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Chapter 29 - Akatsuki Attack

The sky split apart above the village.

The Deva Path floated above the village, hands raised, gravity bending around him like a living storm. Stone lifted from the ground. Trees were torn from their roots. The air itself felt like it was being pulled upward.

"Planetary Devastation."

I braced myself.

Then a roar cut through the sky. Wind screamed across the plaza.

A Rasenshuriken formed in Naruto's hand, spinning so fast the air warped around it. He hurled it.

The attack tore through the sky like a comet.

The Deva Path turned too late.

The Rasenshuriken detonated against his chest in a storm of slicing wind. The sphere above the village destabilized instantly. The gravitational pull collapsed.

Chunks of earth fell back toward the ground.

The Deva Path dropped several meters, cloak flickering.

Naruto landed beside me, panting. "Not letting him destroy our home."

I nodded. "Good."

I turned back toward the forest.

Kisame grinned at me through the smoke. Samehada twitched in his hands.

Zabuza beside him. Haku moving through the ice mirrors.

Jugo's chakra had already faded.

I clenched my hand once.

Naruto followed my gaze.

"Go," he said. "You trust us to handle this?"

Naruto cracked his knuckles.

I nodded.

"Then I'll finish it."

Kisame tilted his head. "Trust is dangerous."

I stepped forward. "So am I."

Sage Mode surged through me. Nature chakra flooded my limbs. Kurama's chakra rose with it, three tails flickering behind me like burning embers.

The ground cracked under my feet.

I slammed my palm down. "Summoning Jutsu."

Smoke burst outward.

Enma appeared beside me in his staff form, eyes narrowing. "You called."

"I need reach."

He nodded. "Then swing me well."

I gripped the staff and spun it once. The air hummed. Three clones appeared beside me.

They already knew the plan. We moved.

Water exploded across the clearing as Kisame swung Samehada again.

"You hit like a whale."

Kisame grinned. "That's because I am."

Then I appeared behind him. Flying Raijin.

The staff cracked against the back of his head.

Kisame twisted instantly, Samehada swinging.

One of my clones flickered above him and hurled three marked shuriken.

Kisame batted one away. The second vanished. I appeared beside the third. The staff extended. Enma stretched the weapon instantly.

The strike slammed into Kisame's ribs.

Another teleport. Another strike. Then another. Flying Raijin turned the clearing into a blur of red, black, and blue.

One clone hurled a marked shuriken. It spun past Kisame's head.

Flying Raijin pulled me to it instantly.

I appeared above him and slammed the staff down. Kisame blocked with Samehada, sparks flying.

Another clone fired electrified water bullets. They tore through the

ground around Kisame, forcing him to dodge.

Kisame laughed. "Good. This is fun."

I flickered again, staff extending, striking him across the jaw.

He staggered.

"Not fun for you," I said.

Kisame roared and slammed Samehada into the ground, blasting a wave of chakra that forced space between us.

"You're annoying," he growled.

"Good."

Across the clearing, Zabuza stepped forward through the mist. One of my clones landed in front of him.

I lowered the staff slightly. "You have one chance."

Zabuza frowned.

"Leave the village."

He said nothing.

"Haku leaves with you," I continued. "Peacefully."

Zabuza's eyes narrowed.

"But the sword stays."

The mist shifted around him.

Zabuza looked across the burning village.

White Zetsu crawling through the streets.

Madara's Susanoo towering above the Hokage monument.

Then he laughed. "No one takes my sword."

Suigetsu appeared beside me instantly. "Then I will."

Zabuza snarled. "Over my dead body."

"That was the idea," Suigetsu said.

Zabuza charged. Steel screamed as their blades collided.

Zabuza swung with brutal force. Suigetsu dissolved into water, reforming behind him. The clone flickered in, staff cracking against Zabuza's knee. Zabuza roared and swung again.

I flickered in behind him.

"Chidori."

