hai or kisi ladki ki khusboo aati hai .

Jaise taise Surya story room main raat bitata hai . Or jese he subha hoti hai vo gaon ke logo se waha hone wali ghatnaon ke bare mai bat karne jata hai lekin waha ke log usse koi baat nhi karte. Yese hi raat din dhal jata hai . Or raat ko surya wapas jane ko sochta h .

Vo apne jeep mai baithta hai .

**Prologue: shantigram ka pahla sannata.

Raat ke do baj rahe the Charon taraf khamoshi thi itni khamoshi thi ki dur kahin bahti Nadi ki awaaz bhi kisi ke fusfusane Jaisi lag rahi thi . "Surya" ne apne Jeep ka engine band Kiya 'Shanti gram usne dhire Se kaha naam to Shanti Hai per mahaul kuchh Bhari Sa lag raha hai'

Samne uske dadaji ke do manjila Ghar khada tha purani lakadi ke darvaje aur diwaron per chadhi hui bel use Kisi purane kile Jaise Roop de rahi thi Surya Ne Jaise Hi Ghar ki dahleej per kadam Rakha usne mahsus Kiya ki koi use upar ki khidki Se dekh raha hai usne najre uthai per vahan sirf andhera tha.

Andar jaate hi mitti aur purani kitabon ki ek Ajeeb Si Mahak Ne uska swagat Kiya . Dada Ji ki maut ke bad se yah Ghar band tha, Surya ne ek mombatti jalaye Roshani failte hi usne dekha ki kamre ke bicho bich ek tape recorder rakha hai .

Usne darte darte play button ko dabaye.

Phle toh sirf shhhh - sheeee ki Aawaz aai .

Fir ek tharrat Hui buddhe ki awaaz gunji_

" Surya... Agar tum yah sun rahe ho to iska matlab hai ki mera samay pura ho chuka hai . beta , yahan se chale jao Ghar ki chabhi vahi chhod do is gaon ki mitti mein ek aisa raj dafan hai jo Aaj jaag chuka hai vah sab dekh rahe hain ...

vah tumhen bhi dekh rahe hain....

Achanak tape ruk gaya pura ghar ekadam Sunn Ho gaya tabhi ghar ke bahar lakadi ke darvaje per teen bar jor se knock or phir,

Thud . Thud. Thud ki aawaj .

Surya ka Dil jor se dhadkane Laga is ilake mein , itni raat ko bina Kisi gadi ki awaaz ke darvaje per kaun ho sakta hai ? usne himmat karke poochha, " kaun hai"?

Bahar se koi jawab nahin aaya sirf ek thandi hawa ka jhonka darvaje ki dararon se andar aaya aur Surya ki mombatti bujh gai andhere mein use sirf ek chij dikhai di _ darvaje ke niche Se khiskai gai ek safed phool ki pankhudi.

"Aage Kya Ho Sakta Hai" ?

1. Mystery Badhayein : Surya darwaza kholta hai per bahar Koi nahin hota sirf gili mitti per pairon ke nishan hote hain. Jo bijali ke kadkate samay dikhai dete Hain. vah Nishan jungle ki taraf ja rahe hain.

2. Character Entry: agale din subah Surya ki mulakat Mira Se Hoti Hai , Jo use batati hai ki dadaji pagal nahin the, vah kisi chij ki hifajat kar rahe the.

3. The Hook : Surya Ko pata chalta Hai ki uske dadaji ki maut natural nahin hui thi unke gale per Ajeeb se Nishan paye gaye the.

Chapter -2

Chai , khhra, aur ek purana gunah.

"Subah ki pahli Kiran mein jab Surya ki aankhon per daskat di, to usse ek pal ke liye laga ki raat wala hadsa sirf ek bura Sapna tha per Jaise hi uski najar jameen per padi uska Dil baith gaya_ vah safed phool ki pankhudi vahi abhi tak padi hui thi. ' murzai Hui par maujud.'

"Kaun thi wo "? Surya ne khud se puccha .

Usne ghar ka darvaja khola bahar dhundh thi, itni jyada dhundh ki samne ka rasta bhi dikhai nahi de raha tha . thand bhi itni thi ki haddiyon Tak pahunch jaaye. Surya ne apni jacket pahani aur gaon ki taraf nikala .. use kuchh sawalon ka jawab chahie tha..

Gaon ke chorahe pr ek purane chai ki dukan thi_ " meera ki chai "

Vahan se adrak aur ilayachi ki khushbu aa rahi thi , Jo thand mein sukoon dene wali thi.

" Ek kadak chai milegi"? Surya ne bench pr baithte huye puccha. Counter ke piche se ek ladki ne sar uthaya uske bal bikhare huye the aur Aankhen kafi darawani thi, vah Mera thi . usne Surya ko upar se niche tak acche se dekha vah Kisi ajnabi Ko nahi balki Kisi khatre ko pahchane ki koshish kar rahi thi.

"Sheher se aaye ho"? Meera ne chai dete huye puccha .

" Haan , mai Surya. Pandit ji ka pota : , Surya ne jawab diya.

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