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Chapter 3 - "NO ONE SEES"

The day after Gabriel's death did not arrive with mourning bells or thunder. It arrived quietly, as if the city of Bouten had already forgotten. The markets opened. The bells of the harbor chimed. The guards laughed behind polished metal masks, their medieval uniforms gleaming beneath the sun as though nothing sacred had been broken.

Lucas stood before a small, cracked mirror in a rented room no larger than a storage crate. The reflection staring back at him was not the boy who once argued about justice beneath cathedral spires. It was a stranger dressed in rough linen, sleeves rolled carelessly, shoulders slightly hunched. Dust smudged his cheek. His hair was trimmed unevenly. His eyes once restless with conviction were now quiet, emptied of light.

No one must know who I am.

He did not whisper it. The thought simply settled inside him like a law.

By the time he stepped into the streets, Lucas no longer moved like someone carrying grief. He walked like any other young laborer, a sack slung across his back, gaze lowered just enough to appear harmless. Around him, Bouten breathed with ordinary cruelty. Vendors shouted over each other. Children chased stray dogs. Coins clinked into bowls that would never be full.

When officers passed through the market, their boots striking the cobblestones with theatrical authority, the crowd bent instinctively. The uniforms resembled relics from a holy war embroidered crests, silver-threaded insignias, the emblem of Bouten stitched proudly over their chests. Their smiles, however, held something rotten. It was the kind of smile that fed on submission.

Lucas adjusted his posture, softening his shoulders, dulling his gaze. They must see me as livestock. As something too small to threaten them.

One officer paused near him, eyes drifting lazily over the sack on Lucas's back. "Good citizen," the man said, voice syrupy with false approval. "Keep it that way."

Lucas bowed slightly, a gesture practiced to perfection. Subtle. Obedient. Forgettable.

But while his head lowered, his mind did not. He marked the scar along the officer's jaw. The slight limp in his right leg. The faint scent of tobacco clinging to his armor. Every detail folded neatly into memory.

Invisibility, Lucas learned quickly, was not about hiding in shadows. It was about blending so thoroughly into the light that no one thought to question you.

He found work at the harbor within days. The docks were loud and merciless, but anonymity thrived there. Men shouted over crashing waves. Cargo shifted endlessly from ship to shore. No one cared about names as long as hands were strong enough to lift.

Lucas swept wooden planks and hauled crates without complaint. He listened more than he spoke. Conversations flowed freely among tired workers who believed themselves unseen.

"They beat a man at the east gate last week," one laborer muttered while tying rope around a shipment of salted fish. "Said he didn't bow fast enough."

"Or maybe he looked at them wrong," another replied with a bitter chuckle. "Same thing."

Lucas kept sweeping, face blank, posture loose. Inside, he recorded every word. East gate. Night patrol. Frequent violence.

Later, alone in his room, he sketched small symbols into a worn notebook. Not artistic drawings observations. Insignias. Patrol routes. Patterns of movement. He never wrote full names unless he was certain. Precision mattered. Rage was useless without structure.

Satu nama, satu kebiasaan, satu pola.

The city's cruelty was not random. It followed habits. The guards drank at specific taverns. They favored certain alleys. Some walked alone when pride outweighed caution. Others relied on predictable escorts. Power made them careless.

Lucas visited an old food stall near the western district, where the owner a woman with tired eyes and calloused hands—served broth to dockworkers. She spoke carefully at first, but grief loosened tongues.

"Many have disappeared because of them," she said quietly, ladling soup into a chipped bowl. "Families stop asking questions after a while. It's safer that way."

Lucas nodded as if he were merely another weary youth sympathizing with rumors. He did not promise anything. He did not reveal anything. His calm was convincing because it was real. Anger no longer burned outwardly; it condensed inward, becoming something colder and far more durable.