Lightning surged down my arm. I drove it into Zabuza's shoulder, severing his arm at the elbow. Blood sprayed across the ground.

His sword flew free. I kicked it. The blade spun across the clearing. Suigetsu caught it mid-air.

Zabuza stared at him. Suigetsu swung once.

The strike ended it. Zabuza collapsed.

Haku screamed. Ice mirrors exploded outward. Senbon rained across the clearing.

Karin blocked with her chains. Ten Ten's weapons shattered mirror after mirror. My clone flashed forward.

"Rasengan."

The sphere slammed into Haku's chest. The impact launched him through the wall of a nearby building.

The mirrors shattered. Silence fell across the clearing.

Across the battlefield, the war continued.

In the mist-filled forest, Shikamaru wiped blood from his lip.

The Second Mizukage laughed again.

"You children are entertaining."

Shikamaru's voice echoed. "Now."

Shino's insects swarmed the real Mizukage. Shikamaru's shadow pinned him. Neji struck with Gentle Fist, sealing his chakra points.

The Mizukage smirked. "Clever."

Shikamaru exhaled. "Troublesome."

Neji struck the final blow.

The Mizukage's Edo body cracked apart.

High above the village, Kakashi and Obito clashed again.

Lightning struck across the rooftops.

Kakashi's voice shook.

"Obito. Stop this."

Obito said nothing. Their blades collided.

"You were supposed to protect them," Kakashi said.

Obito's mask tilted slightly.

"You failed."

Obito's voice was cold. "You still do not understand."

Kakashi's reply was quiet. "I understand enough."

Their lightning clashed again.

Obito's mask cracked.

Kamui warped the air.

Their fight vanished into another dimension.

At the Hokage Tower, Susanoo clashed like thunder.

Madara stood calmly within his towering armor, violet chakra burning around him like a storm given shape.

Across from him, two smaller Susanoo struggled to hold him back.

Shisui's chakra burned blue as Isobu's power flowed through his Susanoo.

Beside him, Itachi's orange Susanoo stood firm, the Totsuka blade glowing faintly in its hand.

Sasuke stood just behind them, lightning crawling across his arm.

The sky darkened.

Clouds churned above the battlefield.

Shisui and Itachi shifted instantly.

Lightning split the heavens.

Sasuke raised his hand.

"Kirin."

The dragon of lightning tore down from the sky.

The impact shook the entire monument. Stone shattered. The air was filled with blinding white light.

For a moment, the battlefield disappeared inside the explosion.

Then the lightning faded.

Madara stood in the crater.

His Susanoo flickered, cracks spreading across its surface. He straightened slowly.

For the first time, his expression shifted.

"Impressive," he said.

Madara's Susanoo stepped forward.

One strike shattered Shisui's guard, sending the blue armor crashing across the rooftop.

Another swing slammed into Sasuke, hurling him through the broken stone.

Itachi stepped forward alone. Amaterasu erupted across Madara's chest. Black flames roared.

Madara walked through them. His Susanoo blade moved once.

The strike pierced straight through Itachi.

Silence fell across the rooftop.

Sasuke stared. "Itachi."

Itachi turned his head slightly. His eyes found Sasuke.

He smiled.

Madara struck again.

The Susanoo blade sent Itachi crashing through the rooftop.

Something inside Sasuke broke.

His chakra erupted violently.

The Mangekyo Sharingan formed in his eyes.

Madara watched with quiet interest.

"Now that," he said quietly, "is the Uchiha I remember."

The imperfect summoning was already destabilizing. His Edo form began to crumble.

He looked at Sasuke one last time.

"Good."

Then he dissolved.

Sasuke fell to his knees beside Itachi.

Back in the forest, Kisame wiped blood from his mouth.

"You really are a monster."

I raised the staff again. "You're leaving in pieces."

Before we could clash again, something changed.

Naruto's chakra moved outside the village. I felt it instantly. And another presence.

Nagato.

