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Vanished in Broad Daylight

marylouisescott
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Sarah Johnson disappears in broad daylight, swallowed by a crowd that saw nothing. While her sister Molly searches desperately for answers, chilling messages from an obsessive ex resurface—messages promising he would find her. Detective Brian Dawson begins to suspect this is no random abduction, but something far more calculated. As secrets unravel and trust begins to fracture, Molly and Brian are pulled into a psychological game where the predator may be hiding in plain sight.
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Chapter 1 - The Girl Who Vanished

It was nearly midnight when I finally signed off on the report that had consumed the last two years of my life.

The bullpen was quiet except for the faint hum of fluorescent lights and the distant buzz of a vending machine. Empty coffee cups littered my desk like trophies from a war I was too tired to celebrate winning.

Detective Brian Dawson. Case closed.

Across the room, Detective Jack Davis shrugged into his jacket. "You done yet?" he asked.

"Yeah," I muttered, sliding the file into the outgoing tray. "Feels strange."

Two years chasing one case. Late nights. Dead ends. One lucky break. And just like that—it was over.

I had no idea another storm was already on its way.

A few days later, I was back at my desk, halfway through a lukewarm cup of coffee, when the front doors of the station burst open.

A young woman rushed inside.

"Please! I need help!"

Jack and I stood immediately.

She looked to be in her early twenties. Blonde hair tangled in a rushed ponytail. Eyes red from crying. She was trembling so hard I thought she might collapse.

"Ma'am, slow down," I said gently. "You're safe. Sit down."

She dropped into the chair in front of my desk. I handed her tissues.

"What's your name?"

"Molly," she whispered. "My sister… Sarah. She's missing."

Missing.

That word never got easier to hear.

"Tell me what happened," I said.

"We came down here with friends from Carbondale. I went to get drinks. When I came back, she was gone. Her phone's off. She never turns her phone off. She wouldn't just leave."

Her hands shook violently in her lap.

Jack leaned forward. "Are you sure she didn't leave with someone? A friend? A guy?"

"She wouldn't," Molly insisted. "She always tells me where she's going."

"What's her full name?" I asked, pen ready.

"Sarah Johnson."

The moment the name left her mouth, something changed.

I saw it.

Jack's jaw tightened. Just for a second. A flicker. Then it was gone.

Molly noticed too.

"Do you know her?" she asked cautiously.

Jack straightened. "No. We'll do everything we can to find her."

His tone was steady—but something felt off.

Technically, Sarah hadn't been missing long enough for an official full-scale search. The 48-hour rule existed for a reason.

Try explaining policy to a terrified sister.

By morning, Jack and I were canvassing Branson Landing, retracing steps through crowds that had long since dispersed.

It had been broad daylight.

Music playing.

Families everywhere.

And somehow, Sarah Johnson disappeared without a trace.

No witnesses saw a struggle.

No screams.

No one saw her leave.

People don't vanish in crowded spaces unless one of two things is true:

They leave willingly.

Or they trust the person they leave with.

That thought stayed with me.

Later that night, I knocked on Molly's hotel room door.

There was a pause before she answered.

"Detective Dawson?"

"You can call me Brian."

Her eyes searched my face desperately. "Did you find anything?"

"Not yet," I admitted. "But something isn't adding up."

She stepped aside and let me in. The room was neat, untouched—like they'd just arrived. Like Sarah could walk back in any second.

"How could someone take her in a crowd like that?" Molly asked, hugging herself. "It doesn't make sense."

"You're right," I said. "It doesn't."

I hesitated before continuing.

"Molly… is there anyone your sister might've known here? Anyone she didn't tell you about?"

She shook her head. "No. We don't know anyone here."

I leaned forward slightly.

"Then the only other explanation is this—she may have known the person who approached her."

The color drained from her face.

"That's not possible."

"It's possible," I said gently. "And if that's true… you may be the key to helping us find her."

The next morning, my phone rang early.

It was Molly.

"I remembered something," she said. "Sarah's ex-boyfriend. Jay."

That got my attention.

Within hours, I had statements from two of Sarah's friends—Claire and Robyn.

Jay had dated Sarah nearly two years ago.

Obsessive.

Controlling.

Emotionally abusive.

When she broke things off, he didn't take it well.

"He told her she'd always be his," Claire said over the phone. "He was creepy. Threatening."

After months of harassment, Sarah changed her number and blocked him everywhere.

He disappeared.

Until she posted about the Ozarks trip.

Then the messages started again.

He knew where she was going.

He found her new number.

One message stood out:

I will see you soon.

I pinned his name to the board in my mind.

We finally had a direction.

When I returned to the hotel that afternoon, Molly had her bags packed.

"You're leaving?" I asked.

"I have to," she said softly. "I'm running out of money. I need to tell my parents. I'll go through Sarah's things at home—her laptop, her dorm room. Anything that helps."

She hesitated.

"There's something else."

"What is it?"

"The way your partner reacted when he saw Sarah's name."

My stomach tightened.

"You noticed that too?"

She nodded. "It just felt like he knew her."

Jack was private. Detached. But now that she'd said it out loud…

I had noticed it.

Still, I couldn't jump to conclusions.

"Jack keeps his emotions guarded," I said carefully. "That's all."

But even as I said it, doubt lingered.

Molly picked up her bag.

"Please find her," she whispered.

"I will," I promised.

As she drove away toward Carbondale, I couldn't shake the feeling that this case wasn't going to be simple.

Not at all.