At night, Bouten's grand towers cast long shadows over narrow streets. Lucas studied maps beneath dim candlelight, marking intersections and routes in careful lines. He noted how long patrols lingered near gambling dens. Which officers removed their helmets once off duty. Which ones preferred to walk alone beneath the pretense of confidence.

He observed their weapons from a distance—the polished barrels of their classic pistols, decorative yet lethal. He did not obsess over mechanics. He observed posture. Grip. Carelessness. The way fingers sometimes hovered too loosely over triggers when arrogance replaced vigilance.

Lucas trained himself as well, though no one saw it. He practiced steady breathing until his pulse obeyed him. He learned to release tension from his jaw. To soften his gaze so that nothing about him felt sharp. Rage, if left unchecked, would expose him long before any action did.

I must look normal.

Neighbors began to greet him casually. He helped carry water buckets up narrow staircases. He repaired a loose hinge without being asked. An elderly man once clapped him on the shoulder. "You're a good kid, Lucas."

The name felt distant now, but he allowed a faint smile to surface. It was convincing enough.

Behind closed doors, the smile vanished. From beneath a loose floorboard, he retrieved a small wooden box filled with folded papers. Each page bore a name. Some were underlined. A few were circled.

They think no one is counting their sins.

Gabriel's face surfaced often in the quiet sometimes reflected faintly in window glass, sometimes standing wordlessly behind Lucas in imagination. Not accusing. Not forgiving. Simply present. A reminder of what had been taken.

Lucas did not pray. He did not seek legal justice. The law of Bouten wore the same emblem as the men who abused it. Reporting them would be like confessing to wolves and expecting mercy.

Instead, he followed.

From a distance, always from a distance.

He trailed one officer through winding alleys, never close enough to invite suspicion. He memorized the man's routine: a stop at a tavern near the north wall, a brief visit to a gambling table in the back room, a solitary walk home past a dimly lit bakery. The officer removed his gloves before entering the tavern every time, as if ritual mattered more than awareness.

Lucas bought bread from that bakery once, face expressionless, hands steady. The baker never noticed how carefully he observed reflections in the window.

Bouten's emblem loomed large upon the city walls a symbol meant to inspire loyalty. Lucas stared at it one evening, the stone cold beneath his fingertips.

I will not kneel to a law that rots from within.

His notebook grew heavier, though it contained little more than ink and paper. Patterns became clearer. Certain nights held fewer patrols. Certain districts received less attention. Certain officers trusted their reputation too much.

He closed the notebook slowly.

"One by one," he murmured within himself.

No theatrics. No declarations shouted into the sky. Just certainty.

In the marketplace, he remained a background figure carrying grain. At the docks, he remained a quiet laborer sweeping debris into the sea. To neighbors, he was polite. To shopkeepers, he was forgettable. If someone tried to recall his face, they would remember nothing distinctive—only an ordinary young man surviving like everyone else.

That was the point.

The transformation was not dramatic. It was deliberate. Lucas did not erase himself in a single moment; he dissolved gradually, allowing the city to overlook him entirely. The less remarkable he appeared, the sharper his awareness became.

By the time night settled fully over Bouten, lanterns flickering like distant stars along narrow streets, Lucas stood among a crowd watching a street performer juggle fire. Laughter rippled around him. Music drifted faintly from an open tavern door. He looked no different from anyone else—hands at his sides, expression neutral, posture relaxed.

Yet his eyes were different now.

Cold. Measuring. Patient.

Outside, he was a citizen.

Inside, he was becoming something else entirely not driven by chaos, not blinded by grief, but shaped by calculation. A quiet counterweight to corruption. A ledger that would not forget.

Bouten believed its cruelty dissolved into darkness once night swallowed the streets. It believed fear silenced witnesses. It believed obedience meant safety.

Lucas knew better.

Darkness did not erase debt. It only delayed payment.

And somewhere beneath the ordinary rhythm of the city beneath the markets, the docks, the polite smiles an ending was taking form.

For them.

One by one.

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