"Damn. I wanted to make this hurt," I grumbled

I threw six Flying Raijin kunai.

Kisame knocked five away instantly.

One buried itself in the ground behind him.

I teleported to the last kunai above him.

Kisame looked up just in time to see me descending.

Lightning surged through Enma. The staff cut straight through him.

Kisame's grin faded as his body split apart.

I looked for where Naruto's chakra shifted outside the village. Flying Raijin pulled me outside the village.

Nagato sat inside a strange machine of metal rods and wires. His breathing was shallow.

Naruto was speaking quietly. "You can still fix this."

Nagato looked at the village.

His Rinnegan softened. "I understand now."

He raised his hand. Light gathered around him. Rinne Rebirth.

The same jutsu from before. The one that would revive everyone.

Then a black hand erupted through his chest.

Nagato gasped.

Black Zetsu rose behind him. "You served your purpose."

Naruto froze, his breath catching in his throat.

Zetsu reached forward.

He plucked one of Nagato's Rinnegan from his eye.

Blood ran down Nagato's face.

I moved. The staff extended instantly. Enma pierced straight through Zetsu's head.

His body melted into the ground.

His voice echoed from the earth.

"I do not need every beast."

The ground swallowed him.

"Only enough chakra."

He vanished. Nagato collapsed. Naruto caught him. Too late.

Nagato whispered, "Do not lose hope."

He removed his remaining eye, reaching out for one of us to take.

I placed my hands over his, taking his eye.

Then he went still.

"You can rest now," I sighed.

A roar echoed from the village wall.

I flickered back.

The Third Raikage slammed Han through the stone again.

Han struggled to stand. Steam poured from his armor.

Obito appeared behind him.

Kamui warped the air. The Raijin mark vanished.

Han reached toward me weakly.

"Menma."

Then Obito pulled him into the vortex. Gone. Again.

I clenched my fists.

Kurama growled inside me.

"Enough," I whispered.

The sky cracked again.

But this time, the sound was different. Softer. Hollow. The chakra holding the Edo Tensei together flickered like dying embers.

Across the battlefield, the Third Raikage froze mid‑step. His lightning armor sputtered. His body cracked like old stone.

One by one, the Edo bodies began to crumble.

Even the bodies of the Paths of Pain collapsed into lifeless shells.

The White Zetsu stopped moving. Then they retreated, melting into the earth like insects fleeing the sun.

No one chased them. No one had the strength.

The war had burned through too much already.

Smoke drifted through the streets of Konoha. Broken stone littered the roads. Several buildings had collapsed entirely. Shinobi moved slowly through the damage, helping the wounded, dragging bodies away from the fighting.

The alarms had finally stopped.

For the first time since the battle began, the village was quiet.

I stood on the broken wall where Han had disappeared.

The wind moved slowly through the smoke. Kurama was silent inside me. I looked across the village. Too many injuries. Too many losses.

But the village was still standing.

A flicker of movement caught my eye. Konan stood in the street below.

She was surrounded by several Anbu, but none of them had drawn weapons.

She wasn't resisting.

Jiraiya approached her slowly.

"Konan."

She closed her eyes. "Sensei."

He stopped a few feet away. "You came willingly."

"Nagato is gone," she said. "There is nothing left to fight for."

"You could have escaped."

"I had no reason to."

She looked toward the distant forest. "He was the last of us."

Jiraiya's shoulders lowered slightly.

"I failed both of them," he said quietly.

Konan shook her head. "No."

Her voice was calm. "You were the only one who ever tried to save us."

Jiraiya's voice softened. "There is still peace."

Konan shook her head. "Not for us."

She let the Anbu bind her hands.

Jiraiya watched her for a long moment, sadness settling across his face like dust.

Haku was alive. Barely.

He lay in the rubble of the building my clone had sent him through. His breathing was shallow. His mirrors were gone. His mask was cracked.

Karin knelt beside him, checking his pulse. "He will live."

