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Chapter 9 - Version Control

They don't say it all at once.

They layer it.

Like production.

Subtle adjustments.

Small improvements.

Strategic refinements.

By the third meeting that week, Zane understands the pattern.

"We've reworked the bridge," the producer says, sliding new lyric sheets across the table.

Zane scans them.

His original line—

I built my name from broken silence—

is gone.

In its place:

I rose above the noise they made.

Cleaner.

Broader.

Safer.

"It scans better," the producer explains. "More universal."

Universal.

He nods slowly.

"It's fine."

At rehearsal, they adjust the instrumentation.

Less distortion.

More synth.

Brighter backing vocals layered beneath his.

"Radio needs clarity," someone says.

Clarity.

He sings the revised version.

The notes land exactly where they should.

Perfect pitch.

Perfect timing.

When the final chord fades, the control room applauds lightly.

"Mass appeal," the producer says with satisfaction.

Zane steps away from the mic.

His voice echoes faintly in his own head.

It sounds like him.

But not entirely.

Interviews begin that afternoon.

Media training included.

"Keep it aspirational," the PR manager reminds him. "Less about struggle. More about evolution."

"Fans connect to resilience," she adds. "Not resentment."

He nods.

He understands branding.

He built one.

The interviewer smiles brightly under studio lights.

"So, Zane, what inspires this new chapter?"

He hears himself answer.

"Growth," he says smoothly. "I'm stepping into something bigger. More refined."

The words come easily.

Too easily.

Later, clips circulate online.

He watches one in the penthouse.

The lighting is flawless.

The tone confident.

He looks composed.

Polished.

Elevated.

He mutes the video halfway through.

That night, they send over the final mix of the single.

It's complete now.

Market-ready.

The hook is massive.

The chorus swells with engineered emotion.

He presses play.

Listens from start to finish without moving.

When it ends, silence rushes in too quickly.

He stares at the waveform on the screen.

It looks impressive.

Structured.

Layered.

Precise.

He doesn't remember writing half of it.

He remembers drafting something rougher.

Something less controlled.

He opens the old file on his laptop.

Finds the original demo.

Plays it.

The sound is imperfect.

Edges uneven.

Vocals slightly raw.

But the line—

I built my name from broken silence—

hits differently.

Personal.

Specific.

His.

He stops it halfway.

Closes the file.

The next morning, wardrobe arrives again.

A new jacket.

Sharper cut.

The stylist adjusts the lapel.

"There," she says, stepping back. "Now you look like yourself."

He almost laughs.

Does he?

He looks in the mirror.

Same face.

Same jawline.

Same eyes.

Different posture.

Different tone.

Different weight in his shoulders.

He complies.

That's the unsettling part.

No fight.

No refusal.

Just adaptation.

He tells himself it's strategic.

Temporary.

Necessary.

But when he catches his reflection in the elevator's mirrored walls—

For a split second—

He doesn't recognize the expression looking back.

Not because it's changed dramatically.

Because it's practiced.

Controlled.

Managed.

He straightens automatically.

The doors slide open.

Someone greets him with enthusiasm.

"Calder! Ready for the next step?"

He nods.

"Always."

And as he walks forward—

He feels something faint but undeniable.

Not rebellion.

Not anger.

Just absence.

Like a draft moving through a sealed room.

He is still here.

Still performing.

Still succeeding.

But piece by piece—

The version of him that wrote in broken silence is fading beneath studio polish.

And he's not sure how much longer he can hear it.

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