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Chapter 11 - 11.

The quadrangle fountain sprayed its usual arcs of chlorinated water, catching sunlight in predictable prisms. Students milled about—some laughing, some rushing to class, none noticing the empty space where a forgettable freshman should have been sitting on the bench with his tattered econ textbook. The world continued spinning exactly as the novel had written it, down to the barista at the café repeating his scripted line about oat milk shortages.

Only Lin paused mid-step, her ponytail swaying as she turned toward the vacant bench. Her fingers tightened around her coffee cup. The steam curled upward, forming a shape that almost resembled a question mark before dissipating.

Behind her, Zhang Wei bumped shoulders with the basketball team captain—a moment lifted verbatim from Chapter Seven. But Zhang's victorious grin faltered when he followed Lin's gaze. He stared at the empty bench too long, his fingers twitching toward his pocket where a lighter should have been.

The campus clock struck three. A flock of pigeons scattered. Lin exhaled sharply through her nose and walked away, her heels clicking a deliberate staccato against the pavement. The surveillance camera above the bench whirred as it panned after her, its red light blinking once—twice—then freezing mid-pulse.

Inside the physics building, Professor Chen lectured to a full auditorium. His pointer tapped against Slide Twelve, where the biotech merger case study now lacked the shell company annotations Lin had scrawled in the previous iteration. The male lead raised his hand with the exact same hesitation described on page 193.

No one remarked on the empty seat by the fire exit.

At the library, Song Luying's signature silver Porsche idled illegally in the loading zone. She scrolled through her phone with one hand, the other drumming an arrhythmic pattern against the steering wheel. The screen showed her brokerage account balance: $2.8 million, precisely as Chapter Fourteen dictated. But the reflection in her rearview mirror wasn't hers—it was Lin's, standing motionless three feet behind the car, staring at the empty bike rack where he'd first spoken to her in a deleted timeline.

The barista wiped down espresso machines with methodical strokes, humming a song that hadn't been written yet. Steam curled from abandoned cups in perfect spirals. Lin's coffee cooled untouched beside the register—black, one sugar, the way she'd never taken it before the loops began. Her fingers twitched toward her wrist, where the scar no longer existed.

Zhang Wei's scholarship interview ran seventeen minutes over schedule. The dean's office clock ticked seventeen seconds backward during a blink. When the receptionist handed Zhang his signed paperwork, the ink smeared under his thumb—not from moisture, but because the letters themselves were rearranging. He didn't notice. His gaze kept drifting to the emergency exit, its red glow pulsing irregularly like a failing heartbeat.

In the biology building, Professor Chen's slides auto-advanced to a pharmaceutical case study. The classroom murmured in confusion; this material wasn't due until midterms. Chen adjusted his glasses, bewildered, until the projector flickered. The slide now displayed a flowchart no one recognized—except for Lin, who stood abruptly, her chair screeching against tile. The slide showed a Swiss bank transfer confirmation dated tomorrow, the recipient field blank where a name should have been.

Rain began falling at 3:17 PM without meteorological warning. Song's wipers carved arcs through water that evaporated before hitting the pavement. Lin walked through the downpour without an umbrella, her blouse remaining perfectly dry. The raindrops bent around her like magnetic repulsion, each droplet containing a fragmented reflection of a scene that never happened—a rooftop confrontation, a grenade counting down to zero, a hand reaching through static.

Zhang's phone buzzed with a notification from an app he didn't have installed. The screen displayed a single line of code: **[MEMORY FRAGMENT RECOVERED: 47.6062° N, 122.3321° W]**. When he looked up, Lin was already sprinting toward the abandoned physics building, her footsteps leaving no prints in the wet grass.

Song's car door slammed. The engine roared to life without a key in the ignition. As she peeled away from the curb, her rearview mirror reflected not the receding campus, but a man's face—his features blurred, his mouth forming words the mirror couldn't transmit. Song's hands trembled on the wheel. The Porsche's navigation system flickered to life, displaying coordinates that matched Zhang's notification.

Three blocks away, the campus ATM spat out an unstained $100 bill. The receipt read: **ACCOUNT CLOSED BY ORDER OF NARRATIVE INTEGRITY DIVISION**.

Lin reached the physics building's rusted fire escape just as Zhang rounded the corner, his shirt soaked with rain that hadn't touched him. Song's Porsche skidded to a halt behind them, the headlights cutting through the unnatural storm. The rooftop access door stood ajar, its hinges squeaking—not from wind, but from the pressure of a hand that wasn't there.

Lin climbed first. Her fingers left no moisture on the railing. Zhang followed, his breath visible despite the warm afternoon. Song brought up the rear, her designer heels making no sound against the metal steps.

The rooftop was empty. Exactly as it should be.

Exactly as it wasn't.

Lin walked to the edge where the grenade had rolled in another life. She crouched, pressing her palm to a patch of concrete that was slightly warmer than the rest. When she lifted her hand, the surface retained the shape of her fingers for three seconds before smoothing over.

Song exhaled sharply. "He's not coming back."

Zhang's fist clenched. "He never left."

Above them, a single satellite blinked out of existence. The last raindrop fell—suspended midair for a heartbeat—before shattering against Lin's outstretched palm. In its reflection, they all saw the same impossible thing: a brokerage statement burning with blue fire, and a hand reaching through the flames.

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