Ten Ten exhaled. "Good."

Haku opened his eyes. "Zabuza."

Suigetsu walked past, carrying the massive sword on his shoulder. "He is gone."

Haku closed his eyes again.

He did not resist when the Anbu lifted him onto a stretcher.

Suigetsu sat on the ground where Jugo had died, staring at the empty space as if waiting for him to reappear. For once, he wasn't smiling.

Karin stood beside him, arms crossed tightly. Her eyes were red.

"He saved us," she said quietly.

Suigetsu did not answer.

I walked toward them. Karin looked up at me.

No one spoke for a while.

The wind shifted through the trees.

Suigetsu finally looked down at the sword.

"He was weird," Suigetsu muttered. "Always talking about birds and rivers and… balance."

Karin let out a shaky breath. "He was gentle."

Suigetsu nodded once. "Yeah. Gentle. Even when he was losing control."

Karin wiped at her eyes with the back of her hand.

"He smashed three training posts last week."

Suigetsu huffed softly. "Yeah."

"He said he was trying to hold back."

For a moment, none of us spoke again.

The clearing still smelled faintly of burned wood and iron.

Karin stared at the cracked ground where Jugo had fallen.

"He used to bring food after missions," she said quietly.

Suigetsu blinked. "What?"

"For the village kids," she said.

Suigetsu frowned slightly. "He never told us that."

"He didn't think it mattered."

He tightened his grip on the sword. His knuckles turned white.

"I should have been faster," he whispered. "I should have—"

"You could not have stopped it," I said quietly.

Suigetsu's shoulders slumped. "He deserved better."

"Yes," I said. "He did."

"We'll keep moving." His voice cracked just a little.

Karin's expression softened, and she stepped closer to me.

"You're not sad," she said.

It wasn't an accusation. Just an observation.

"I am," I said.

She studied my face carefully.

"You don't look it."

"I don't show it."

She looked away toward the cracked ground where Jugo had died.

"…You still feel it though."

"Yes."

That seemed to satisfy her.

Karin stepped a little closer beside me. Neither of us said anything else. For a moment, the three of us stood there, united by the same loss.

Night fell slowly over the village.

Most of the fires had finally been put out.

Lanterns glowed across the damaged streets as medics moved between the wounded.

The Hokage Monument was half covered in dust. I sat on the edge of one of the carved stone heads.

Naruto landed beside me a moment later. He had bandages wrapped around one arm.

"You feel it too?" he asked.

"Yes."

Naruto looked toward the forest.

"Sasuke left."

"I know."

We moved across the rooftops together.

Sasuke sat near the training field outside the village.

Sasuke did not look at us. His voice was quiet. "He stepped in front of me."

Naruto sat down slowly beside him.

"He always did stuff like that."

Sasuke closed his eyes. "I thought I had more time."

Naruto lay back in the grass, staring at the sky. "We never get enough time with the people we care about."

Sasuke's breath hitched.

The wind moved through the trees, soft and cold. The village lights flickered in the distance.

I sat beside him. "You are not alone."

Sasuke finally looked at us. His Mangekyo glowed faintly in the dark, reflecting the moonlight.

His voice was flat. "I told him I was stronger now."

Naruto didn't answer.

Sasuke's eyes lifted toward the sky. "I wasn't."

The Mangekyo Sharingan flickered faintly in the dark.

"I was still behind him."

The three of us sat there in silence.

"I don't know what to do now," he said.

Naruto smiled faintly. "Then we figure it out together."

Sasuke looked down at his hands. "He wanted me to be better than him."

"You will be," I said. "Because he taught you how."

Sasuke swallowed hard. "Thank you. For being here."

Naruto nudged him with his shoulder. "We are your team."

I nodded. "We are your family."

Sasuke looked away quickly, but I saw the way his shoulders loosened.

For the first time since the battle began, he let himself breathe.

For the moment, the war had stopped. But it hadn't ended.

Not even close.

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